A Long Walk to Water: Lesson3 unit3

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7th Grade ELA Module 1 Unit 3

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  • 1. DO NOW Take out “Unexpected Links” and questions (in your notebook) Entry Task • What does “cite” mean? • Put a star next to anything cited in the poem from last night!
  • 2. A Long Walk to Water Learning Objectives I can cite text-based evidence to support the comparison and contrasting of Salva and Nya in my two-voice poem. I can analyze a model two-voice poem using a rubric. I can plan my two-voice poem.
  • 3. A Long Walk to Water Poetry Writing “Citing” Evidence When have we “cited” before? What is the best way to “cite?” ** Take out the “I Would Do Anything” poem featuring Uncle Jewiir and Nya’s uncle
  • 4. A Long Walk to Water Poetry Writing “Citing” Evidence Look at bottom of the model poem What is the Works Cited section at the bottom? …discuss with a shoulder partner
  • 5. A Long Walk to Water Poetry Writing Vocabulary Back of your notebooks… plagiarism: using someone else’s idea without giving them credit Can avoid it by: 1) Including a Works Cited list 2) Using quotes and include page #
  • 6. A Long Walk to Water Poetry Writing Rubric for a Poem • Read the rubric • Notice the text in italics • Notice the text in bold • What do you notice about this rubric?
  • 7. Poetry Writing Rubric CRITERIA 4 3 2 1 0 Shows a lack of comprehension of the text or task. *Row 1* Comparing Points of View (Content and Analysis) Clearly introduce a topic in a manner that is compelling and follows logically from the task and purpose. Clearly introduce a topic in a manner that follows from the task and purpose. Introduce a topic in a manner that follows generally from the task and purpose. Introduce a topic in a manner that does not logically follow from the task and purpose. The poem compares Nya and Salva’s experiences and uses evidence from informational text(s) to enhance the meaning. The comparison and use of evidence are insightful. The poem compares Nya and Salva’s experiences around a theme in the novel and uses evidence from informational texts. The poem generally compares Nya and Salva and it makes sense given the information texts and the book. The central idea of the poem does not logically follow from the informational texts or the book. The poem demonstrates a lack of comprehension of the informational texts or book.
  • 8. Poetry Writing Rubric CRITERIA 4 3 2 Command of Evidence Develop the topic with relevant, wellchosen facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other info. and examples from the text(s). Develop the topic with relevant facts, definitions, details, quotations or other information and examples from the text(s). Partially develop the topic of the essay with the use of some textual evidence, some of which may be irrelevant. The main idea of the poem and the comparison of Salva and Nya are developed with wellchosen and concrete evidence and quote from the texts.. The main idea of the poem and the comparison of Salva and Nya are developed with relevant evidence and quotes from the texts. *Row 2* Some evidence and quotes from the texts help compare Salva and Nya and partially develop the main idea of the poem. 1 Demonstrate an attempt to use evidence, but only develop ideas with minimal, occasional evidence which is generally invalid or irrelevant. There is an attempt to use evidence and quotes from the texts, but they are generally invalid or irrelevant. 0 Provide no evidence or provide evidence that is completely irrelevant. There are no quotes or evidence from the texts or they are completely irrelevant to the topic of the poem.
  • 9. Poetry Writing Rubric CRITERIA 4 3 2 Cohesion, Organization and Style Exhibit clear organization with skillful use of transitions….. The organization creates a unified poem that enhances meaning Exhibit clear organization with transitions… The poem has a beginning, middle and end that connect to each other to create a unified poem. Exhibit some attempt at organization, with inconsistent transitions… The poem has a beginning, middle and end, but there is no clear connection between sections. *Row 3* Establish and maintain a formal style… The style and language of the poem are appropriate, sophisticated and develops a notable sense of voice. Establish and maintain a formal style… The style and language of the poem are consistent and appropriate. Establish but fail to maintain a formal style… The style and language of the poem are appropriate at times, but not consistently. 1 Exhibit little attempt at organization… The organization of the poem does not support the main idea or the comparison of Salva and Nya. Lack of formal style…. The style and language of the poem are imprecise or inappropriate given the main idea. 0 Exhibit no evidence of organization… The poem has no evidence of organization. Use language that is predominately incoherent or copied directly from the text. The poem uses language that is generally incoherent or only quotes from the texts are used.
  • 10. Poetry Writing Rubric CRITERIA *Row 4 Control of Conventions 4 Demonstrate grade appropriate command of conventions, with few errors. Use of capitalization and spelling is gradeappropriate with few errors. Quotes and citations are punctuated correctly. 3 Demonstrate appropriate command of conventions with occasional errors that do not hinder comprehension. Occasional capitalization and spelling errors do not hinder comprehension. Quotes and citations are generally punctuated correctly. There is a Works Cited with few errors. 2 1 Demonstrate emerging command of conventions, with errors that may hinder comprehension. Demonstrate a lack of command of conventions, with frequent errors that hinder comprehension Some capitalization and spelling errors may hinder comprehension. Quotes and citations are inconsistently punctuated. There is a Works Cited page that contains some errors. Frequent capitalization and spelling errors hinder comprehension. There is an attempt to punctuate quotes and citations. There is a Works Cited page with many errors. 0 Are minimal, making assessment of conventions unreliable. Capitalization and spelling errors prevent the reader from understanding the poem. Punctuation is not used to signify quotes or citations. There is no Works Cited page.
  • 11. A Long Walk to Water Poetry Writing Look at the model poem • Where is the beginning? • Where is the middle? • Where is the end? • Where is the main idea? -What line?
  • 12. A Long Walk to Water Poetry Writing Juba Partners • Re-read the poem • “Grade” it with the rubric • 1-4 for each section…be ready to explain why!
  • 13. A Long Walk to Water Poetry Writing What lines showed evidence? Speaker _____________Line __________ Speaker _____________Line __________ Speaker _____________Line __________ Speaker _____________Line __________
  • 14. A Long Walk to Water Poetry Writing Planning YOUR poem! • On your own, begin to plan out YOUR poem • Be sure to use evidence (from your organizer!) • Be sure to use the rubric!
  • 15. A Long Walk to Water Exit Ticket Exit Ticket! 1. What does it mean to cite your sources? 2. Why is it important to cite your sources? 3. What two things do you need to do to cite your sources correctly?
  • 16. A Long Walk to Water Homework Homework • Finish the poem planner page • Include works cited on the back