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Adrian Crook & Associates
Mobile Social Game Design Experts
By: Ed Kuehnel
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
How Nebulous Narratives Court Disaster
Let me tell you a story. It’s got a great setup, a really solid hook
– the concept is gold. You comfortable? Don’t bother - this
baby’s gonna have you on the edge of your seat.
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
Though come to think about it, I guess I’m not COMPLETELY sure
what happens after our protagonist gets going. In fact, the whole
middle part is a bit murky (though it has lots of shooting and
explosions and maybe zombies?)
I’m not positive how it ends either. Possibly, the zombies regain
their humanity and learn that violence is cool, but wrong. Or maybe
that’s the Time Pharaoh. Or both, I’m not sure yet.
Don’t get me wrong – I’ve got some ideas, I’m just fuzzy on the
details. I know there’s a Space Codex involved that a rogue special
ops strike force team needs to find, if that helps. Also, the hero’s
planet gets eaten (Time Pharaoh) and unless it’s regurgitated
within twenty-four hours it’ll be digested along with everything and
everyone on it including his dog. Cool, huh?
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
Sound like something you’d like to invest a few million
dollars in?*
If you answered “no,” you’re in good company, though
believe it or not, the majority of game developers working
on story-centric games do pin their hopes and dreams
(and schedules) to half-baked stories and incomplete
narratives by violating a rule I’ll call Concept is King, but
Story is Sovereign.
*If you answered “yes” please email info@adriancrook.com IMMEDIATELY.
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
Trust me, the story picks up after the three or four hour mark.
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
At face value, this guideline is a simple one: don’t confuse a story
concept or a collection of cool story ideas with an actual story. In
much the same way that an idea for a novel is not yet a novel, or a
bad breakup is not yet a trite love song to be uploaded to Bandcamp
at three a.m., a cool idea for story told through the medium of
gameplay is not an actionable narrative design that can guide your
team through production.
So what’s at stake? Just like that presentation that grinds to a halt
when the software you tested that very morning on the very same
laptop decides not to work, so development of your story-focused
game can come to a crashing halt as a handful of creatives try
desperately to work their way out of some story problem or another
halfway through your production cycle - while artists and other
content creators twiddle their thumbs and wait.
Concept is King, but Story is Sovereign
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
Story Treatment, Narrative Design, and Dialogue
The design of a story-dependent game can be broken down into
three distinct phases: story treatment, narrative design flowchart,
and everyone’s favourite - dialogue.
The author was privileged to work with Ubisoft Montpelier on the award-winning Valiant
Hearts, a game that was briefly delayed during production due to narrative problems.
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
Story Treatment
Having a solid, actionable story treatment is your best
defense against jumping into development prematurely. This
is because, unlike its flighty Hollywood cousin whose chief
responsibility is to act as a sales pitch, the story treatment
for a game serves as the backbone for nearly every creative
decision you’ll make during pre-production and beyond.
While having a clearly defined beginning, middle, and end
are not the only requirements necessary for telling a good
story, you can be assured that without them, you are not
ready to move on.
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
Often when I’m called in to help with a project that has crawled to a standstill
(or at least a slow trickle) because of story problems, I will put my client’s
story though a simple test devised by Brian McDonald in his brilliant
book Invisible Ink: A Practical Guide to Building Stories That
Resonate (Literary Editions, 2009). In McDonald’s “seven easy steps to a
better story,” we seek to fill in the following blanks:
Once upon a time…
And every day…
Until one day…
And because of this…
And because of this… (repeat as necessary)
Until finally…
And ever since that day…
If you can fill in these blanks confidently and if the major turning points and
events in your story ramp up from its beginning to a satisfying conclusion,
you’re on the right track. If not, you run the risk of being forced to stop and
answer them in the middle of production.
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
The Narrative Design Flowchart – the game’s story as told by
its mechanics, from beginning to middle to end – as the player
will experience it.
10
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
Narrative Design Flowchart
Once you are confident in the story you want to tell, the next
step is to plot out the game, step by step, just as the player
would experience it.
This might be as simple as charting out the core loop present
in most f2p mobile games, in which players are treated to a
simple cut scene after so many gameplay sequences, or as
complex as a sprawling flowchart illustrating (at a high level)
every cinema, QuickTime event, inventory puzzle,
environmental interaction, and branching story path available
during an episode of The Walking Dead or Game of Thrones
from the masters of interactive entertainment, Telltale Games.
11
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
With a detailed narrative design you not only define
the what and why of your story, but the how and when. For
example, every pre-rendered cinema and interactive
sequence in your game is defined in detail – its purpose and
chronology in the timeline clear.
Environmental artists, animators, game designers, sound
designers – everyone on the content side (storytellers all) can
build assets with the confidence and, more importantly, with
the context necessary to support the story visually, auditorily,
and interactively.
