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Surveys and Peer Feedback for Idea
Gender Male
How old are you? 18
How could the idea be improved? As of present, I think this is a very solid idea. As
long as it sticks to the lyrical narrative it will be a
highly successful video, my only concern is the
number of shots required to communicate the
message.
What elements of the idea did you like/dislike? I particularly enjoy the relatable content of the
idea and its narrative.
As an idea, does it appeal to you as the target
audience?
Most certainly.
Do you think it would fit in the current scene of
music videos?
Without a doubt.
Do you have any further comments? Other than that I feel this is a very strong idea
and concept, I look forward to viewing the final
product.
Gender Male
How old are you? 18
How could the idea be improved? Have the video black and white until he puts his
shoes on.
What elements of the idea did you like/dislike? I like the idea that he has a good day after he has
his new shoes on because it relates to the song.
As an idea, does it appeal to you as the target
audience?
Yes this would appeal to me, and could work as
an advert for shoes also.
Do you think it would fit in the current scene of
music videos?
Yes definitely. You get some strange music
videos but this one would fit in with the song.
Do you have any further comments? It sounds great!
Gender Female
How old are you? 18
How could the idea be improved? Try and make sure the sun is shining when he is
happy and when he is sad make sure it is cold
and cloudy.
What elements of the idea did you like/dislike? I liked the idea it’s well thought through, I think
it will work well.
As an idea, does it appeal to you as the target
audience?
Yes as I am a teenager and we all go through the
stages of feeling rubbish and sometime when
our mums take us shopping it cheers us up, so I
can relate when he buys new shoes and he feels
on top of the world.
Do you think it would fit in the current scene of
music videos?
Yes I do, everyone now a days every young teen
has problems with self-image, and teens will
take a real interest in this video as they can
relate to their “idol”.
Do you have any further comments? Make sure the shoes are enhanced, when editing
the video. As this seems to be the key part of the
music video. Well done I hope you do well and
enjoy making the video and can learn something
from having new shoes.
Gender Male
How old are you? 18
How could the idea be improved? When first viewing the shoes, they could glow to
emphasize the specialty of them.
What elements of the idea did you like/dislike? I like the idea that his new shoes help his day
and self-confidence pick up.
As an idea, does it appeal to you as the target
audience?
Definitely, fashion and self-image is massive in
teen culture and this video will reflect that fact.
Do you think it would fit in the current scene of
music videos?
It sounds like a video that will perfectly fit in with
other summer songs and videos.
Do you have any further comments? Try and use lots of different and costumes, just
to keep the audience’s attention and ‘self-image’
theme.
After carrying out this survey for my final idea, I was given back lots of constructive ideas and
criticism. Lots of these are ideas I hadn’t considered myself but will work perfectly with the mood
and style of my idea. I was also pleased to find out that the idea itself was appealing and intriguing
for members of my target audience, if it wasn’t so appealing people may not have been as inclined
to leave some of the constructive and development comments/answers.
An idea that was mentioned a few times was the use of the shoes glowing or having a colour
enhancement to really demonstrate the message of the video. Another great idea that was
mentioned was the use of black and white footage prior to the shoes being worn. This would be a
great effect and one that I had not initially thought of. I would work in a similar style to the original
‘Wizard of Oz’ film, the way that life seems more dull and gloomy to begin with but then the sudden
use of colour will portray a happy and uplifting feeling for the audience.

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Surveys and peer feedback for idea

  • 1. Surveys and Peer Feedback for Idea Gender Male How old are you? 18 How could the idea be improved? As of present, I think this is a very solid idea. As long as it sticks to the lyrical narrative it will be a highly successful video, my only concern is the number of shots required to communicate the message. What elements of the idea did you like/dislike? I particularly enjoy the relatable content of the idea and its narrative. As an idea, does it appeal to you as the target audience? Most certainly. Do you think it would fit in the current scene of music videos? Without a doubt. Do you have any further comments? Other than that I feel this is a very strong idea and concept, I look forward to viewing the final product. Gender Male How old are you? 18 How could the idea be improved? Have the video black and white until he puts his shoes on. What elements of the idea did you like/dislike? I like the idea that he has a good day after he has his new shoes on because it relates to the song. As an idea, does it appeal to you as the target audience? Yes this would appeal to me, and could work as an advert for shoes also. Do you think it would fit in the current scene of music videos? Yes definitely. You get some strange music videos but this one would fit in with the song. Do you have any further comments? It sounds great! Gender Female How old are you? 18 How could the idea be improved? Try and make sure the sun is shining when he is happy and when he is sad make sure it is cold and cloudy. What elements of the idea did you like/dislike? I liked the idea it’s well thought through, I think it will work well. As an idea, does it appeal to you as the target audience? Yes as I am a teenager and we all go through the stages of feeling rubbish and sometime when our mums take us shopping it cheers us up, so I can relate when he buys new shoes and he feels on top of the world. Do you think it would fit in the current scene of music videos? Yes I do, everyone now a days every young teen has problems with self-image, and teens will take a real interest in this video as they can relate to their “idol”.
  • 2. Do you have any further comments? Make sure the shoes are enhanced, when editing the video. As this seems to be the key part of the music video. Well done I hope you do well and enjoy making the video and can learn something from having new shoes. Gender Male How old are you? 18 How could the idea be improved? When first viewing the shoes, they could glow to emphasize the specialty of them. What elements of the idea did you like/dislike? I like the idea that his new shoes help his day and self-confidence pick up. As an idea, does it appeal to you as the target audience? Definitely, fashion and self-image is massive in teen culture and this video will reflect that fact. Do you think it would fit in the current scene of music videos? It sounds like a video that will perfectly fit in with other summer songs and videos. Do you have any further comments? Try and use lots of different and costumes, just to keep the audience’s attention and ‘self-image’ theme. After carrying out this survey for my final idea, I was given back lots of constructive ideas and criticism. Lots of these are ideas I hadn’t considered myself but will work perfectly with the mood and style of my idea. I was also pleased to find out that the idea itself was appealing and intriguing for members of my target audience, if it wasn’t so appealing people may not have been as inclined to leave some of the constructive and development comments/answers. An idea that was mentioned a few times was the use of the shoes glowing or having a colour enhancement to really demonstrate the message of the video. Another great idea that was mentioned was the use of black and white footage prior to the shoes being worn. This would be a great effect and one that I had not initially thought of. I would work in a similar style to the original ‘Wizard of Oz’ film, the way that life seems more dull and gloomy to begin with but then the sudden use of colour will portray a happy and uplifting feeling for the audience.