You studied several copywriting books.
And read blog post after blog post about writing.
But writing your own web copy?
It’s a struggle.
You know the grammar is fine.
But the copy sounds bland. Perhaps even a little too salesy.
You read, and re-read your copy. You can’t quite put your finger on it. What’s wrong? How can you improve it? And persuade more people to buy?
Today I’ve assembled 17 examples of yucky copy. And I tell you exactly what’s wrong, and how to improve it.