12
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
Dialogue
With the rest of the team kept busy, the poor sap who has
been stuck with writing dialogue is now free to write and
rewrite scenes to their creative director’s heart’s content
without causing a bottleneck for other developers. Much has
been written or handed down from theatre and film about the
art and craft of writing scenes and dialogue; most of it is
applicable to games as well.
Most importantly, you can either hire someone who has
studied and worked at this craft or you can trust it to
someone on the team who has never done it before but
thinks it sounds fun and end up with dialogue like, “The Time
Pharaoh – I should have known!” Your call.
13
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
Rhianna Pratchett, coiner of the term “narrative
paramedic.” Photo credit: Kotaku
14
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
Hire Good Storytellers
Rhianna Pratchett, current writer on the Tomb Raider franchise, once
referred to herself as a “narrative paramedic.” Far too often,
experienced game writers are called in after a game’s story lies
gasping for breath, with the dev team standing around, looking at
one another, hopeful that someone knows narrative CPR.
Having some innate talent and knowledge of the above process is
one thing; having put this process into practice over and over again
is how a novice narrative designer becomes an expert. If your
game’s story is important to your overall success, hire an expert
early in the process. They will more than pay for themselves in the
time they save you later patching plot holes while artists and
programmers become disillusioned with your game’s vision.
15
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
“Feel Good Stories”
Something I could not have guessed at when I first began
consulting was the importance of a good story to the morale of
a development team.
My visits to studios inevitably include anxious producers,
frustrated creative directors and a legion of artists and game
designers who work underneath them who have grown
disenfranchised with creating content for a story that does not
inspire them. I have seen first hand how story, far from being
some independent facet of a game that most need not be
concerned with, is the glue that holds a project together.
16
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
Fin
So if you’re ready to hear that story, I’m finally ready to tell it –
from beginning, middle to end, step by step, through each
unexpected but highly plausible twist and turn, all the way to its
satisfying but not necessarily predictable resolution, complete
with well-researched dialog from non-stereotypical characters.
If you’d like to hear it – or better yet, to play it in your game,
just give us a call…
17
© 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc.
Contact
To discuss your game, drop us a line:
Email adrian@adriancrook.com
Skype: adrian.crook
For more information about AC+A, visit:
Web: www.adriancrook.com
(projects, team, blog)
LinkedIn: http://www.linkedin.com/in/adrian
(recommendations)

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Let Me Tell You (Half) a Story: How Nebulous Narratives Court Disaster

  • 1. Adrian Crook & Associates Mobile Social Game Design Experts By: Ed Kuehnel
  • 2. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. How Nebulous Narratives Court Disaster Let me tell you a story. It’s got a great setup, a really solid hook – the concept is gold. You comfortable? Don’t bother - this baby’s gonna have you on the edge of your seat.
  • 3. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. Though come to think about it, I guess I’m not COMPLETELY sure what happens after our protagonist gets going. In fact, the whole middle part is a bit murky (though it has lots of shooting and explosions and maybe zombies?) I’m not positive how it ends either. Possibly, the zombies regain their humanity and learn that violence is cool, but wrong. Or maybe that’s the Time Pharaoh. Or both, I’m not sure yet. Don’t get me wrong – I’ve got some ideas, I’m just fuzzy on the details. I know there’s a Space Codex involved that a rogue special ops strike force team needs to find, if that helps. Also, the hero’s planet gets eaten (Time Pharaoh) and unless it’s regurgitated within twenty-four hours it’ll be digested along with everything and everyone on it including his dog. Cool, huh?
  • 4. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. Sound like something you’d like to invest a few million dollars in?* If you answered “no,” you’re in good company, though believe it or not, the majority of game developers working on story-centric games do pin their hopes and dreams (and schedules) to half-baked stories and incomplete narratives by violating a rule I’ll call Concept is King, but Story is Sovereign. *If you answered “yes” please email info@adriancrook.com IMMEDIATELY.
  • 5. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. Trust me, the story picks up after the three or four hour mark.
  • 6. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. At face value, this guideline is a simple one: don’t confuse a story concept or a collection of cool story ideas with an actual story. In much the same way that an idea for a novel is not yet a novel, or a bad breakup is not yet a trite love song to be uploaded to Bandcamp at three a.m., a cool idea for story told through the medium of gameplay is not an actionable narrative design that can guide your team through production. So what’s at stake? Just like that presentation that grinds to a halt when the software you tested that very morning on the very same laptop decides not to work, so development of your story-focused game can come to a crashing halt as a handful of creatives try desperately to work their way out of some story problem or another halfway through your production cycle - while artists and other content creators twiddle their thumbs and wait. Concept is King, but Story is Sovereign
  • 7. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. Story Treatment, Narrative Design, and Dialogue The design of a story-dependent game can be broken down into three distinct phases: story treatment, narrative design flowchart, and everyone’s favourite - dialogue. The author was privileged to work with Ubisoft Montpelier on the award-winning Valiant Hearts, a game that was briefly delayed during production due to narrative problems.
