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    • ESSAY ORGANIZER Submit by Email Print FormSAVE TO YOUR COMPUTER BEFORE TYPING - COMPLETE USING ADOBE READER - SAVE OFTEN.Your Name Torrie Ellena LasherYour Topic The Jabbawockeez are the best dance crew ever. Type of Essay need help choosing? Persuasive / Argumentative Compare / Contrast Cause / Effect Definition Informational Interview Descriptive Evaluation Literary Analysis Division and Classification Narrative OtherBRAINSTORMINGLink to your Mindmap http://www.mindmeister.com/29504643/jabbawockeez-is-the-best-dance-crew-ever OR Free Mind Map SiteAttach your Mindmap illustration file here Mind MeisterThesis StatementNeed help?I believe that... the Jabbawockeez are the best dance crew ever. Is your thesis narrowly focused? READ THIS BEFORE MOVING ON Did you complete the thesis checklist? Is your language at a high-level?Your Subtopics They all acquire different Topic They come from different Topic Topic Theyre all advanced in skills to offer the dance 1 backgrounds. 2 3 various types of dance. crew. Are your topics different? Are your topics interesting? By discussing these topics, will you be able to prove your thesis true?
    • Topic 1 Each of the Jabbawockeez dance crew members come from different backgrounds.What is a good sentence to Not all of them are from the same town, same family, or from the same ethnicintroduce this topic to your group.reader? Is your language at a high-level?Support #1 Three of the members are from Sacramento, California which are Kevin, Joe, Phil.Source http://jabbawockeez.com/jbwkz.html Is your language at a high-level? One member is from Phoenix, Arizona which is Phi while another is from Los Angeles, California Support #2 which is Ben. Source http://jabbawockeez.com/jbwkz.html Is your language at a high-level? The last two members that make up the crew are from Las Vegas, Nevada and San Diego Support #3 California which are Chris and Rainen. Source http://jabbawockeez.com/jbwkz.html Is your language at a high-level? What is a good sentence to The Jabbawockeez crew members are from different backgrounds which transition into the next means that they are advanced in different skills which contributes to the paragraph? Transition word help dance crew. Is your language at a high-level? QUICK PARAGRAPH CHECKLIST Is the information arranged from less important to most important? Does every sentence help support your topic? Does this information get you a step closer to proving your thesis? Do you provide sentences of different lengths and complexities in this paragraph?
    • Topic 2 Some of the members from the dance crew are better at things that the other arent.What is a good sentence to Watching the season, I realized that some of the members couldnt do dances thatintroduce this topic to your the others could. Watching them also helped me realize that whoever is better atreader? doing a trick, does them more often to make their performance better. Is your language at a high-level? If one member is good at doing head spins, then that one person will do different kinds of spins.Support #1 Teaching head spins to some of the members of the crew in short amount of time is hard work, so they worked around it.Source The dance show which can be found on the internet. Is your language at a high-level? The flips in the show were very unique and very crazy, thats why they came out on top. I saw Support #2 some of them try to attempt these flips and gave up but, there was always one that member that could do them better. Source The dance show which can be found on the internet. Is your language at a high-level? Like all dance crews, the leader was in charge of coming up with the dances. It was hard for him Support #3 to do it because they try to add different types of dances together to make their performance amazing. So, that one person would be in charge of coming up with the dances. Source The dance show which can be found on the internet. Is your language at a high-level? What is a good sentence to Different backgrounds means that they come with special skills that the transition into the next others dont. Thats why the call themselves the Jabbawockeez, a figment of paragraph? Transition word help your imagination. They add their skills that they learned from various dances to make their performance out of this world. Is your language at a high-level? QUICK PARAGRAPH CHECKLIST Is the information arranged from less important to most important? Does every sentence help support your topic? Does this information get you a step closer to proving your thesis? Do you provide sentences of different lengths and complexities in this paragraph?
