A2 First Assessment: Sep 2013 Name: Sophie
General A very good start to the year, you have created a body of work that shows clear cohesion
between the two part s of unit 3. As always your visual work is strong but you must make
sure all visual documentation is clearly visible to be able to see fully your thought processes.
Task Assessment Criteria
Feedback AO band
Leaflet AO1 An excellent leaflet that has a real professional feel
to it. The subject matter is extremely interesting
and very topical. The classic theme is one which I
think would work well at the Tate as a more
traditional gallery. Your research demonstrates
your fluent ability to glean significant information
from your chosen sources.
Practical Work and
The documentary / journey work looks as if it could
be interesting but it is very difficult for me to make
a judgement because the images are so small. I
appreciate you want to make an edit but I (and the
examiner) needs to see your visual thought
processes to be able to give you the marks that
you are due. It is essential that your visual
decisions are shown on screen.
It is rather disappointing that you have not
completed all the tasks set for you in the summer
and this is demonstrated by your lack of gallery
Good work you have made a strong start to the
practical brief that is backed up with equally as
strong contextual research.
CONTACT SHEETS MUST BE LARGER