1. Group D : Peer Review Exercises #1
1. Explain the complete organization of the content in the document.
First, power down the computer, disconnect all cabling and remove the Phillips screws from around
the back side of the computer. Slide open the case which is inside of the computer.
Next, locate the motherboard which the large computer board in the middle of the system.
And, insert the sound card into one of the available PCI card slots. After, close the computer case.
Finally, plug the cables back into the computer and power on the computer.
2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea
that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.
I think it that the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea.
But, I think that it can be good what each section make the title. And, the title is easy understanding
of contents in section. If the title of each section is not put, a reader is not understand the contents in
3. What details are included in the document?
The details is included at under the top title of a web page. The contents of the detail is explain it why
you should sound drivers installed on the computer for a sound card. And, it is explain a part of sound
drivers and sound card.
4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?
I think the confusing contents is step2. Because, the contents of step2 is difficult to understand for
inexperienced parson. If inexperienced parson will do the work and fail to sound drivers installed, it
was a serious affair. So, I think that include the pictures for explain the difficult sentence in step2.
5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?
I think that make the title at each contents is good. Because, it is difficult to understand in no time for
reader that the section is no title. And if the title will be, that's all reader need to read only necessary.
That's why it's so important that the title of each contents.
6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?
Yes, there are. The error that need to be corrected is change to the construction of instructions.
Because, the present construction is difficult to read and understand for the instructions of content is
blended operations. So, I think it will be good that the step is increase.
7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?
I think that make the title at each contents and change to the construction of instructions. Because, it
will be easy to understand the contents at sections in no time that the clear title make at each contents.
And, it will be easy to read the sections that change to the construction of instructions.
8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document
and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).
First difference is it that make the title at each contents.
Second difference is it that change to the construction of instructions.
Third difference is it that include the pictures for explain the each contents.