Correct your Thesis Statement
• Check for COHERENCE
• Caning should not be allowed in schools
because it
- affects student...
• Caning should not be allowed in schools
because it …
• affects students’ physical
• discipline problems still occur
• st...
FIRST DRAFT
• Thesis statement + body paragraphs
• Arial 11, spacing 1.5
• 2x ‘enter’ to begin new paragraph

• NO need co...
CAUSES?

http://www.thestar.com.my/News/Nation/2013/12/28/No-handphone-for-you-if-you-are-not-ma
EFFECTS?
CAUSE – EFFECT ESSAY
• Block Pattern 1
• Block Pattern 2
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• Block Pattern 4
• Block Pattern 5
http://www.thestar.com.my/News/Nation/2013/10/18/Safe-place-forunwanted-babies-Hatches-provide-lifeline-for-unwed-mothers....
Surah 36. Ya Seen, Verse 62:

And he had already led astray from among you
much of creation, so did you not use reason?

“...
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  1. 1. Correct your Thesis Statement • Check for COHERENCE • Caning should not be allowed in schools because it - affects students’ physical - affects students’ emotional and mental wellbeing - fails to curb indiscipline in schools - Caning should not be allowed in schools because it affects students’ physical, emotional and mental well-being and fails to curb indiscipline in schools
  2. 2. • Caning should not be allowed in schools because it … • affects students’ physical • discipline problems still occur • students’ mental and emotional well-being will deteriorate *simple sentences combined = ??
  3. 3. FIRST DRAFT • Thesis statement + body paragraphs • Arial 11, spacing 1.5 • 2x ‘enter’ to begin new paragraph • NO need cover page • Mind your Grammar • Deadline: NEXT WEEK, 2nd Lecture.
  4. 4. CAUSES? http://www.thestar.com.my/News/Nation/2013/12/28/No-handphone-for-you-if-you-are-not-ma
  5. 5. EFFECTS?
  6. 6. CAUSE – EFFECT ESSAY • Block Pattern 1 • Block Pattern 2 • Block Pattern 3 • Block Pattern 4 • Block Pattern 5
  7. 7. http://www.thestar.com.my/News/Nation/2013/10/18/Safe-place-forunwanted-babies-Hatches-provide-lifeline-for-unwed-mothers.aspx
  8. 8. Surah 36. Ya Seen, Verse 62: And he had already led astray from among you much of creation, so did you not use reason? “Dan sesungguhnya Syaitan itu telah menyesatkan golongan yang ramai di antara kamu; (setelah kamu mengetahui akibat mereka) maka tidakkah sepatutnya kamu berfikir dan insaf? http://tafsirsunnah.wordpress.com/2012/01/09/tafsir-yasin-ayat-59-74/

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