1.
NEWS STORIES
WHAT MAKES THE NEWS WITH MODERN MEDIA
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2.
WHY DO SOME STORIES SWIM?
AND OTHERS SINK?
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3.
top mass media
top trade press
national radio
trade press
local broadcast
local news
WHY DO SOME STORIES SWIM?
local niche news
blogs
AND OTHERS SINK?
news wires
company sites
pr networks
office memos
archives
trash cans
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4.
APPROXIMATELY 1.4 MILLION NEWS STORIES PER DAY.
APPROXIMATELY 4.3 MILLION NEWS RELEASES PER DAY.
Approximation based on total number of
U.S. news outlets (print, electronic, broadcast)
averaging 20 stories per day, and receiving
80 to 100 direct releases per day.
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5.
THE MAJORITY OF STORIES ARE NOT DRIVEN BY PR.
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6.
MAYBE 140,000 STORIES ARE DRIVEN BY PR.
APPROXIMATELY 4.3 MILLION NEWS RELEASES PER DAY.
Approximation based on
10 percent of news being PR driven.
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7.
WHAT MAKES THOSE STORIES STAND OUT?
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8.
WHAT MAKES THOSE STORIES STAND OUT?
“Hi!”
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9.
“Woo hoo.”
OF ALL FISH STORIES, NEMO HAS IT ALL.
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10.
HIS STORY HAS IMPACT.
Nemo’s story initially touches one community, but
grew in magnitude as his father searched for him.
• How much of an audience is affected?
• How direct and immediate is the impact?
• How much magnitude does the story have?
How does this apply to Haiti?
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11.
HIS STORY HAS PROXIMITY.
Nemo’s story has a proximity that ranges from
Papua, New Guinea to Sydney, Australia.
• How close is the action to a locality?
• How direct to a specific industry?
• How close is the connection to an audience?
How does this apply to the iPad?
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12.
HIS STORY HAS TIMELINESS.
Nemo’s story is told in real time.
• How fresh is the story?
• When did the action occur?
• Is the action occurring right now?
How does this apply to the Olympics?
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13.
HIS STORY HAS IMPORTANCE.
For his friends in the fish tank, Nemo’s story
becomes the catalyst for change.
• How will it change people’s lives?
• How dramatic will that change be?
• What are the consequences of that change?
How does this apply to health care?
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14.
HIS STORY HAS PROMINENCE.
As his father, Marlin, continues to search,
Nemo gains exposure and prominence.
• Who is involved in the story?
• Do most people know the company?
• Are any famous people touched by it?
How does this apply to Toyota?
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15.
HIS STORY HAS CONFLICT.
There are dozens of conflicts in the story,
ranging from sharks to deep sea dwellers.
• How volatile are the combatants?
• How colorful is their argument?
• How rash or threatening are their actions?
How does this apply to Sarah Palin?
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16.
HIS STORY HAS NOVELTY.
Dory demonstrates a novelty when
she claims that she can speak whale.
• How often does it occur?
• Is it uncommon and unexpected?
• Is there a novelty that people will enjoy?
How does this apply to classic novelty?
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17.
HIS STORY HAS HUMAN INTEREST.
There are several acts of kindness in the movie,
including those that require risking life and fin.
• How touching is the story?
• How direct or great is the gift?
• How human and hopeful is the content?
How does this apply to Make A Wish?
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18.
HIS STORY HAS SENSITIVITY.
There are several touching moments in the story,
especially as the characters face loss.
• How disastrous is the result?
• How emotional are the people involved?
• How misfortunate and sad is the tragedy?
How does it apply to Jacqueline Blake?
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HIS STORY HAS SPECIAL INTEREST.
Few stories become huge like Nemo.
But even if it didn’t become huge, someone cares.
• Does a niche publication cover the topic?
• Is the story specialized enough?
• Does the material match the news outlet?
How does it apply to science?
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20.
DOES YOUR NEWS RELEASE RISE ABOVE?
• Impact • Conflict
• Proximity • Novelty
• Timeliness • Sensitivity
• Importance • Special Interest
• Prominence • Well Written
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21.
“Oh no.”
EVEN IF IT DOES, YOUR STORY MIGHT NOT RUN.
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22.
“Oh no.”
POPULARITY COULD KILL YOUR STORY.
BREAKING NEWS COULD KILL YOUR STORY.
AN EDITOR COULD KILL YOUR STORY.
A REPORTER COULD SEE A NEW STORY.
BAD WRITING COULD BURY YOUR STORY.
PR FIRM REPUTATION CAN CAUSE DAMAGE.
ASKING FOR AN EMBARGO CAN KILL IT.
THE RELEASE NEVER FINDS ITS WAY HOME.
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23.
MAYBE 140,000 STORIES ARE DRIVEN BY PR.
“So please make me look good!”
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24.
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