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First Draft

  1. 1. Short Scene Written By Hannah Gautrey Address Phone Number
  2. 2. 1 1. INT. LOCKER CORRIROOR - MORNING A CROWD OF ENTHUSIASTIC VOICES (O.S) FADES IN FROM BLACK: JAY enters the COLLEGE, noticing the vast amount of students taking up the locker corridor. A couple kissing catches Jays eye; he freezes In amazement when he notices the girl turning bright RED (literally). Jays attention is then stolen when a girls arm STRETCHES to a supernatural extent to reach down and grab her text book of the floor. Jay filled with excitement and awe, manages to compose himself and continues to walk down the corridor towards the college reception. .2 INT. RECEPTION - MORNING Jay swiftly walks up to the desk. JAY Um excuse me, where-- RECEPTIONIST (assertively interrupts) I'm talking to someone right now, wait your turn! Jay, feeling slightly embarrased, looks left and right in search for this 'someone' although no one appears to be present. RECEPTIONIST (In an insincere tone) Have a wonderful time at Merriweather Academy! Jay hears foot steps walking towards him, and is shoved by what seems to be an invisible human. RECEPTIONIST (CONT'D)
  3. 3. 2 NEXT! (BEAT) RECEPTIONIST (CONT'D) Good morning! You here for your room number and time table? Jay politely nods his head. RECEPTIONIST (CONT'D) Name? JAY Jay. The receptionist starts searching through some paper work until she finds the appropriate ones. RECEPTIONIST Here you go! Room 42 on the fourth floor. She passes Jay his room key and timetable. RECEPTIONIST (CONT'D) NEXT! 3. INT. HALLWAY - MORNING Jay makes his way out of the reception, and begins to walk down a long hallway, in search for a lift to assist him to his room. Suddenly, a BOY SPRINTS past Jay SNATCHING his BAG. JAY OI!
  4. 4. 3 The boy begins to slow down, and eventually comes to a holt. He holds the bag out to Jay, gesturing for him to take it back. Jay catches up and reaches for the bag. The boy DISSAPEARS, REAPPEARING at the other end of the hallway, chuckling to himself. Jay then ZAPS an ELECTRIC BOLT towards the boy, causing him to drop the bag. The boy then disappears again. MIKE (from behind Jay) Touché! Jay turns around to find the boy standing behind him. JAY (serious tone) Had your fun? MIKE (sarcastic tone) Was just helping you carry your luggage. Mike chuckles to himself MIKE We're roommates you know. JAY (sarcastic tone) Brilliant! MIKE The names Mike by the way JAY Jay. The two boys exchange a smile, and then continue walking.
  5. 5. 4 FADES OUT
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