Are the first actions listed in your workplan necessary to build a base for future action? Do you really need to do this action at that time? Do you really need that much capital?
Who needs to be on board to complete each stage?
Could you partner with another organization to reduce your load? Costs that you could offload?
Who is responsible for seeing through each stage?
What’s the one thing you’d like someone to take away from reading your executive summary? What do you not want them to think?
Are you making the strongest possible case for why your venture is addressing an important challenge?
Who are the types of people your pitch is focused on? Which type of people do you not have to interest? What action would you like your reader to take right after reading or hearing your pitch? How do you direct those people towards what you want?