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Peer Feedback on Writing: A Work in Progress


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A presentation given at the BCcampus Symposium on Scholarly Inquiry into Teaching and Learning, Nov. 2014. I discuss a pilot research project on gauging the impact of peer feedback on writing over the course of multiple peer feedback sessions.

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Peer Feedback on Writing: A Work in Progress

  1. 1. TRACKING A DOSE-RESPONSE CURVE IN PEER FEEDBACK ON WRITING: A WORK IN PROGRESS BC Campus Symposium, Nov. 14, 2014 Christina Hendricks Sr. Instructor, Philosophy University of British Columbia-Vancouver Slides licensed CC-BY 4.0
  2. 2. My first SoTL project! • Co-investigator: Dr. Jeremy Biesanz, Psychology, UBC-Vancouver • Funding: SoTL Seed Fund, Institute for the Scholarship of Teaching and Learning, UBC • This is a work in progress: currently analyzing data from pilot study (2013-2014), looking for feedback for larger one (2015- 2016)
  3. 3. SoTL literature on peer feedback • Peer feedback improves writing (Paulus, 1999; Cho & Schunn, 2007; Cho & MacArthur, 2010; Crossman & Kite, 2012) •Writing improves from giving peer feedback (Cho & Cho, 2011; Li, Liu & Steckelberg, 2010) • Gaps in the literature: • More peer feedback sessions -> increased implementation of feedback in writing? • Do comments on one paper transfer to later papers (rather than just revisions of same paper)?
  4. 4. Interdisciplinary, team-taught, full year course for first-year students; 18 credits (6 each in first-year English, History, Philosophy) Writing intensive: Students write 10-12 essays (approx 1500-2000 words) Weekly structure: • Lecture once per week (100 students) • Seminars twice per week (20 students) • Tutorials once per week (4 students plus instructor; instructor does 5 of these per week)
  5. 5. Research questions 1. Do later essays improve on the dimensions in feedback received as well as those in feedback given by students? One more than the other? 2. Do later essays improve on the dimensions in peer feedback given and/or received even when instructor comments don’t agree with these? 3. Are students more likely to implement peer comments for later essays after a few sessions or do they do so right away? 4. Does the quality of peer comments improve over time (as compared to instructor comments and/or raters’ evaluation of essays)?
  6. 6. Data • 10 essays by each participant (13 in pilot study 2013-2014) • Comments by each student in a small group (4 students) on peers’ essays (at least 2 per essay) • Comments by instructor on each essay • All essays and comments coded according to a common rubric
  7. 7. Rubric 4 categories: • Strength of argument • Organization • Insight • Style/mechanics Subcategories in each, plus degree (1-3) -- total of 11 subcategories
  8. 8. Complications, difficulties • Gathering written comments by peers • 2013-2014: wiki • 2014-2015: piloting sidebar comments on website •Tutorial discussions each week •Written comments sometimes given before, sometimes after • How to incorporate oral discussion of essays?
  9. 9. Where we are right now • Research assistants (UBC undergrads): • Jessica Wallace (Psychology, author/editor) • Daniel Munro (Philosophy, former Arts One) • Kosta Prodanovic (English, former Arts One) • Refined coding rubric: added, subtracted, condensed dimensions according to peer comments • Split student comments into single meaning units • Achieved inter-coder reliability on student comments
  10. 10. Inter-coder reliability on student comments (approx 2000 total) 242 comments Last 70 All 3 coders agree on degree (1-3), regardless of category 90% 87% 3 agree on category & final decision (after mtg) is same 56% 67% 2 or 3 agree on category & final decision is same 82% 93% 2 agree on category & final is different 12% 7%
  11. 11. Inter-coder reliability on student comments: Fleiss’ Kappa • Average for 141 comments: 0.61 (moderate agreement) • For the most frequently used categories: 0.8 (substantial agreement) • Agreement on degree (numbers 1-3) (Intra Class Correlation): 0.96 Now: if two raters agree on category & number, that’s the final decision; otherwise meet and discuss
  12. 12. Coding yet to be done • Instructor comments on all essays • To isolate comments only given by peers • To measure improvement in student comment quality over time • Coding essays on the categories and degrees on the rubric used for comments • To measure improvement in essays over time
  13. 13. Analyses to be done Cross-lagged panel design with auto-regressive structure E1 quality E2 quality E3 quality E1 comments E2 comments E3 comments
  14. 14. Timeline • April 2015: Finish coding all essays and comments •May-June 2015: Do statistical analyses to address research questions • July-August 2015: Refine the design for a larger study to start Sept. 2015, recruit other Arts One instructors to join the study
  15. 15. References • Cho, K., & MacArthur, C. (2010). Student revision with peer and expert reviewing, Learning and Instruction. 20, 328-338. • Cho, Y. H., & Cho, K. (2011). Peer reviewers learn from giving comments. Instructional Science, 39, 629-643. • Cho, K. & Schunn, C. D. (2007). Scaffolded writing and rewriting in the discipline: A web-based reciprocal peer review system. Computers & Education, 48, 409–426 • Crossman, J. M., & Kite, S. L. (2012). Facilitating improved writing among students through directed peer review, Active Learning in Higher Education, 13, 219-229. • Li, L., Liu, X., & Steckelberg, A. L. (2010). Assessor or assessee: How student learning improves by giving and receiving peer feedback. British Journal of Educational Technology, 41(3), 525–536. • Paulus, T. M. (1999). The effect of peer and teacher feedback on student writing. Journal of Second Language Writing, 8, 265-289.
  16. 16. Thank you! Christina Hendricks Website: Blog: Twitter: @clhendricksbc Slides available: Slides licensed CC-BY 4.0