Hints for Revision Look for strong points and expand on them Correct any obvious typos or grammatical errors Respond to any comment I have made, particularly if it suggests revision Take your paper to the Writing Center
Transition your WAs to fit Together Use subtitles to transition between different topics Make sure the titles are clear and effective If you are not using titles to transition, then use a transitional sentence, a sentence that connects the previous information to the new information
Writing Your Conclusion The conclusion for your Final Ethnographic essay should restate the findings of your research and make arguments about these findings. It should clearly identify the literacy found in your community and explain why your findings are significant to other scholars. In essence, you should reassert your best points in the conclusion.