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Topic 1 HistoryWhat is one good sentenceto introduce this topic to The Galápagos islands have a semi-pleasing history.your...
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  1. 1. ESSAY ORGANIZER Submit by Email Print FormSAVE TO YOUR COMPUTER BEFORE TYPING-COMPLETE USING ADOBE READER-SAVE OFTENYour Name Tiffany MeadeYour Topic Galápagos islands Type of Essay Persuasive / Argumentative Compare / Contrast Cause / Effect Literary Analysis Informational Interview Descriptive Evaluation Research Other Division and Classification Narrative Definition PersonalBRAINSTORMINGLink to your Mindmap http://www.mindmeister.com/maps/show/30117457 OR Free Mind Map SitesAttach your Mindmap illustration file here Mind Meister Bubbl.us Mind42Thesis StatementNeed help?I believe that... the Galápagos islands is a place you should sojourn to before you die.* READ - Quick Note Is your thesis narrowly focused?You should test whether or not it is a thesisstatement by imagining the words, "I believe that" Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean?before the thesis statement.Those three words are not actually part of thethesis statement.Your Subtopics Topic Topic Topic history activities tourist attractions 1 2 3 Most Important Topic / Strongest 2nd Most Important Topic 3rd Most Important Topic / Weakest Are your topics completely different? Are your topics interesting?
  2. 2. Topic 1 HistoryWhat is one good sentenceto introduce this topic to The Galápagos islands have a semi-pleasing history.your reader? Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean?Support #11-5 sentences The Galápagos islands are on top of volcanoes.Need a transition word?Source The Galapagos islands book by Roger Perry Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean? Support #2 Among the first to arrive at the Galápagos islands were marine animals and Some of the 1-5 sentences animals that are there are penguins, giant tortoises. The islands also have sea birds and Need a transition word? other types of birds. Source The Galapagos islands book by Roger Perry Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean? Support #3 1-5 sentences The islands are off the coast of Ecuador. Need a transition word? Source The Galapagos islands book by Roger Perry Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean? What is one good sentence to transition into the next paragraph? In other words the history of the Galápagos islands are semi-pleasing. Need a transition word? Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean? QUICK PARAGRAPH CHECKLIST Is the information arranged from less important to most important? Does every sentence help support your topic? Does this information get you a step closer to proving your thesis? Do you provide sentences of different lengths and complexities in this paragraph?
  3. 3. Topic 2 ActivitiesWhat is one good sentence These are some the activities that you could do while you visit the Galápagosto introduce this topic to islands.your reader? Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean?Support #1 You could go snorkeling. If you do you could see some of the fish and turtles that are1-5 sentences under the ocean and if any other kinds of animals are under there.Need a transition word?Source http://www.cruisesingalapagos.com/snorkeling.htm Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean? Support #2 You could also go surfing. If you like the water and surfing you could go while your 1-5 sentences down there as long as its not stormy. Need a transition word? Source http://www.cruisesingalapagos.com/surfing.htm Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean? Support #3 1-5 sentences If you dont want to go just surfing there is kayaking. Need a transition word? Source http://www.cruisesingalapagos.com/tours/kayaking.htm Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean? What is one good sentence to To put it differently these are the things you might like to do if your transition into the next paragraph? visiting down in the galapagos. Need a transition word? Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean? QUICK PARAGRAPH CHECKLIST Is the information arranged from less important to most important? Does every sentence help support your topic? Does this information get you a step closer to proving your thesis? Do you provide sentences of different lengths and complexities in this paragraph?
  4. 4. Topic 3 Tourist attractionsWhat is one good sentenceto introduce this topic to The Galápagos islands have quite a few tourist attractions.your reader? Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean?Support #1 You could go see wolf island, another island in the Galápagos islands. You could go1-5 sentences underwater diving and surfing.Need a transition word?Source http://islands.travour.com/galapagos-island/tourist-attractions-in-galapagos-island.html Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean? Support #2 You can see sea lions sometimes. People said that you can see them in unthinkable 1-5 sentences places. Need a transition word? Source http://www.igougo.com/attractions-l758-c65-Galapagos_Islands_Tourist_Attractions.html Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean? Support #3 While your down there you could see leon dormido that means "sleeping lion." The leon 1-5 sentences dormido is a rock formation. Need a transition word? Source http://www.igougo.com/attractions-l758-c65-Galapagos_Islands_Tourist_Attractions.html Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean? QUICK PARAGRAPH CHECKLIST Is the information arranged from less important to most important? Does every sentence help support your topic? Does this information get you a step closer to proving your thesis? Do you provide sentences of different lengths and complexities in this paragraph?
