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Peer review exercise #5

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  • 1. Peer Review Exercise # 5 1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles? The primary idea of the content in the articles is car navigation systems. First, The use of car navigation systems is written in those articles. On one hand the use of car navigation systems is itemize. It is very simple and clealy. We can understand to use it easily. On the other hand, mechanism of car navigation systems is written. This article is detailed a little. We can understand mechanism of car navigation systems very well. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. Yes, I do. Because the individual sections and headings in the articles are very easy to see. The individual sections and headings are point of paragraph. So, I can look for things which I want to know. I think that the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) are very important. And if I write the individual sections and headings in the document I take care about clearly and collect points. Those are my opinion.
  • 2. 3. What details are included in the articles? First, operation of car navigation systems is written in this article. It is itemize. It is very clearly and simply. Case of known Destination and case of route by point of interest is written in this article. Use of car navigation systems from beginning to end is written clearly. And, mechanism of car navigation systems is written too. It collect points. Main systems of car navigation are GPS satellites and calculating location and planning a trip. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? No, there was not. Because this article is very clearly and simple. I can understand about car navugation systems very well and very easily. This article`s structure of sentence is easy to see. This article use simple words and simple structure of sentences. And this article do not use technical terms. Technical terms are very difficult for me to understand. So, this article is very easy to read and to understand. I want to write like this article. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? I think that itemize is very good writing. Because It is easy to see. Itemize is a kind of point. So, itemize is very important. Because I think that if teh article has itemize a lot of people more understand the article very well than the article do not have the itemize.52
  • 3. And headlines in this article are very easy to see. And It catch my eyes. I think that it catch a loy of pepole`s eyes. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? No, there was not. Because this article is very clearly and simple. I can understand about car navigation systems very well and very easily. This article`s structure of sentence is easy to see. This article use simple words and simple structure of sentences. And this article do not use technical terms. Technical terms are very difficult for me to understand. So, this article is very easy to read and to understand. I want to write like this article. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make? I think that the articles do not have any errors. But if the article improve I want to insert illustrations and pictures. Because illustrations and pictures are very important. If the article have illustrations and pictures it can cathch many people`s eyes. And If the article have illustrations and pictures the article more easy to understand it. And If the article have many illustrations and pictures the article become more gaily. those point are my ideas. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link).
  • 4. When my group write like this atricle, we polish structure of atricle. I think that it is very important to write the airticle. First point is itemize and sentence. This article use itemize but my group use sentence. I think my group do not think of itemize. So, we will write long sentences. Second point is illustrations. This article use illustrations a littele. But my group will use a lot of illustrations. Last point is example. This article is do not use example. I want to use example. We should define place or facility. For example, way of setting when I go theme park. 9. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. This video talk about how to track cell phone using GPS. This video have many major points. First is cell phone. Second is track. Third is GPS location. Fourth is This web site. Fifth is couple of different ways. Sixth is data planet. Seventh is family locate. Eighth is iphone. Ninth is update. Last is internet. I think that this video talk about basic GPS systems at the first half. And I think that this video talk about application of GPS systems at the second half. For example, iphone is application things of GPS systems. It is very difficult for me to listen to this video.
  • 5. 10. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. This video talk about how to find current location on an ipnone. This video has many major points. First is iphone. Second is iphone application. Third is GPS map. Fourth is area. Fifth is indication of position oneself. Sixth is indication of destination. Seventh is zoom in button. Eighth is touch at display to zoom in. Ninth is zoom up. Last is I can get more informationes by zoom up. Zoom up is important to find current location on an ipnone. DPS map is very convenient. And iphone is very convenient too. I will be able to spend comfortably in accepting iphone applications.

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