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Draft 3 part 4

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Draft 3 part 4

  1. 1. Part L Shot list Draft 1 Shot Shot Name Description Prop/Costume Number 1 Two Shot Lily and John sitting down in Cafe, smart clothes- the cafe (having a date) jeans, polo, trainers, skirt, to p, shoes, coffee 2 Over the John taking out the ring to Ring in the box Shoulder shot propose to Lily 3 Mid shot Nevaeh of her looking at John Black jacket, jeans, white and Lily angrily top, boots, make up black lipstick 4 P.O.V Nevaeh’s POV of what she is Table, chairs, coffee, seeing people, ring, clothes 5 Close up Opening of the box (ring) Box and ring 6 Mid shot Lily shocked and happy Make up 7 Close up Lily’s eyes crying of joy
  2. 2. Part L Shot Shot Name Description Props/Costume Number 8 Extreme Close Him putting the ring in her Ring up finger 9 Long shot John and Nevaeh holding Park, clothes- hands in park trousers, Hoody, trainers, jeans, jacket, hand bag 10 Mid shot Lily behind John and Nevaeh Tracksuit trousers, top, jacket, trainers, hair tied back 11 Close up Lily dialling the phone to call phone John 12 Two shot (Mid Nevaeh and John Talking Clothes, phone shot) *Phone rings* 13 Extreme close Him declining the call phone up
  3. 3. Part L Shot list Draft 2 Resentful Shot Shot Name Description Prop/Costume No. 1 Long shot John is standing up waiting for Lily in the John’s Semi formal park (he stands up next to the bench) clothes, park bench 2 Long shot Lily running towards John (camera is in front Lily’s semi-formal of her) clothes 3 Mid shot Both John & Lily greet each other with a hug John and Lily’s semi- formal clothes and park bench 4 Two shot Both of them sitting down on the bench John and Lily’s semi- formal clothes 5 Over the shoulder Both of them started to talk, and he told her John and Lily’s semi- shot & Reverse that her loves her and shows her his surprise formal clothes shot for her
  4. 4. Part L 6 Mid shot John taking out the ring out of his pocket John’s Semi formal clothes 7 Close up Him showing the ring John’s Semi formal clothes and ring 8 Mid shot John saying “Will you marry me?” to Lily John’s Semi formal while showing her the ring clothes and ring 9 Close up Shows Lily’s face expressions of surprise, Eye make up happy, and speechless – hand over mouth 10 Extreme Close up John putting on the ring to her finger Ring 11 Point of View Point of view of Lily following John John’s Non-formal outfit 12 Over the shoulder Lily is seeing both John and Nevaeh greeting Lily, and John’s Non- each other formal outfit and Nevaeh’s outfit (all black) 13 Two shot John & Nevaeh are both in the park sitting John and Nevaeh’s down, talking and playing Non-formal outfit 14 Close up Lily’s expression when she saw John and No Make up Nevaeh together (she doesn’t know who Nevaeh is) - Jealousy
  5. 5. Part L Shot List for Draft 2 of Opening Sequence Quizzical Shot No. Shot Name Description Prop/Costume 1 Mid Shot Mid shot of girl sitting down and looking Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring through the Internet 2 Over the shoulder Girl in Facebook pictures, looking through Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring them 3 Mid shot Girl looking very happy Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring 4 Point Of View Girl looking at a picture of her and boyfriend Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink playing hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket 5 Long shot Girl pushing her boyfriend and laughing pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket Top 6 Long shot Girl running away from her boyfriend and he pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket, follows her top 7 Mid shot Girl running pink hoody, jeans, shoes, top 8 Close up Boy’s hand reaching out of his girlfriend’s Pink hoody and black jacket, top hand 9 Long shot boy got her arm after reaching out for her pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket, top 10 Mid shot Boy spinning around his girlfriend pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket, Boy: Got you! top Girl: *Laugh*
