Landing Page Critique
Conversion Sciences
Catherine Crim
(888) 961-6604
www.ConversionSciences.com
For a detailed review, ...
Shrink size
to allow
more info
above fold
Match Offer to
Audience
Move bullets into one
line. Shown to increase
readabilit...
Move Button and Consider Different Call
To Action Copy on Button
Move these to less Prime
Place
This is good
messaging!
Fo...
Testimonials are getting lost in the
cosmos of pretty colors
Fill Out The Form
Get Contacted
About Supplies
Lists
Have Sch...
For a detailed review, visit http://conversci.com/schoolsupplies
For a detailed review, visit http://conversci.com/schoolsupplies
Free Short Course
www.ConversionScientist.com
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Landing Page Critique-Email Traffic

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When servicing "cold" email traffic, what does a landing page have to do to be effective. This is a critique of Stress Free School Supplies landing page. See a detailed review on <a>The Conversion Scientist Blog</a>.

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Landing Page Critique-Email Traffic

  1. 1. Landing Page Critique Conversion Sciences Catherine Crim (888) 961-6604 www.ConversionSciences.com For a detailed review, visit http://conversci.com/schoolsupplies
  2. 2. Shrink size to allow more info above fold Match Offer to Audience Move bullets into one line. Shown to increase readability and will give room for form above fold For a detailed review, visit http://conversci.com/schoolsupplies
  3. 3. Move Button and Consider Different Call To Action Copy on Button Move these to less Prime Place This is good messaging! For a detailed review, visit http://conversci.com/schoolsupplies
  4. 4. Testimonials are getting lost in the cosmos of pretty colors Fill Out The Form Get Contacted About Supplies Lists Have School Supplies Taken Care of! Instead of this picture a graphic depicting the process would be more effective For a detailed review, visit http://conversci.com/schoolsupplies
  5. 5. For a detailed review, visit http://conversci.com/schoolsupplies
  6. 6. For a detailed review, visit http://conversci.com/schoolsupplies
  7. 7. Free Short Course www.ConversionScientist.com Subscribe Online Earn Points for Reading Earn a Free Review of Your Website

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