1. One or more of the groups have used the following paragraphs/text for the in-class oral
presentation. The sentence constructions in the following paragraphs are wrong. Please correct
them to the best of your ability.
1. When it can be told clearly what kind of advantage there is by getting how long our services is
more excellent than other service thrown in for more our free, people would choose our service
with priority.
A. If make a advertisement which easy to understand. Our service will be more excellent than any other
companies. And customers will choice our service with priority.
2. There is importance of the documents for launching business so that the person who read a
document has you know what kind of business our company does.
A. The most important for launching business is known by many people. To do this our company should
make a good document or advertisement.
3. It is a paragraph and a sentence that it is important in a logical arrangement paragraph.
A. To make a good logical statement, we should write a paragraphs that easy to understand and clear
sentences.
4. To eating our meal to customer as long as possible, we have to known to customers that they can
taste the local cooking which they can taste only in the area at our restaurant.
A. To provide local tastes to customers we must known as a best restaurant which can have the traditional
dishes in this area.
5. To relax to customer, it is important to endeavor not only the menu but also the store decors.
A. To make relaxation for customers we should do our best not only for menu but also to decors.
6. We give many kind as possible as we can for the visitor and we hope them satisfaction.
A. We want to provide many kinds of servises as possible as we can. And we hope them get more
satisfaction.