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  • 1. Some questions ask you to look at two texts together:Examples: 1) Now look at Item 1 and Item 2 together. Compare • What they have to say about…. • The language they use to say it… 2) How do the writers of Item 1 and Item 2 use language and presentation to persuade their readers?First sort out how many points you need to make for the amount of marks givento this question.Let’s take one example: 3) How do the writers of the Lady Sovereign article and the Davvid website use language and presentation to persuade their readers that the singers offer an exciting type of music? (6 marks) 3 marks for each text For each text – make 3 points about language and presentation 1. Use the comparison template to make notes about the Lady Sovereign article and the Davvid Website 2. Now, let’s write your answer, using the PEE formula (when the writer says…etc)
  • 2. Topic sentence sums up your point. It shows you are addressing the questionDiscourseMarker tellsthe examiner Both the article about Lady Sovereign and the website about Davvid use languageyou are goingto compare and presentation to make the reader think that they are successful singers. Boththe texts texts use metaphors to make them seem exciting. When the writer says Lady Evidence Sovereign “has taken the fortress of American Hip Hop by storm”, this makes Explanation of the reader think that she is powerful because the metaphor suggests she is like effect on a reader Point an attacking army which has dramatically invaded America, a country that has resisted music from other nations. In my opinion this text is successful in Evaluation reflecting the very aggressive style of Lady Sovereign’s music. Also, metaphors are used to suggest Davvid is successful. When the website says he is “mowing down the competition”, this makes the reader think that he is more popular than other stars because the metaphor suggests that he is like a lawn mower that flattens anything in its path. To me, this also reflects how ruthless the world of music can be. Also, both texts use alliteration to make their message more exciting. When theHere comesthe second writer of Text B says “the future of rap is female, feisty and fresh”, this suggestscomparison that Lady Sovereign is exciting because the repeated “f” sounds thump out the message very aggressively. The Davvid website also uses sound patterns to make Finish this by using an it lively. When the writer says”……………………………..…………………………………… . example of a sound ………………………… ……… this makes the reader think………………………………..…. pattern from the website ……………………………………….… ….…………………… because………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………In my opinion .. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………Now write a Also, both writers use ..…………………………………………………………………………..……comparisonparagraph, using …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………your own ideaabout …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………PRESENTATIONfrom both texts ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………….. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
  • 3. Topic sentence sums up your point. It shows you are addressing the questionDiscourseMarker tellsthe examiner Both the article about Lady Sovereign and the website about Davvid use languageyou are goingto compare and presentation to make the reader think that they are successful singers. Boththe texts texts use metaphors to make them seem exciting. When the writer says Lady Evidence Sovereign “has taken the fortress of American Hip Hop by storm”, this makes Explanation of the reader think that she is powerful because the metaphor suggests she is like effect on a reader Point an attacking army which has dramatically invaded America, a country that has resisted music from other nations. In my opinion this text is successful in Evaluation reflecting the very aggressive style of Lady Sovereign’s music. Also, metaphors are used to suggest Davvid is successful. When the website says he is “mowing down the competition”, this makes the reader think that he is more popular than other stars because the metaphor suggests that he is like a lawn mower that flattens anything in its path. To me, this also reflects how ruthless the world of music can be. Also, both texts use alliteration to make their message more exciting. When theHere comesthe second writer of Text B says “the future of rap is female, feisty and fresh”, this suggestscomparison that Lady Sovereign is exciting because the repeated “f” sounds thump out the message very aggressively. The Davvid website also uses sound patterns to make Finish this by using an it lively. When the writer says”……………………………..…………………………………… . example of a sound ………………………… ……… this makes the reader think………………………………..…. pattern from the website ……………………………………….… ….…………………… because………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………In my opinion .. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………Now write a Also, both writers use ..…………………………………………………………………………..……comparisonparagraph, using …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………your own ideaabout …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………PRESENTATIONfrom both texts ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………….. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
  • 4. Topic sentence sums up your point. It shows you are addressing the questionDiscourseMarker tellsthe examiner Both the article about Lady Sovereign and the website about Davvid use languageyou are goingto compare and presentation to make the reader think that they are successful singers. Boththe texts texts use metaphors to make them seem exciting. When the writer says Lady Evidence Sovereign “has taken the fortress of American Hip Hop by storm”, this makes Explanation of the reader think that she is powerful because the metaphor suggests she is like effect on a reader Point an attacking army which has dramatically invaded America, a country that has resisted music from other nations. In my opinion this text is successful in Evaluation reflecting the very aggressive style of Lady Sovereign’s music. Also, metaphors are used to suggest Davvid is successful. When the website says he is “mowing down the competition”, this makes the reader think that he is more popular than other stars because the metaphor suggests that he is like a lawn mower that flattens anything in its path. To me, this also reflects how ruthless the world of music can be. Also, both texts use alliteration to make their message more exciting. When theHere comesthe second writer of Text B says “the future of rap is female, feisty and fresh”, this suggestscomparison that Lady Sovereign is exciting because the repeated “f” sounds thump out the message very aggressively. The Davvid website also uses sound patterns to make Finish this by using an it lively. When the writer says”……………………………..…………………………………… . example of a sound ………………………… ……… this makes the reader think………………………………..…. pattern from the website ……………………………………….… ….…………………… because………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………In my opinion .. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………Now write a Also, both writers use ..…………………………………………………………………………..……comparisonparagraph, using …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………your own ideaabout …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………PRESENTATIONfrom both texts ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………….. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
  • 5. Topic sentence sums up your point. It shows you are addressing the questionDiscourseMarker tellsthe examiner Both the article about Lady Sovereign and the website about Davvid use languageyou are goingto compare and presentation to make the reader think that they are successful singers. Boththe texts texts use metaphors to make them seem exciting. When the writer says Lady Evidence Sovereign “has taken the fortress of American Hip Hop by storm”, this makes Explanation of the reader think that she is powerful because the metaphor suggests she is like effect on a reader Point an attacking army which has dramatically invaded America, a country that has resisted music from other nations. In my opinion this text is successful in Evaluation reflecting the very aggressive style of Lady Sovereign’s music. Also, metaphors are used to suggest Davvid is successful. When the website says he is “mowing down the competition”, this makes the reader think that he is more popular than other stars because the metaphor suggests that he is like a lawn mower that flattens anything in its path. To me, this also reflects how ruthless the world of music can be. Also, both texts use alliteration to make their message more exciting. When theHere comesthe second writer of Text B says “the future of rap is female, feisty and fresh”, this suggestscomparison that Lady Sovereign is exciting because the repeated “f” sounds thump out the message very aggressively. The Davvid website also uses sound patterns to make Finish this by using an it lively. When the writer says”……………………………..…………………………………… . example of a sound ………………………… ……… this makes the reader think………………………………..…. pattern from the website ……………………………………….… ….…………………… because………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………In my opinion .. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………Now write a Also, both writers use ..…………………………………………………………………………..……comparisonparagraph, using …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………your own ideaabout …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………PRESENTATIONfrom both texts ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………….. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………….