1. Thesis statement: Young people have little leisure time and deal with pressure in
studies as they face tough competition from other students and are constantly
pressured by their parents which later leads to antisocial beings among them.
Body paragraph 1
Topic sentence: Youths are not granted much leisure time and are continuously piled
with pressure when it comes to their studies as they are forced to face tough
competition among their friends
SD1: Strong desire to be the best
SD2: Reputation matters
Body paragraph 2
Topic sentence: Another cause to the problem is the nature of parents constantly filling
their cup with pressure
SD1: Parents force children to study study and study
SD2: Parents feel embarrassed when child fails
Body paragraph 3 (Effect)
Topic sentence: Students become antisocial
SD1: No friends or companions
SD2: Lack of social skills to deal with society
Conclusion: Students should loosen up a bit and not spend most of their leisure time
dealing with only studies but other beneficial self-development programmes