What is a PEE paragraph?
I strongly suggest (if you haven’t already to read
my Slideshow on PETER paragraph.
A PETER paragraph will give you a higher level,
as it has more layers to it.
PEE stand for Point Evidence Explain.
It is like a 3 layered explanation
How to use it...Step 1)
P Make your Point.
What are you trying to get at?
For example) Mobile phones are better than
How to use it...Step 2)
You need to support your point with some evidence.
Examples) If you are talking about:
A book – ‘I know this, because the book says...’
Your opinion – find some factual evidence from
My example) Mobiles are better than landlines. I think
this, because mobiles (on average) cost less to run and
you can do a lot more with them. This evidence is
backed by internet research.
How to use it...Step 3)
You need to explain your evidence in more detail and how it
relates/proves your point.
My example) Mobiles are better than landlines. I think this,
because mobiles (on average) cost less to run and you can
do a lot more with them. This evidence is backed by
internet research. This proves that mobiles are better than
landlines and shows a couple of reasons why they are
better. They are also a lot better, because you are less
restricted with mobile phones and can freely move without
being controlled by as many connection problems.
Basic writing frame
• I know/think this, because
• This shows
______________________. On top of this we
• Celebrities are good role-models.
• I think this, because many teenagers look-up to a
famous figure/celebrity. This evidence is based on
a recent survey, held by myself.
• This shows that 93% of the teenagers surveyed
admire a famous person, proving that most
celebrities are good role-models! On top of this
we know that an example could be Jessie J taking
a brave step and shaving off her hair for charity.
PEE and PETER
• PEE paragraphs and PETER paragraphs, will
both get you a high level in your work.
However, you should aim to use PETER
paragraphs because they provide even higher
levels if used correctly. This is because there
are more links to be made and more layers to
• Check out my uploads for How to nail a PETER