Feedback and improve about grandmother story

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Feedback and improve about grandmother story

  1. 1. 19/9/2011FeedbackI was telling story about what my grandmother said, and some people gaveme some feedbacks. First, Ali gave me feedback and there are I liked all,but your story is little bit boring. Second, Do Yeon gave me somefeedbacks. She said ending part was little bit boring and your story wasreally sad. Lastly, Shi hyun said your story is little bit not reliable, but it waskind of fun. I will use this feedbacks to make my story better.ImproveI think I need to improve many things. I think I need to ask my grandmotheragain and put ending part in my story and I need to ask more seriously tomake people reliable. I thought that students who heard my story, theywere little bit watching me like I am boring. So I think I need to make mystory interesting.

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