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Assignment 11 Draft 8 – opening          sequence            Luara Pires          Kauana Labaldi          Chantelle Gilkes
Results for draft #4Teacher Assessment.      Peer Assessment.   Self Assessment.
www on draft #4Titles are now in a good location and clear       Extreme close ups are now being used.Close up of her leg ...
Ebi for draft #5Show what he was looking at.                  Show what he is writting.A more closer shot of when she is g...
Things to do for final draft•   More close ups and extreme close ups•   Improve on voice over•   Improve on investigation ...
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Final draft planning

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Final draft planning

  1. 1. Assignment 11 Draft 8 – opening sequence Luara Pires Kauana Labaldi Chantelle Gilkes
  2. 2. Results for draft #4Teacher Assessment. Peer Assessment. Self Assessment.
  3. 3. www on draft #4Titles are now in a good location and clear Extreme close ups are now being used.Close up of her leg crossing. Effect for flashback is now better ‘Beach bypass’
  4. 4. Ebi for draft #5Show what he was looking at. Show what he is writting.A more closer shot of when she is going to More close ups for the flashback.remember one of the flashbacks.
  5. 5. Things to do for final draft• More close ups and extreme close ups• Improve on voice over• Improve on investigation papers• Make it shorter• Make the flashbacks shorter and more affective

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