Group D: Peer Review Exercises #5
Each answer must be minimum 75 words.
1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles?
GPS is the omission of a global positioning system. As one type of GPS, there is navigation system that
involves a monitor for displays a map. This displays a user’s actual location. GPS uses a network of
satellites with radio transmitters. And, GPS need to pick up a signal of least four satellites for a car
navigation system to work. Moreover, once the car’s GPS calculates its position, it can use a map program to
find its way to a new location.
2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the
idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.
I think it should establish a link to website that we can buy the GPS which involves a car navigation
system. If this document is established a link, website has saved us a great deal of searching GPS by internet.
Moreover, if the link is inserted the GPS which is the recommendation product by writer, we can easy
choose the GPS, and we can buy a GPS in the link’s website.
3. What details are included in the articles?
I think it should include itemize that we should be pay attention about each step when we select a known
destination and we select route by point on interest. Because, the document may include itemize that be
difficult for beginners. If there are not write the point that we should be pay attention, we can’t correctly
select. If the document is included itemize that we should be pay attention, we will become easy to select a
known destination and to select route by point on interest.
4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?
I think that confusing contents is a Car Navigation Basics, GPS Satellites, Calculating Location and
Planning a Trip. That content is difficult to understand for beginners, because that content is included the
technical terms. A Technical term is difficult for inexperienced parsons are understands the GPS.
Inexperienced parson may feel disturbed about understand the each contents in those contents. So, I think
that include the pictures or dynamic image for explain the difficult and confusing contents.
5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?
I think that there are the title at each contents is good. Because the section is no title is difficult to
understand in no time for reader. And if the title will be, that's all reader need to read only necessary. But if
the title won’t be, that’s all reader have to read all. This is a waste of time to read all documents. That's why
it's so important that the title of each contents.
6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?
Yes, there are. The error that needs to be corrected is establishes a link to one’s website. The link is the
website which is can buy the GPS which involves a car navigation system. It will be the GPS is become
widely used. Moreover the error that needs to be corrected is establishes the pictures and dynamic image for
explain to select a known destination and select route by point of interest. If there are it, we can easy
understand the how to select its.
7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make?
I think that establish the pictures and dynamic image for explain to select a known destination and select
route by point of interest. Because, it will be easy understand the how to select its. And if there are it, reader
can understand the how to select the destination without reader does not read a explain document. Moreover
the dynamic image helps reader to understand it that select destination, because dynamic image is move to
the practice process.
8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how
this author authored it (as you see it in the link).
First difference is it that to establish a link to website that reader can buy the GPS which involves a car
Second difference is it that to establish a point which reader should be pay attention about each step when
we select a known destination and we select route by point on interest.
Third difference is it that to establish the pictures and dynamic image for explain to select a known
destination and select route by point of interest.
9. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to
・There are a couple of different ways to do a cellphone using GPS.
・The hardware inside the phone is enabled for GPS location.
・Whether or not your service provider allows GPS location.
・A fact that Sprint Nextel has a service package on their monthly data plan.
・If we become a member of a monthly data plan, we can do is track members of family, see where they
are and whether or not they’re going to school or going to work.
・And it will allow we to do is go on line to a website like this one here.
・We could also locate the phone and see where it is.
・MobileMe is a piece of technology for the iPhone.
・If iPhone has been lost or stolen, we can track down where our iPhone from internet.
・It’s better if we have lost our phone or if we think we have misplaced it.
10. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to
・iPhone and iPhone 3G has the function that displays map by use GPS.
・We have already got the map set up over here.
・we have got a little map set up between Austin.
・First task can see a massive thing to get we down relatively close.
・If we hit it again just perk it up and we can see if it can get in there or we can just take it and start to
zoom in a little bit closer.
・The map feature is the more information it gets over time.
・We will see a little bit closer in a moment.
・We turn it on, we turn on the maps.
・We hit the target, and woop, zoom into it exactly where we are.
・The closer will start to home in just a little bit.