Maybe another 200 cigarettesHot Tip #1: Show would have helped; coughing would be better than some of this don’t tell dialogue. Pearl Harbor is a two-hour movie squeezed into three hours, about how on December 7, 1941, the Japanese staged a surprise attack on an American love triangle. Its centerpiece is 40 minutes of redundant special effects, surrounded by a love story of stunning banality. The film has been directed without grace, vision, or originality, and although you may walk out quoting lines of dialog, it will not be because you admire them.
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In your movie reviews, find examples ofdescriptions that evoke a positive ornegative connotation. Also, notice how plotsummary is handled.Make a list of your two best descriptionsfrom the positive review and your two bestfrom the negative review.Be ready to explain why you chose theexamples that you did.
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Example of positive lead: Inception (PG-13, 148 minutes). An astonishingly original and inventive thriller starring Leonardo DiCaprio as a men who infiltrates the minds of others to steal secrets. Now hes hired to implant one. Roger Ebert
“Transformers: Revenge of the Fallen” is ahorrible experience of unbearable length,briefly punctuated by three or fouramusing moments.
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