1.What is the primary idea of the content in the document?

The document explain how to create a duplicate of DVD from the...
5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?

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  1. 1. 1.What is the primary idea of the content in the document? The document explain how to create a duplicate of DVD from the disk onto your computer. It is used for backup and multiple computer programs can use DVD movie. Then, the document is made three sections which are DVD Decrypter, DVD Shrink and DVD-Burning Software and Easy DVD Clone. 2.Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. In headings, It explain how to do about ripping a DVD from the disk onto your computer. Then, in first section, It explain about DVD Decrypter. In second section, It explain about DVD shrink and DVD-Burning Software. In final section, It explain about Easy DVD Clone. In this way, if separate of individual sections are clearly, we can understand more easily. 3.What details are included in the document? Sentence in headings is summary of other three sections. One of section says that DVD Decrypter can read DVD and copy it to computer. Then, next section says that DVD shrink can shrink data size in DVD and save data in ISO. DVD-Burning Software can burn the ISO file to the disc. Last section says that Easy DVD Clone can burn the ISO to the DVD. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it Each sections in this article are similar to other sections in that two points which are explaining about installing a software and explaining how to use this software. So to sum up, each sections types are just about the same. So, I think that writer should compile a section of three sections.
  2. 2. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? There are two good points in this article. First, this article is divided into three sections. And, Each sections are divided into five or six steps. So, We can read sentence of detail easily. Second, each steps are written by following the procedure. So, this article do detailed description of the procedures. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? There are two bad points in this article. First, there are many steps in this article, but these are explained by only sentences. It is difficult to understand for readers. So, I think that writer should insert pictures and illustrations for to help readers understanding. Second, each sections in this article are similar to other sections. Writer should be simply writing. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make? I want to propose two things for improving this article. First thing is to insert pictures and illustrations for to help readers understanding. Because this article is explained by only sentences. It is difficult to understand for readers. Second thing is carefully to write sections which these are not overlapping other sections. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). First difference is this article is divided into some sections. And, Each sections are divided into some steps, but our document is separated sections only. Second difference is this article do not has pictures and illustrations for to help readers understanding, but our document has it. Final difference is about character style. For example, section title is normal style in this article, but we use bold type in our document.

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