Business English Created by Badar-e-Alam-Anwar LETTER WRITINGSales LettersTo some extent, every letter is a sales letter. You are selling your organization’s image and goodwill. Theseletters are an easy and effective way of securing business. No other type of letter influences so manypeople or brings as big a return in terms of money as this letter.More so than other letters, the sales letter is highly specialized, and its writing require exceptionalability and experience.There are two kinds of sales letters:(i) Solicited letter (the organization is invited to respond to sales messages.)(ii) Unsolicited letter (the organization sends out uninvited messages to sell a product or service)Writing whatever type of sales letter, follow these principles.1. Know your Buyer• First identify the characteristics that describe the most likely buyer for your products or services.From research or experience, build a “composite” buyer. The sex, age, occupation, geographiclocation, financial situation, and other characteristics of the “average” buyer. Determine whatappeals will be used in letter. Defining your targeted buyer’s characteristics helps you discover theneeds and desires of these prospective buyers.• For example, you wouldn’t try to sell a “Sixty-Five Plus” insurance plan to college students.The writer of sales letters has a choice of many different appeals. Those used depend upon the aim of theletter, the nature of the product, and the market – the people who will receive the letter. buyer usuallyspend their money for these reasons:• For comfort (air conditioners)• To make money (stock)• The escape physical pain (corn and callous remedy)• To save money (storm windows)• To save time (microwave oven)• To protect family (smoke detector)• To imitate others (sunglasses)• To be in style (new coat)• To be different (exclusive hat)• To avoid trouble (casualty insurance)• For health (toothpaste)• To take advantage of opportunities (investment property)• For enjoyment (television set)• To enhance reputation (charitable contribution)• For cleanliness (soap)• To satisfy appetite (candy)• To avoid effort (power lawn mower)• For beautiful possessions (new cell phone)• To be popular (dancing lessons)• To safeguard possessions (fire insurance)• To be attractive (jewelry, garments)• To be adventurous (travel)2. Prepare a List of BuyersNext, you need a good mailing list. The obvious place to start is your organization’s own list ofbuyers. You can also buy lists from organizations that specialize in compiling and selling them. For saleseffectiveness, a good mailing list must contain the correct names and addresses of people or organizations
Business English Created by Badar-e-Alam-Anwarthat have in common characteristics that make them likely buyers for your products or services.3. Analyze the ProductWhat specific feature of the product or service makes it attractive or useful or appealing? Whatfeatures should be emphasized? What features should be played down? (These analyses are usually madealong with Step 1.) Letters that present a product in terms of what prospective buyers think of it and howthey can use it do more than make sales--they win satisfied customers.4. Decide on the Central Selling PointThe central selling point (CSP) should be the item of information most likely to persuade the buyer tobuy a product or service. After analyzing the buyer and the product. Build your letter around this centralselling point. The CSP might be appearance, durability, comfort, convenience, price, or any other positivefeature that is likely to have the greatest influence on your reader’s purchasing decision.Writing Solicited Sales LettersSolicited sales are the letters that you write in response to an inquiry. With these letters, theorganization has one central goal: to get responses quickly to someone’s request for information, use thedirect plan for the solicited letter.Organizational Plan Responding to Solicited Letters1. Opening paragraph use the good-news approach.a. Answer the inquirer’s questions favorably.b. Indicate that the requested material will be sent.2. Bodya. Answer additional questions.b. Provide educational, resale, or sales promotion information.c. Be truthful about negative information.d. Arrange your answers so your positive responses are at the beginning and the end; embed (put in themiddle) your weaker or negative comments.3. Action endinga. Make the action easy.b. Suggest benefits to reader.c. Focus on the positive aspects.Just Look at the following positive openingWith pleasure we received your letter and it is with further pleasure that we are able to open a creditaccount with our store. All the necessary forms to initiate that account are included with this letter.Writing Unsolicited Sales LettersUnsolicited sales letter are those letters which you write to people who can be persuaded throughthese letters to buy your product or service. These letters demand superior writing skills. Oftenyou will work with a marketing department or even an ad agency; they will make recommendations aboutthe mailing lists, the timing, the core theme, and the visual presentation of brochures andaccompanying material.Once you know what you need to say and whom do you want to say it to, decide how you’regoing to say it. Will you send just a letter, or will you include brochures, samples, response cads, and thelike? Will the letter be printed with and additional colour or special symbols or logos? How many pageswill it run?You’ll also need to decide whether to conduct a multistage campaign, with several mailings and some sortof telephone or in-person follow-up, or to rely on a single mailing.All these decisions depend on the audience you’re trying to reach-their characteristics, their likelyacceptance of or resistance to your message-and what you’re trying to get them to do. In general,expensive items and hard-to-accept propositions call for a more elaborate campaign than low-costproducts and simple actions.
