Bleu Velvet

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  • Great images and visuals in the creative brief, the audio adds all the necessary information. Like Kevin said, it might be nice to tie the audio and visuals together a bit more.
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  • Nicely showcases your entrepreneurial mind-set. You've reversed a typical brief, pages have very few words, your audio track is where all the narrative resides. What about a more even balance? Audio track doesn't seems to always clearly match page contents. That sound glitch in the first five seconds doesn't help set the stage for what will follow; such tech stuff is fixable. You cover much of what venture capitalist/s would be interested in but where is your table of contents, i.e. a holistic glance at your brief's structure? (very important)
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