That was pretty awful one whole slide was destroyed the rest was pretty much emotionally driven. Facts were poorly used and the 'What can you do slide' is... it’s terrible. The solution to deforestation lies at a governmental scale not a personal one. What was the point of this? You’re who deforestation will effect you pages are so broad assumptions that it can be completely disregarded. Grand children being sick is not an
affect. Destruction of environments and economic decline due to loss of industries with temperature change and environment loss is an affect. In relation to how bad is deforestation - 'Many icebergs have melted' well they would anyway. The nature of icebergs is to move with sea current and melt in warmer climates, you should be referring to glacial retreat and ice sheet loss (Which in fact forms ice burgs oddly enough as the edge of the sheet cleaves into the ocean). In relation to your why page: You’ve missed the main reason why. You are focusing on a personal level, the real question is: Why is unsustainable deforestation occur? Answer it’s more profitable in the short term to Less Economically Developed Countries that need money fast to pay off Loans and increase their GDP.
Your definition of Deforestation is also incorrect. Deforestation is the reduction of a wooded area by ANY means, not necessarily the complete removal though that is generally the final outcome.
Desertification is not a product of climate change but that of soil integrity loss which then changes the local climate due to infiltration rates and evaporation rate changes,
Presentation criticism: Unlabeled diagrams are doom. Covered text is doom. Nigh empty slides is doom. Inefficient use of space and incorrect terminology is (once again) doom. Correct grammatical form is also a good start 'Use *A* handkerchief'.
References should be sited as part of the presentation due to the nature of the information you were utilizing.
Final remark: Not suitable for any kind of academics. Nor would I recommend this for non academics... . This, as a presentation, is poor. The information is generally worse. In future perhaps it would be worth utilizing reference material such as Nature (magazine) or disitations, reports and government research,
As an A - level student I was viewing this CRITICALLY please don’t take an offense. I happened to be compiling reference for this subject and came across this. Geography is a good subject and I hope you continue in it’s study though I must advise that you’re presentation skills improve as they will be exceptionally important in the future.
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