  • 8. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. Story Treatment Having a solid, actionable story treatment is your best defense against jumping into development prematurely. This is because, unlike its flighty Hollywood cousin whose chief responsibility is to act as a sales pitch, the story treatment for a game serves as the backbone for nearly every creative decision you’ll make during pre-production and beyond. While having a clearly defined beginning, middle, and end are not the only requirements necessary for telling a good story, you can be assured that without them, you are not ready to move on.
  • 9. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. Often when I’m called in to help with a project that has crawled to a standstill (or at least a slow trickle) because of story problems, I will put my client’s story though a simple test devised by Brian McDonald in his brilliant book Invisible Ink: A Practical Guide to Building Stories That Resonate (Literary Editions, 2009). In McDonald’s “seven easy steps to a better story,” we seek to fill in the following blanks: Once upon a time… And every day… Until one day… And because of this… And because of this… (repeat as necessary) Until finally… And ever since that day… If you can fill in these blanks confidently and if the major turning points and events in your story ramp up from its beginning to a satisfying conclusion, you’re on the right track. If not, you run the risk of being forced to stop and answer them in the middle of production.
  • 10. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. The Narrative Design Flowchart – the game’s story as told by its mechanics, from beginning to middle to end – as the player will experience it. 10
  • 11. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. Narrative Design Flowchart Once you are confident in the story you want to tell, the next step is to plot out the game, step by step, just as the player would experience it. This might be as simple as charting out the core loop present in most f2p mobile games, in which players are treated to a simple cut scene after so many gameplay sequences, or as complex as a sprawling flowchart illustrating (at a high level) every cinema, QuickTime event, inventory puzzle, environmental interaction, and branching story path available during an episode of The Walking Dead or Game of Thrones from the masters of interactive entertainment, Telltale Games. 11
  • 12. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. With a detailed narrative design you not only define the what and why of your story, but the how and when. For example, every pre-rendered cinema and interactive sequence in your game is defined in detail – its purpose and chronology in the timeline clear. Environmental artists, animators, game designers, sound designers – everyone on the content side (storytellers all) can build assets with the confidence and, more importantly, with the context necessary to support the story visually, auditorily, and interactively. 12
  • 13. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. Dialogue With the rest of the team kept busy, the poor sap who has been stuck with writing dialogue is now free to write and rewrite scenes to their creative director’s heart’s content without causing a bottleneck for other developers. Much has been written or handed down from theatre and film about the art and craft of writing scenes and dialogue; most of it is applicable to games as well. Most importantly, you can either hire someone who has studied and worked at this craft or you can trust it to someone on the team who has never done it before but thinks it sounds fun and end up with dialogue like, “The Time Pharaoh – I should have known!” Your call. 13
  • 14. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. Rhianna Pratchett, coiner of the term “narrative paramedic.” Photo credit: Kotaku 14
  • 15. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. Hire Good Storytellers Rhianna Pratchett, current writer on the Tomb Raider franchise, once referred to herself as a “narrative paramedic.” Far too often, experienced game writers are called in after a game’s story lies gasping for breath, with the dev team standing around, looking at one another, hopeful that someone knows narrative CPR. Having some innate talent and knowledge of the above process is one thing; having put this process into practice over and over again is how a novice narrative designer becomes an expert. If your game’s story is important to your overall success, hire an expert early in the process. They will more than pay for themselves in the time they save you later patching plot holes while artists and programmers become disillusioned with your game’s vision. 15
  • 16. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. “Feel Good Stories” Something I could not have guessed at when I first began consulting was the importance of a good story to the morale of a development team. My visits to studios inevitably include anxious producers, frustrated creative directors and a legion of artists and game designers who work underneath them who have grown disenfranchised with creating content for a story that does not inspire them. I have seen first hand how story, far from being some independent facet of a game that most need not be concerned with, is the glue that holds a project together. 16
  • 17. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. Fin So if you’re ready to hear that story, I’m finally ready to tell it – from beginning, middle to end, step by step, through each unexpected but highly plausible twist and turn, all the way to its satisfying but not necessarily predictable resolution, complete with well-researched dialog from non-stereotypical characters. If you’d like to hear it – or better yet, to play it in your game, just give us a call… 17
  • 18. © 2015 Adrian Crook & Associates Inc. Contact To discuss your game, drop us a line: Email adrian@adriancrook.com Skype: adrian.crook For more information about AC+A, visit: Web: www.adriancrook.com (projects, team, blog) LinkedIn: http://www.linkedin.com/in/adrian (recommendations)