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Proposal and treatment

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Proposal and treatment

  1. 1. Sharmin, Naadirah, Amina and Farhana – Provided to panel Copy of Sharmin Sultana – Candidate Number: 5525 Changed so it’s easy to read on blog: Original version is also provided. Proposal and Treatment Assignment Song Choice – JUST STAND UP 1) Narrative and Performance Section 1 - a girl comes out of the hospital with a leaflet on hand. We will do a close shot on the leaflet which shows cancer the work cancer. She looks upset and walks down the stairs and walk into the street. Singer is in the scene and sings the song and the girl walks right past her. Story goes into the house, singer is there in the room and the girl is crying on the bed with the leaflet in front of her. Fades into black background Section 2 – a boy in the alleyway buying drugs of other boys. Singer singing during the scene. Boy runs past the singer and goes home. Puts the drug on the table and just sits and stares at it. While singer still singing the song. Boy looking confused a tempted. Fades into black Section 3 – a little girl in her bedroom crying due to abuse. She is sitting on the floor against the door, crying out of fear cuddling her pillow. Singer singing next to her likes spirit of comfort. Room will have toys and games. Be a fresh pink room. Section 4 – black background, while singing the ending everyone gets together. The girl, the boy and the little girl including other people through gender, race, ethnicity, height and age. We will have them dancing in small movements, laughter, smiles to show they have made it through. Close shots on them holding hands. Fading in and out. 2) Song Breakdown VERSE 1 Beyoncé: [Sharmin] The heart is stronger, Than you think [shows singer singing in the black background] It's like it can go Through anything [Shows the cancer girl walking out with the leaflet] wide shot and close up And even when you think [singer on the side of the hospital singing the song] close up, mid shots and full shots] It can't it finds a way To still push on, Though Carrie Underwood: Sometimes, You want to run away [girl walks pass the singer] Ain't got the patience, For the pain [singing while singer is walking towards the camera, camera tracking back] And if you, Don't believe it [girl goes inside the house, goes to her room] Look into, Your heart [black background] The beat goes on [singing next to the girl – looking at the girl] BRIDGE
  2. 2. Sharmin, Naadirah, Amina and Farhana – Provided to panel Copy of Sharmin Sultana – Candidate Number: 5525 Changed so it’s easy to read on blog: Original version is also provided. Rihanna: [Amina and Farhana] [flashing from storyline to the other singers] I'm telling' you Things get better Through [To Sharmin] whatever [black background … mid shots of singers] If you fall Dust it off [To Sharmin] Don't let up Sheryl Crow: Don't you know You can go Be your own miracle You need to know CHORUS: (Sheryl Crow): [continue showing storyline one while still jumping to the other two singers in black background] If the mind, Keeps thinking[shots going back and fourth from the singer to the performer] You've had enough, But the heart Keeps telling you, Don't give up Who are we to be, Questioning & Wondering what is what Don't give up, Through it all Just stand up VERSE 2 Fergie: [Amina] It's like, We all have better days [A guy buying drugs off someone] Full shot Problems getting all up, In your face [shot of the singer] Leona Lewis: [Amina] Just because, You go through it [shot back to the guy walking away slyly with the drugs] Medium shot [the back of the guy] Long Shot Fergie: [Amina] Don't mean it got, [singer in black background] Close up To take control, no [cut back to the guy, opens the door, and throws the drugs on the table, sits down and stares at it] Wide shot and close up on drugs and mid shots Leona Lewis: [Amina] You ain't gotta find, No hiding place [ Singer sitting opposite side and singing] like not in the scene – the boy can’t see singer … long shots Keyshia Cole: [Amina]
  3. 3. Sharmin, Naadirah, Amina and Farhana – Provided to panel Copy of Sharmin Sultana – Candidate Number: 5525 Changed so it’s easy to read on blog: Original version is also provided. Because the heart, Can beat the hate [singing in black background] mid shots of random people Leona Lewis: Don't wanna, Let your mind Keep playin' you And sayin' you, Can't go on BRIGDE SAME – with SHARMIN AND FARHANA CHORUS – SECOND STORYLINE Miley Cyrus: Dust if off, Don't let up Don't you know you [Singer 3 singing][Her scene will come up on screen] You can go [Singer 2 singing][Her scene will come up on the side of the same screen] Be your own , Miracle [Singer 1 singing][Her scene comes up on the side][it will be a shot split into three] CHORUS – SECOND STORYLINE VERSE 3 – STORYLINE 3 Mary J. Blige: [Farhana] You don't gotta be, A prisoner [singer singing in the background] In your mind [the girl leaning against the door looking scared] close up on bruises Ciara: If you fall, Dust it off [Singer sitting near the young girl, singing the song] [wide shot] Mary J. Blige/Rihanna/Carrie Underwood:: You can live your life Yeah [Sharmin & Amina – Different scene] Mary J. Blige: Let your heart, Be your guide Rihanna/Carrie: Yeah, yeah, yeah [Spliting screen into three, making it seem as though artists are pushing it away] Mariah Carey: And you will know, That you're good If you trust in the good Ashanti: [Farhana] Everything, Will be alright, Yeah [Sharmin & Amina]
