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Avoiding Absolute Words

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Tips on avoiding absolute words in a persuasive research paper

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Avoiding Absolute Words

  1. 1. Avoiding Absolute Words and “I think that”
  2. 2. Absolute Words <ul><li>Are all inclusive </li></ul><ul><li>Claim there are no exceptions </li></ul><ul><li>Challenges the reader to find the exceptions—which then weakens your point and raises doubt. </li></ul><ul><li>Weaken credibility </li></ul>
  3. 3. What words are absolute? all everybody each always no one nobody never none every everyone
  4. 4. Revise these sentences—use less sweeping words <ul><li>All studies show that video games increase visual ability and motor development. </li></ul><ul><li>No one has proven that violent video games can directly cause violent behavior in children. </li></ul><ul><li>The media always exaggerates the truth about video games and violence. </li></ul>
  5. 5. What are some less sweeping words you could use? most many much few some usually generally often
  6. 6. Ways to Avoid “I think that” Smith supports the idea, notion,belief that The facts suggest, indicate, show that It could be suggested, claimed, proposed that Ways to avoid “ I think that”
  7. 7. Other Tips: <ul><li>Proponents, advocates, supporters—use these words when referring to people who are on your side. </li></ul><ul><li>Opponents and critics—use these words when referring to people who disagree with your side </li></ul>
  8. 8. Revise these “I think” sentences. <ul><li>I, along with many others, believe that censorship in schools infringes upon our First Amendment rights. </li></ul><ul><li>Other people, like Bradley Stephens and Alex Smith, think that when sensitive information is censored, students are protected. </li></ul>
  9. 9. As you continue to draft <ul><li>First start today’s drafting by rereading what you’ve written. </li></ul><ul><li>Check for absolute words—when you locate them—revise use less sweeping words. </li></ul><ul><li>Also revise “I think that” statements. </li></ul>

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