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  1. 1. PN FARINI BT AHMAD FADIL SMK DATO’ ABD RAHMAN YAAKUB, BOTA KANAN, BOTA, PERAK. CEFR WRITING 2022
  2. 2. 3. EXTENDED WRITING - 220 – 250 words - Review - Report - Article - Narrative (3 questions and choose 1) 1. E-MAIL - 80 words 2. GUIDED WRITING - 120 – 150 words WRITING 3 PARTS
  3. 3. WRITING TIPS A B C 1. READ, UNDERSTAND AND UNDERLINE THE KEY INFORMATION 2. PLAN THE ESSAY BY BRAINSTORMING IDEAS - mind-map - arrow 3. GIVE THE ESSAY- AN INTRODUCTION, BODY AND CONCLUSION. D 4. VARIETY OF SENTENCE STRUCTURES -simple -compound -complex E 5. INDENTIFY THE TENSES -past -present -future
  4. 4. Giving advice USEFUL PHRASES -If I were you, I’d.. -I think it’d be better.. -How about.. Making suggestions -Why don’t you try… -Have you ever.. -I recommend that you.. -I feel you should.. -Perhaps you should.. Opening - Email -Hi! -Hello! -How are you? -How are things? -How is it going?
  5. 5. Illustration USEFUL PHRASES -For example,.. -As an example,.. -For instance,.. To start -First and foremost,.. -To begin,.. -To start with,.. -In the first place,. Giving your opinion It’s a good idea… because… I don’t think you should.. I believe.. is the best…..
  6. 6. Conclusion USEFUL PHRASES -All in all…. -In conclusion…. -To summarize -To sum up….. -Overall, Cohesive Devices -Next, -Then, Furthermore, -In addition, -Second, Thirdly, Lastly, Opinion -In my view/opinion,.. -As for me, I think.. -Personally, I think..
  7. 7. WORD COUNT FOR EMAIL Introduction 10 words Body 60 words Conclusion 10 words
  8. 8. WORD COUNT FOR GUIDED WRITING Introduction 30 words Body 100 words Conclusion 20 words
  9. 9. WORD COUNT FOR EXTENDED WRITING Introduction 30 words Body 200 words Conclusion 20 words
  10. 10. GUIDED WRITING
  11. 11. WRITING AN INTRODUCTION
  12. 12. TYPES OF INTRODUCTION Questions write 3 questions as introduction General Statement Definition Data writing issues that is happening/current issues statement of the meaning of a term -numbers -%
  13. 13. TYPES OF INTRODUCTION Questions Have you ever wondered what will happen if you are lost a jungle? Would you know how to survive? What are you going to do? Here are some tips to survive in a jungle. (34 words) General Statement Definition Data Surviving in a jungle is a situation in which people do whatever they want to or whatever is necessary to survive or succeed. They will find natural resources like leaves or fruits to eat and water from river to drink. Here, you can follow these tips if you are lost. (50 words) While being lost in the jungle is a terrifying prospect, there are several things that you can do to make your chances of survival easier. Here are the top tips the we follow. (33 words) A human being can survive an average of three to five days without water. Since the human body is composed of up to 78% water at birth, with an average of 60%, water is more important than fire or food. Here are what you can do in the jungle to survive. (51 words)
  14. 14. QUESTION 1 You are one of the editors of your school website. Your teacher has asked you to write about how to escape shopping addiction. In your essay, you write about: • causes of shopping addiction. • how to cut down the addiction • name some favourite items you shop online
  15. 15. GUIDED WRITING 2nd PARAGRAPH (33 words) causes of shopping addiction (1) _______________(sentence starter), keeping healthy is important because (point 1 + elaboration)________________. (CD) _______________, (point 2 + elaboration)). (CD) _____________, (point 3 + elaboration). (EXAMPLES) Sentence starters -First and foremost,.. -To begin,.. -To start with,.. -In the first place,. Cohesive Devices -Next, -Then, Furthermore, -In addition, -Second, Thirdly, Lastly,
  16. 16. GUIDED WRITING 3rd PARAGRAPH (33 words) how to cut down the addiction (2) _______________(sentence starter), there are many ways to keep healthy. (CD) ___________, (point 1 + elaboration)________________. (CD) _______________, (point 2 + elaboration)). (CD) _____________, (point 3 + elaboration). (EXAMPLES) Cohesive Devices -Next, -Then, Furthermore, -In addition, -Second, -Thirdly, -Lastly, -First and foremost, Expressing opinion -In my opinion, -Personally I think, -I am sure, -As for me,
  17. 17. GUIDED WRITING 4th PARAGRAPH (34 words) name some favourite items you shop online (3) _______________(sentence starter), if we are not heathy, (point 1 + elaboration)________________. (CD) _______________, (point 2 + elaboration)). (CD) _____________, (point 3 + elaboration). (EXAMPLES) Cohesive Devices -Next, -Then, Furthermore, -In addition, -Second, Thirdly, Lastly, Expressing opinion -In my opinion, -Personally I think, -I am sure, -As for me,
  18. 18. GUIDED WRITING CONCLUSION (20 words) _______________(conclusion),___________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Conclusion -All in all…. -In conclusion…. -To summarize -To sum up….. -Overall,
  19. 19. LET’S WRITE THE INTRODUCTION
  20. 20. EXTENDED WRITING
  21. 21. ARTICLE Your has asked you to write an article. HOME SCHOOLING VS TRADITIONAL SCHOOLING • What is meant by home schooling and traditional schooling? • Which is better option? Give your reasons Write the article answering these questions. The articles will be displayed in the school magazines. Introduction – 30 words Body Body Body Conclusion – 20 words 200 words By : _______________ (your name)
  22. 22. REPORT Introduction – 30 words Body Body Body Conclusion – 20 words 200 words To: From: Subject: Name of the receiver Name of the sender What is the report about -The purpose/aim of this report is to… -This report is about…. -This report focuses on….. The body -elaborate/explain information -give examples To conclude… -To summaries…. - As conclusion…..
  23. 23. QUESTION 1 Your school magazine committee has conducted a survey on how to improve the sports facilities at your school. As the secretary of the school magazine committee, you need to write a report about the survey. Your report should include: • Sports facilities that should be improved. • Reasons for making the improvements. • Introduction of new features to the sports facilities
  24. 24. REVIEW Introduction Description of the movie/product/restaurant/place/book/food Body Comments/opinion on the movie/product/restaurant/place/book/food Conclusion Recommendation 200 words Body Comments/opinion on the movie/product/restaurant/place/book/food Body Comments on the movie/product/restaurant/place/book/food
  25. 25. QUESTION 1 Reviews required! Have you been to any famous tourist destination lately? Send us your review about your trip. Say what you enjoyed about the place. Would you recommend the place to your friends? Why? The best reviews will be published in our newsletter.
  26. 26. NARRATIVE Introduction Body Conclusion 200 words Body Body
  27. 27. NARRATIVE Begin your story with : I was driving around the corner angrily when suddenly I……. End your story with : I regretted saying those words and now she is gone. Title The most embarrassing day.
  28. 28. QUESTION 1 Your teacher has asked you to write a story for a school magazine. The story must have the title: An accident Your story should include: • a description of the accident • how the accident happened Write your story.
  29. 29. THANK YOU

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