Ppt lesson wk 7

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Ppt lesson wk 7

  1. 1. Spotlight<br />Present your plan to your group<br />Themes; characters; setting; plot; style.<br />2. Take feedback from your group<br />Is it interesting?<br />What are the positive things about it?<br />What needs to be improved?<br />How?<br />3. Improve your plan using group feedback<br />Write (or type) something down!<br />10 minutes each<br />
  2. 2. Plan:<br />EXCITEMENT<br />TIME<br />
  3. 3. Fizzling Starts<br />I woke up that morning really nervous. Today was the day of the big disco competition. Sam and I had been practicing for months. This year we would do it. We would beat that Penelope and her partner once and for all. I leapt out of bed…<br />
  4. 4. Sizzling Starts<br />I opened the door to the disco and the must hit me like a blast. Lights flashed, people moved in a swirl of colour and suddenly it was hard to breathe. Nerves, I guess. It was the big dance competition tonight. Sam and I had been practising for months. This year we would do it. We would win. We must!<br />‘Hi there.’ It was Penelope. Yeah, it would be. ‘Bet you think you’re going to win tonight.’<br />
  5. 5. Group DiscussionHow can you create a hook?<br />Action!<br />SHOW don’t TELL what’s going on<br />Introduce something important about your character<br />Introduce something important about your setting<br />Leave the audience wanting to know more!<br />
  6. 6. Silent Writing<br />Action!<br />SHOW don’t TELL what’s going on<br />Introduce something important about your character<br />Introduce something important about your setting<br />Leave the audience wanting to know more!<br />
  7. 7. Group Review<br />Is there action?<br />How are they SHOWING the audience the action?<br />What do you know about the main character?<br />What do you know about the setting?<br />Are you interested?<br />Two goals for rewrite.<br />
  8. 8. Silent Re-Writing<br />Focus on your TWO GOALS<br />
  9. 9. Group Review<br />Is there action?<br />How are they SHOWING the audience the action?<br />What do you know about the main character?<br />What do you know about the setting?<br />Are you interested?<br />Have they achieved their group goals?<br />
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