  4. 4. Sharmin, Naadirah, Amina and Farhana – Provided to panel Copy of Sharmin Sultana – Candidate Number: 5525 Changed so it’s easy to read on blog: Original version is also provided. Light up the dark, If you follow your heart Chorus - Using random shots, different people. You got it in you, Find it within[singers are this part, do close shots of everyone gathering at the back] You got in now, Find it within now [Shots changing with the beats] You got in you, Find it within You got in now, Find it within now [close shots on people holding hands] You got in you, Find it within Find it within you Find it within [wide shots and full shots on everyone and everything] Through it all, Just stand up! 3) Locations Location Which Storyline?? Royal London Hospital Storyline One – Sharmin Whitechapel Road Storyline One – Sharmin Dark Alleyway, Behind School, Streets Storyline Two – Amina Home Kitchen Storyline Two – Amina Bedroom, 2 different bedrooms Storyline One & Two – Sharmin & Farhana Green Screen Background – Artisits – Sharmin, Amina and Farhana School Drama Room 4) Actors/Performers Drug Role They will be either a male or female. They will wear a black hooded top with low batty jeans. We did a bit of research on types of clothing. We realised that this type of clothing is very stereotypical. Abused Role We were thinking of using a little girl to show vulnerability. She will wear baggy clothing, to show she is trying to cover her pain. This is so we can see the marks of abuse on her legs and arms. She adopt a vulnerable personality. Cancer Role We were thinking around the age of 21. Top and jeans – casual. • Singer 1, 2 and 3 Wearing black clothes at the backdrop • Singer1 – Sharmin – Pink coat in outside scenes [Topshop Coat], Blue Dress Inside scene • Singer2 – Amina – Black coat – brink wall scene, Ugg boots, Belt, Jeans and purple top –
  5. 5. Sharmin, Naadirah, Amina and Farhana – Provided to panel Copy of Sharmin Sultana – Candidate Number: 5525 Changed so it’s easy to read on blog: Original version is also provided. inside scene • Singer 3 – Farhana – Blue coat, brown boots and scarf – fountain scene, Jeans and blue top – inside scene • People in the streets of everyday use • Examples – Girl in scarf – different religions, Different shapes and sizes, tall and shot people so the its accessible to everyone. 5) Props/Costumes Props Where to get it from? How it will be used? Photo Frame Shema’s Family Picture In Storyline 1 – where girl hugs family picture Onions Kitchen Use to make tears Small Packet Any room Used to put salt in to make it look like drugs Salt Kitchen Shown as drugs Teddy bear Bedroom Storyline 3 – Layla hugging teddy bear Water Hose Garden Create Water – Fake Rain Umbrella Sharmin – Own To protect from fake rain Cancer Leaflet Any doctors For storyline 1 – come out of hos- pital with leaflet Costumes Where to get it from? How it is used? Coats x4 Artists own Clothing of ‘all three artists’ Pajamas Performers own Clothing of ‘Abuse girl’ Dress, Jeans, top, Belt, Uggs Artists own Clothing of ‘singer 1, 2, 3’ Trousers Performers own Clothing of ‘Cancer girl’ Jacket, tracksuits Performers own Clothing of ‘Drug Boy’ Black clothing Artists own Backdrop clothing
  6. 6. Sharmin, Naadirah, Amina and Farhana – Provided to panel Copy of Sharmin Sultana – Candidate Number: 5525 Changed so it’s easy to read on blog: Original version is also provided. 6) Equipments o Camera – For filming o Tripod – Holding camera still o Lighting – For clear viewing o Costumes – For artists and performers to wear [See costumes] o Black Background – Drama room o Final Cut Express Software– For Editing products o Photoshop Software– for DVD and Magazine advert design o Props – [See Props] o Computer – School computers for editing 7) Director Notes o Slow motions will be added during the walking away, crying scene, dancing scenes o Colours Palette will be used: section 1 – Yellowy Colour, Section 2 – Bluey Colour, Section 3 – Grey Colour. o Fading in and fading out. o Screen Splitting into 3. Fitting 3 Scenes together. o Spotlight on singers in the black background, backdrop o a lot of scenes of random people

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