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    Top admit toefl event beatoefl 20131025 (coupon code inside) Top admit toefl event beatoefl 20131025 (coupon code inside) Presentation Transcript

    • PRESS & CONFERENCES Won 1st place in Echelon 2013 Tokyo Satellite startup competition
    • PRESS & CONFERENCES Participated in Echelon Conference Singapore in 2011 and 2013. Featured article in Taiwan’s business magazine in 2011. Featured article in Taiwan’s major business magazine in 2013.
    • PRESS & CONFERENCES Selected as one the the Top 6 Internet Start-ups by Technode in 2011. Featured article in Shanghai Morning Post in 2009.
    • SOLUTION Admission
    • BRANCH Research Provide editing services to researchers in universities and higher academic institutions so they can successfully publish their research in international SCI and SSCI English Journals.
    • ABOUT US  Founded in 2005, our mission is to help our clients gain admission to the schools of their top choice by providing quick & professional editing of their essays, personal statements, statements of purpose, resumes, and recommendation letters.  Since then, we have helped almost 10,000 students obtain the admissions to schools of their dreams.
    • GLOBAL TEAM Stefan Schneider Charles Chin CEO & Founder CTO Helped hundreds of students from China, Taiwan, and US get into elite graduate schools such as Harvard, MIT, Stanford, etc. Attended graduate school in WisconsinMadison and also GSB Stanford SI while working in the US. 10 years exp. as Internet entrepreneur Digital director Saatchi Grew sales by 110% in 3 yrs to EUR 300M English Editor David, M.S. Managing Editor Stanford University Harvard University Jack, M.P.P. English Editor Amanda North Carolina
    • CLIENTS FROM 20 COUNTRIES… North America US, Canada Europe Austria, Greece, UK, Switzerland East Asia Japan, China, Taiwan, HK Middle East Saudi Arabia, UAE, Kuwait South East Asia Australia, Thailand, Vietnam, Singapore, Bangladesh
    • Elements of the Admissions  G.P.A.  Class Rank  Test Scores (TOEFL, GRE, LSAT)  Caliber of Education  Work Experience  Extra-Curricular Activities  Personal Statement  Personal Recommendations
    • Elements of a Good Essay  Well Organized  Good Transitions  Correct Grammar  Good “Flow”  Compelling Reasoning  Exciting & Interesting to Read  Makes you Unique
    • Errors to Avoid  Writing Errors  Jargon  General or Vague Statements  A Laundry List of Accomplishments or Activities  Poor English Grammar  Unprofessionalism  Writing that is Dull or is Boring
    • Recommendations: Also Important!  Recommender Must Like you and be Positive  They must Appear to Know you Well  Must Give Specific Examples of Achievements  Must be Professionally Objective  Professional Format and Introduction Help
    • Recommendations – Re-Writes Example 1 Weaker Statement: “Mr. X has excellent analytical and mathematical abilities.” Stronger Statement: “Relative to other students in the astrophysics program, Mr. X h as far superior analytical and mathematic abilities than his peers.” Example 2 Weaker Statement: “Mr. X had an impressive and outstanding conclusion for his research paper.” Stronger Statement: “Unlike other students who simply focused on completing the assignment, Mr. X developed his own unique theory to explain the phenomena.”
    • Information About Resumes  Needs to be Concise  Utilize “Action” Words (Directed, Managed, Coordinated)  Most Important Information First  Have Appropriate Dates and Locations  Professional and Error Free  Standard Non-Flashy Format  Minimal Personal Information
    • Colorful and vivid resume?!
    • Neat resume to show your strengths!
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    • Special Offer  Enter Amjn2saM to get 15% off for any essay you want editing.  Expired by 2013.
    • Thanks for listening !