  5. 5. Introduction ParagraphNeed help?Ask yourself1) How can I get my readers attention?2) Imagine your reader knows nothing about your topic. What background information could I give my reader aboutmy topic?3) Why should the reader care to know this information?4) What is it you are trying to prove?Attention Getter What would you pick if you were going to the Galápagos islands either to see stuff or1 Sentence learn about the history?Need help?What was your attention getter? A Question A Quick Story An Interesting Fact A Quote A Shocking Statistic An Unusual Statement OtherBackground Information 2-5 Sentences- Introduce your topic, but notyour thesis The Galápagos islands are a really nice place that you would probably like to - Provide insider details that see. They are located in the pacific ocean there is about 7 islands and 6 smallerwould help your reader better ones and about 18,000 people that live down there.understand your topic, withoutproviding information you arediscussing in your support. Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean?Why should your reader care?Complete this sentence..It is important that you read thisessay because... you could learn stuff that you didnt know before about the Galápagos*Read - Quick Note islands that you would know now."It is important that you read this essay because"is a way to help you word this sentence and those9 words should not be copied and pasted intoyour essay. Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean?Thesis Statement(paste the one you already I believe that the Galápagos islands is a place you should sojourn to before you die.wrote on page 1) QUICK PARAGRAPH CHECKLIST Did you avoid referring to yourself or your reader directly? Would you want to read your paper after reading your introduction?
  6. 6. Conclusion ParagraphNeed help?A conclusion should...1) Include a brief summary of the papers main points.2) Suggest results or consequences3) Leave a lasting impressionRestate your thesis in These are some things that might make you think you want to go down to the islandsa fresh, new way sometime in your life. Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean?Summarize / Reflect / GiveFinal thoughts on Topic 1 The islands are off of Ecuador. They got put on the map sometime in the 1500s. I1-3 Sentences think they have a kind of nice history except for being on volcanoes.Need a transition word? Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean?Summarize / Reflect / GiveFinal thoughts on Topic 21-3 SentencesNeed a transition word? Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean?Summarize / Reflect / GiveFinal thoughts on Topic 31-3 SentencesNeed a transition word? Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean?Final Thought1 Sentence-Contains vivid language-Compound or Complex sentence-Leave a lasting impression-Sums up your essay in oneincredible sentenceNeed a transition word? Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean? QUICK PARAGRAPH CHECKLIST Did you avoid referring to yourself or your reader directly? Did you feel your conclusion leaves the reader satisfied and impressed?
  7. 7. BIBLIOGRAPHY Copy and Paste your citations you created using Easybib You will be able to copy and paste this onto your Bibliography page.CitationsinAlphabeticalOrder Paragraph Organization- Copy and Paste your sentences in the correct order Paragraph 1- Introduction Paragraph 3 - Body Paragraph 2 Paragraph 5 - Conclusion - Attention Getter - Topic Introduction - Thesis Restatement - Background Information - Support 1 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 1 - Why should we care sentence - Support 2 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 2 - Thesis Statement - Support 3 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 3 - Transition - Strong Final Thought Paragraph 2 - Body Paragraph 1 Paragraph 4 - Body Paragraph 3 Final page - Bibliography - Topic Introduction - On a new page - Support 1 - Topic Introduction - Titled - Bibliography - Support 2 - Support 1 - Use citations created from Easybib - Support 3 - Support 2 - MLA Format - Transition - Support 3 - Alphabetized Before you submit checklist Is your paper in Time New Roman font? Do you proofread at least 3 times? Do you use 12 pt font and double space? Has someone other than you read this paper? Do I spell everything correctly? Did I put everything in my own words to avoid plagiarism? Did I check all punctuation and capitalization? Have I done my best? Did I rid my essay of unnecessary qualifiers like "Really" "Just" "Sort of" "Like" and "So" Do you get rid of BABY WORDS and use a thesaurus to enhance your language? mrdaley@mrdaley.com

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