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Test s

  1. 1. Should use connective to indicate new point<br />Should integrate point and evidence<br />Starting with ‘this’ means no comma needed...<br />Explanation is tied specifically to the purpose and audience<br />
  2. 2. Ambitious topic sentence. Best to start with specifics?<br />Clearly explores thematic idea while rooted in text. <br />Clearly explores thematic idea while rooted in text. <br />
  3. 3. Before stating consequences, should explore connotation of glove and hand clearly<br />Contrasts previous idea with clear connective. <br />