Business English Created by Badar-e-Alam-AnwarA. Attention1. Design a positive opening that awakens a favorable association with the product, need, or cause.2. Write the opening so that it’s appropriate, fresh, honest, interesting, specific, and relevant.3. Promise a benefit to the reader4. Keep the first paragraph short, preferably two to five lines, and sometimes only one.5. For sales, letters, get attention with a provocative question, a significant/startling fact, a solution to aproblem, a special offer/gift, a testimonial, a current event, an illustration, a comparison, an event in thereader’s life, a problem the reader may face, or a quotation.Getting AttentionSales letters start with an attention-getting device. Professionals use some common techniques toattract audience attention. Look at the following beginnings:1. A piece of genuine news. “In the past 60 days, the commercial electricity billings have shrunk by 12percent.”2. The most attractive feature plus the associated benefit. “New control device ends problems withevery type of pilferage!”3. An intriguing number. “Here are three great secrets of the world’s most loved entertainers.”4. A sample of the product. “Here’s your free sample of the new medicated tooth brush.”5. A specific trait shared by the audience. Busy executives need another ‘timesaving’ device”6. A provocative question. “Are you tired of watching inflation eat away at your hard-earned profits?”7. A challenge. “Don’t waste another day wondering how you’re going to become the success you’vealways wanted to be!”8. A solution to a problem. “Tired of chilly air rushing through the cracks around your windows? Staywarm and save energy with Storm Seal Weather stripping.”10. Stressing benefit of previous students.In the last university examination of the university one of our students topped securing recordmarks. In addition, seven out of top ten positions were bagged by our students you too can be a topnotcher!11.For the ninth cricket world cup our juices were announced the official drinks of the world cup.Besides, the world cup management committee declared our juices the best soft drinks.12. Convincing readers through free trialYou can keep the monthly Asia for two weeks. Read the articles and even if you feel that it is notworth your amount just give us a call, our representative will bring back your amount next day.Sales Letter Interestb. Interest1. State information clearly, vividly, and persuasively, relating it to the reader’s concerns.2. Develop the central selling point.3. Feature the product in two ways: physical description and reader benefits.4. Place benefits first, or interweave them with a physical description.5. Describe objective details of the need or product (size, shape, color, scent, sound texture, etc.)6. Use psychological appeals to present the sensation, satisfaction, or pleasure readers will gain.7. Blend cold facts with warm feelings.Arousing Your DesireC. Desire1. Enlist one or more appeals to support the central idea (selling point).2. If the product is valued mainly because of its appearance, describe its physical details.3. If the product is machinery or technical equipment, describe its sturdy construction, fine crafting, andother technical details in terms that help readers visualize themselves using it.4. Include technical sketches and meaningful pictures, charts, and graphs, if necessary.5. For sales letters, provide test results from recognized experts, laboratories, or authoritative agencies.
Business English Created by Badar-e-Alam-AnwarObjectives Suggested descriptionsTo sell porcelain bathroom fixtures “The porcelain finish is glass-smooth.”To sell small cars “To driver who is fed up with bigger, thirstiercars switches to ____.”To sell air travel “For travel elegance, fly with _____.”To sell soft drinks in cans “And cans chill so fast, keeping the flavor freshand full of zip.”To sell a soft drink “You’ll really welcome the cold, crisp taste that sodeeply satisfies ….. the cheerful lift that’s brightand lively.”Objectives Suggested descriptionsTo sell an air deodorant “Make air smell flower-fresh.”To sell shampoo “Hair so satin-bright – airy-light!Stimulate the Reader to ActionTo motivate the reader to act within a certain time, you can use one or more of the following methods:• You don’t have to send any money right now. Take moment to fill in the postpaid ordercard and drop it into mail. Your Asia Today will be shipped the day after we receive yourorder.• Offering a special discountD. Action1. Clearly state the action you desire.2. Provide specific details on how to order the product, donate money, or reach your organizations.3. Ease action with reply cards, preaddressed envelopes, phone numbers, follow-up phone calls.4. Offer a special inducement to act now: time limit or situation urgency, special price for a limited time,premium for acting before a certain date, gift for acting, free trial, no obligation to buy with moreinformation or demonstration, easy payments with no money down, credit-card payments.An Offer of a Free GiftOur gift is already enclosed: a suncatcher to attach to your window. Send your order in and we’ll send youanother one Free.Please place your order by filling in the enclosed postpaid card and save 25% off the market pricebefore September 30.Here are some other ways to motivate the reader to action:• Free trial of the product.• No obligation to buy.• Higher earnings.• Special price for a limited time.• Join with others who already are satisfied.• No salesperson will call.• Name will not be sold to other firms.In short, writing successful sales letters is difficult. Some letters may take weeks to be perfect. Butfinancial returns can be great. Good selling presents the proposition in such a way that the readersbecome convinced. Achieving your goal requires careful editing and rewriting.This effective sales letter offers the reader a special discount just for bringing the letter to the store.Attention Make The Photo ShopYour First Stop….…Whenever you need camera or photographic equipment:Desire Whether you want a highly sophisticated sound movie system or a simple pocketcamera, whether you’re an amateur photographer or a professional.
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