  6. 6. Part L Shot No. Shot Name Description Prop/Costume 11 Point of View Her clicking the next button to see the other picture of both Pink jumper, laptop, jeans of them holding hands while walking 12 Long Shot Girl and boyfriend walking while the camera is filming them pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black from the back jacket 13 Long Shot Girl and boyfriend walking while the camera is filming across pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black the road jacket 14 Mid shot Girl clinging into him while camera will be in front of both of pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black the characters while they walk jacket 15 Point of View Her clicking the next button to see the picture of both of Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody, them close to each other and looking at each other’s eyes trousers, shoes, box, ring 16 Close up Female character looking very happy while looking at the Pink jumper, laptop, jeans picture 17 Close up Boy and girl looking at each other’s eyes Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody, John: Close your eyes. trousers, shoes, box, ring 18 Mid shot John taking out the box (with ring inside) while the girl is Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody, frozen with her eyes closed trousers, shoes, box, ring 19 Over the Shoulder + John opening the box in front of her Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody, Reverse Shot John: Open your eyes trousers, shoes, box, ring 20 Over the Shoulder + Ina saw the ring with a surprised face Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody, Reverse Shot Ina: Really? trousers, shoes, box, ring 21 Over the Shoulder + John will be smiling happily Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody, Reverse Shot John: Yes, will you marry me? trousers, shoes, box, ring 22 Over the Shoulder + Ina will hug him as she accepted his proposal Red and blue polo shirt, Hoody, Reverse Shot Ina: Yes! trousers, shoes, box, ring
  7. 7. Part L Shot No. Shot Name Description Prop/Costume 23 Close up Ina will be looking very happy while she’s recalling her Pink jumper, laptop, jeans memory 24 Point Of View Ina looking at the current picture while a chat box opens Pink jumper, laptop, jeans Stranger: Hi. 25 Mid shot Female character looking confused of who the person is Pink jumper, laptop, jeans Ina: Hi? Who is this? 26 Mid shot Ina thinking who this person is Pink jumper, laptop, jeans 27 Over the Shoulder Showing her thinking then the person on the other end of the Pink jumper, laptop, jeans Shot chat replied Stranger: You don’t know me but I need to talk to you 28 Point of View She replied back to the stranger Pink jumper, laptop, jeans Ina: Ok about what? 29 Point of View Stranger replied back to her Stranger: Your boyfriend…
  8. 8. Part L Shot List of Opening Sequence Draft 3 Quizzical Shot No. Shot Name Description Prop/Costume 1 Mid shot Ina sitting down and looking through the Internet Pink jumper, laptop, jeans 2 Point of View POV of Ina looking through Facebook pictures scrolling Pink jumper, laptop, jeans down to go to the newest picture 3 Close up Ina looking very happy and smiling Pink jumper, laptop, jeans 4 Point of View Ina looking at the 1st newest picture of her and her Laptop, skinny jeans, pink top, ring, boyfriend playing about pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black jacket 5 Long shot Girl pushing the boy and laughing skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink hoody, jeans, shoes, scarf 6 Long shot Girl running away while her boyfriend run after her skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink hoody, jeans, shoes, scarf 7 Mid shot Girl running while the boy is running behind her skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink [the camera will be in front] hoody, jeans, shoes, scarf 8 Close up John’s hand reaching out for her hand skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink hoody, jeans, shoes, scarf 9 Long shot John got her hand and pulling her skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink hoody, jeans, shoes, scarf 10 Mid shot Boyfriend spinning her around and stops and said: skinny jeans, pink top, ring, pink John: Got you! (smiling) hoody, jeans, shoes, scarf