    • Topic 3 The dance crew added many of the different genres of dances to make their performances outstanding.What is a good sentence to A dance crew is not made up of one genre of dance, you have to be able to putintroduce this topic to your various genres together and be prepared to dance to just about anything. Thatsreader? why during the show, the crew had to go through various trials to prove that they are the best dance crew in America. Is your language at a high-level? In one episode, they took the song "Apologize by One Republic" and made it look like it was aSupport #1 fast song. Apologize is a very slow song, but they made it work.Source Youtube. Is your language at a high-level? Support #2 In another episode, they had to learn how to do a dance from different cultures. Source Is your language at a high-level? Support #3 Source Is your language at a high-level? QUICK PARAGRAPH CHECKLIST Is the information arranged from less important to most important? Does every sentence help support your topic? Does this information get you a step closer to proving your thesis? Do you provide sentences of different lengths and complexities in this paragraph?
    • Introduction ParagraphNeed help?Ask yourselfHow can I get my readers attention?Imagine your reader knows nothing about your topic. What background information could I give my reader about mytopic?Why should the reader care to know this information?What is it you are trying to prove?Attention GetterNeed help?What was your attention getter? A Question A Quick Story An Interesting Fact A Quote A Shocking Statistic An Unusual Statement OtherBackground Information- Introduce your topic, but notyour thesis - Provide insider details thatwould help your reader betterunderstand your topic, but notinformation you are discussing inyour support. Is your language at a high-level?Why should your reader care?Complete this sentence..It is important that you readthis essay because... Is your language at a high-level?Thesis Statement(paste the one you alreadywrote on page 1) QUICK PARAGRAPH CHECKLIST Did you avoid referring to yourself or your reader directly? Would you want to read your paper after reading your introduction?
    • Conclusion ParagraphNeed help?A conclusion should...Include a brief summary of the papers main points. Evoke a vivid imageSuggest results or consequences Wrap it all up for your readerLeave a lasting impressionRestate your thesis ina fresh, new way Is your language at a high-level?Summarize /Reflect / Give Finalthoughts on Topic 1 Is your language at a high-level? Did you summarize AND provide a final thought?Summarize /Reflect / Give Finalthoughts on Topic 2 Is your language at a high-level? Did you summarize AND provide a final thought?Summarize /Reflect / Give Finalthoughts on Topic 3 Is your language at a high-level? Did you summarize AND provide a final thought?Final Thought-Contains vivid language-Compound or Complex sentence-Leave a lasting impression-Sums up your essay in oneincredible sentence Is your language at a high-level? QUICK PARAGRAPH CHECKLIST Did you avoid referring to yourself or your reader directly? Did you feel your conclusion leaves the reader satisfied and impressed?
    • BIBLIOGRAPHY Copy and Paste your citations you created using Easybib. -MLA FormatCitationsinAlphabeticalOrder Paragraph Organization- Read to see where your sentences go in your essay. Paragraph 1- Introduction Paragraph 3 - Body Paragraph 2 Paragraph 5 - Conclusion - Attention Getter - Topic Introduction - Thesis Restatement - Background Information - Support 1 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 1 - Why should we care sentence - Support 2 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 2 - Thesis Statement - Support 3 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 3 - Transition - Strong Final Thought Paragraph 2 - Body Paragraph 1 Paragraph 4 - Body Paragraph 3 Final page - Bibliography - Topic Introduction - On a new page - Support 1 - Topic Introduction - Titled - Bibliography - Support 2 - Support 1 - Use citations created from Easybib - Support 3 - Support 2 - MLA Format - Transition - Support 3 - Alphabetized Before you submit checklist Is your paper in Time New Roman font? Do you proofread at least 3 times? Do you use 12 pt font? Has someone other than you read this paper? Do you use double space? Did I put everything in my own words to avoid plagiarism? Do I spell everything correctly? Have I done my best? Did I check all punctuation and capitalization? Did I rid my essay of unnecessary qualifiers like "Really" "Just" "Sort of" "Like" and "So" Do you get rid of BABY WORDS and use a thesaurus to enhance your language? mrdaley@mrdaley.com