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  1. 1. 1. About the business of the inside of a store sales sporting goods. The company can give a lot of people chances to enjoy various sports by selling good sporting goods cheap player, and is useful for people. And, the popularity of sports is raised. In addition, a lot of people come to enjoy doing sports. 2. I think that the individual section and headings of the document were conveyed definitely. Of each is firmly answered, and our opinions are made firmly. Moreover, they think how to act by the inside of a store sales sporting goods. And, they think what effect you can expect. 3. No, I wasn't. I didn't confused reading these sentences. 4. I think that the point that the point is plainly written was good. Because former sentences can be understood only from reading this. 5. I think that it is good that the content of the business of the company is clear. 6. There is unnecessary space in the contents of the email. 7. They should have written more detail to explain their will. 8. 1. We read extra information, and make it less mistake. 2. The word they use to write is too easy, it doesn’t like a student of university. 3.We discussed and thought a lot before we finished it.

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