  9. 9. Part L Quizzical Shot No. Shot Name Description Prop/Costume 11 Mid shot Ina smiling while looking at the screen Pink jumper, laptop, jeans 12 Point of View Ina looking at the 2nd newest picture of her and her pink hoody, jeans, shoes, black boyfriend walking outside while camera will be at jacket, top the back 13 Long shot Ina and her boyfriend walking outside while holding pink hoody, jeans, shoes, grey hands hoody , top, scarf 14 Long shot Her boyfriend and her walking while the camera is pink hoody, jeans, shoes, grey across the road hoody , top, scarf 15 Mid shot Ina and her boyfriend holding hands while walking pink hoody, jeans, shoes, grey hoody , top, scarf 16 Mid shot Ina looking at the screen Pink jumper, laptop, jeans 17 POV Ina looking at the picture of her and her boyfriend Red and blue top, jeans, grey looking at each others eyes hoody 18 Full shot Both characters sitting down in the sofa looking at Red and blue top, jeans, grey each other. hoody John: close your eyes 19 Mid shot Boy taking out the box while her eyes are still closed Red and blue top, jeans, grey hoody 20 Over the shoulder John opening the box in front of her Red and blue top, jeans, grey John: Open your eyes. hoody
  10. 10. Part L Quizzical Shot No. Shot Name Description Props/Costume 21 Extreme Close up Shot that shows the ring inside the box Ring and box 22 Close up Ina showing that she’s happy and have her Red and blue top, jeans, grey hands over her mouth hoody Ina: Really? 23 Over the shoulder John smiling at her Red and blue top, jeans, grey John: yes, will you marry me? hoody 24 Over the shoulder She accepted his marriage proposal and hugs Red and blue top, jeans, grey him hoody Ina: Yes! 25 Close up Ina looking very happy while recalling her Pink jumper, laptop, jeans memory 26 Mid shot Ina looking confused when she received a Pink jumper, laptop, jeans message from someone who she doesn’t know 27 Point of View Ina clicking the chat box to see the message Pink jumper, laptop, jeans Stranger: Hi laptop 28 Mid shot Ina looking confused Pink jumper, laptop, jeans laptop 29 Point of View Girl trying to respond to the message Pink jumper, laptop, jeans Ina: Hi?? laptop
  11. 11. QuizzicalShot No. Shot Name Description Props/Costume30 Point of view Ina looking at the chat box when the person replied Pink jumper, laptop, jeans back laptop Stranger: I need to talk to you31 Close up Girl looking so confused but wants to know who it Pink jumper, laptop, jeans was Laptop32 Point of view Girl typing her respond Pink jumper, laptop, jeans Laptop33 Point of view The person replying back to Ina Pink jumper, laptop, jeans Stranger: You don’t need to know me, but I think you laptop will be interested on what I’m going to tell you34 Close up Ina looking interested but worried at the same time Pink jumper, laptop, jeans laptop35 Point of view Her typing down her respond to the person Pink jumper, laptop, jeans Ina: Ok… What is it about? Laptop36 Point of view Girl looking down at the screen while the person Pink jumper, laptop, jeans replied to her laptop Stranger: Your boyfriend.
  12. 12. Part M Script Draft 1 1. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Two shot, of Lily and John sitting down in the cafe shop, drinking tea. 2. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Over the shoulder shot, John taking out the ring to propose to Lily. 3. EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW Mid-shot, Nevaeh looking at John and Lily angrily. Wearing a black jacket, jeans, white top, boots, and black lipstick. 4. EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW Point of view shot, Nevaeh point of view of what she is seeing. 5. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Close up shot, John’s hand opening the ring box
  13. 13. Part M 6. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Mid-shot, Lily shocked and happy, she put her hands over her mouth speechless. 7. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Close up, Lily’s face crying as John propose to her. 8. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Extreme Close up, John putting the ring on Lily’s finger. 9. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Long shot, John and Nevaeh holding hands, walking in the park. John’s wearing gray trousers, red hoody, and trainers whilst Nevaeh wearing jeans, black jacket, and hand bag. 10. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Mid-shot of Lily behind John and Nevaeh, wearing tracksuit, top, jacket, trainers, and hair tied back.
  14. 14. Part M 11. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Close up shot, Lily dialling her phone to call John, she press the button hard as she cannot believe what she’s seeing. 12. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Two shot and Mid shot, Nevaeh and John talking, laughing, the phone rings. 13. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Extreme Close up shot, John’s hand and the phone. He declines the call. BLACKOUT
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