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Group D : Peer Review Exercises #2
1. What is the primary idea of the content in the document?
You can rip the DVD from the disc onto your computer allows by use video footage from the DVD
in multiple computer programs, such as media players and video editor. And, if you want to do, you
can rip the movie file to your computer and burn the file straight to disc.
2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea
that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.
I think it should establish a link to download website of software such as media players and video
editor. If this document is established a link, we can easy download a software. Because, not have to
go to the trouble of looking for a software which we can rip the DVD by use.
3. What details are included in the document?
I think it should include itemize that we should be pay attention about each step. Because, the
document may include itemize that be difficult for beginners. If the document is included itemize that
we should be pay attention, we will become easy to rip the DVD by software.
4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?
I think the confusing contents is a head of DVD Decrypter. Because, the contents of DVD Decrypter
is difficult to understand for beginners. Inexperienced parson may feel disturbed about understand the
each contents in a head of DVD Decryper. So, I think that include the pictures for explain the difficult
sentence in step2.
5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?
I think that make the title at each contents is good. Because, it is difficult to understand in no time for
reader that the section is no title. And if the title will be, that's all reader need to read only necessary.
That's why it's so important that the title of each contents.
6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?
Yes, there are. The error that need to be corrected is change to the construction of instructions.
Because, the present construction is difficult to read and understand for the instructions of content is
blended operations. So, I think it will be good that the step is increase.
7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?
I think that make the title at each contents and change to the construction of instructions. Because, it
will be easy to understand the contents at sections in no time that the clear title make at each contents.
And, it will be easy to read the sections that change to the construction of instructions.
8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document
and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).
First difference is it that to establish a link to download website of software such as media players
and video editor.
Second difference is it that to make the title at each contents.
Third difference is change to the construction of instructions.