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<ul><li>Personal Narrative </li></ul><ul><li>June.18.2010 </li></ul><ul><li>LTL </li></ul><ul><li>Introductory Metaphor </...
<ul><li>To be an Emergency Medical Technician is one of my passions.  </li></ul>
<ul><li>I was small beautiful  plant. And I grew into a big outstanding plant. </li></ul>
<ul><li>I decided to do my project on breast implants, because I admire people that have them done. </li></ul>
<ul><li>I barely rarely come to school in the mornings, so the only times that I do come I make it on time to come to lunc...
I was a very impatient person. Now I am a very steady person.
<ul><li>My next step after school is to go to school for emergency medical technician, the main reason why I really want t...
<ul><li>Something I enjoy doing is text and using technology because it’s something I been doing since I was young, and th...
<ul><li>My friends are very Important to me, because they always give me the power I need. I am very glad I have Friends l...
<ul><li>Every girl has a special relationship with her mothers. But my mom and I have a very special one, a very strong on...
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  • The “about me” is missing a bullet. “Involvement” should be capitalized. Same with “Steps/Moving Forward”.
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  • Every girl has a special relationship with her mother. But my mother and I have a very special one, a very strong one too. She is my best friend and my everything. She makes me laugh when I am down and gives me care when I need it the most. I can truly say she means more to me than anything.
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    1. 1. <ul><li>Personal Narrative </li></ul><ul><li>June.18.2010 </li></ul><ul><li>LTL </li></ul><ul><li>Introductory Metaphor </li></ul><ul><li>Independent Project </li></ul><ul><li>School-wide Involvement </li></ul><ul><li>Personal Qualities </li></ul><ul><li>Academic Growth </li></ul><ul><li>Next Steps/Moving Forward </li></ul><ul><li>About me </li></ul>
    2. 2. <ul><li>To be an Emergency Medical Technician is one of my passions. </li></ul>
    3. 3. <ul><li>I was small beautiful plant. And I grew into a big outstanding plant. </li></ul>
    4. 4. <ul><li>I decided to do my project on breast implants, because I admire people that have them done. </li></ul>
    5. 5. <ul><li>I barely rarely come to school in the mornings, so the only times that I do come I make it on time to come to lunch. That’s the most time I have to hang out with the kids in my school, and also to get my work done. </li></ul>
    6. 6. I was a very impatient person. Now I am a very steady person.
    7. 7. <ul><li>My next step after school is to go to school for emergency medical technician, the main reason why I really want to become an EMT Is because I love high paste jobs, and also cause I love to help people. </li></ul>
    8. 8. <ul><li>Something I enjoy doing is text and using technology because it’s something I been doing since I was young, and that’s something I truly love. </li></ul>
    9. 9. <ul><li>My friends are very Important to me, because they always give me the power I need. I am very glad I have Friends like them. I can truly say My Friends are just the best. </li></ul>
    10. 10. <ul><li>Every girl has a special relationship with her mothers. But my mom and I have a very special one, a very strong one too. She is my best friend and my everything. She make me laugh when I am down and give me care when I need it the most. I can truly say she means more to me than anything. </li></ul>
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