8. writing a conclusion
Upcoming SlideShare
Loading in...5
×
 

Like this? Share it with your network

Share

8. writing a conclusion

on

  • 196 views

 

Statistics

Views

Total Views
196
Views on SlideShare
188
Embed Views
8

Actions

Likes
0
Downloads
2
Comments
0

1 Embed 8

http://mrmarrhistory.wordpress.com 8

Accessibility

Categories

Upload Details

Uploaded via as Microsoft PowerPoint

Usage Rights

© All Rights Reserved

Report content

Flagged as inappropriate Flag as inappropriate
Flag as inappropriate

Select your reason for flagging this presentation as inappropriate.

Cancel
  • Full Name Full Name Comment goes here.
    Are you sure you want to
    Your message goes here
    Processing…
Post Comment
Edit your comment

8. writing a conclusion Presentation Transcript

  • 1. Your Conclusion is worth up to 2 marks. It must cover the following: • Factors Summarise all your main factors, including the extent that each is relevant • Answer Reach an overall conclusion about the topic • Evidence Provide reasons and evidence to support your conclusion
  • 2. Overall it is clear that whilst the 1945-51 Labour governments did make some improvements to people’s lives, they did not fully meet their needs. (Overall judgement) Labour introduced many changes which profoundly improved the lives of people in Britain, not least the introduction of health care through the NHS, significantly reducing unemployment and extending education opportunities. However many weaknesses existed, including failing to meet house building targets and sickness benefit not being universally available. (Summary of factors / Evidence) Nevertheless in the short time they had – and in the context of damage caused by World War Two – they achieved a huge amount and laid the foundations for the modern Welfare State. (2 marks for Overall judgement, with evidence)