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Ky 3   ebook 1001 bai viet nguoi moi hoc can xem
Ky 3   ebook 1001 bai viet nguoi moi hoc can xem
Ky 3   ebook 1001 bai viet nguoi moi hoc can xem
Ky 3   ebook 1001 bai viet nguoi moi hoc can xem
Ky 3   ebook 1001 bai viet nguoi moi hoc can xem
Ky 3   ebook 1001 bai viet nguoi moi hoc can xem
Ky 3   ebook 1001 bai viet nguoi moi hoc can xem
Ky 3   ebook 1001 bai viet nguoi moi hoc can xem
Ky 3   ebook 1001 bai viet nguoi moi hoc can xem
Ky 3   ebook 1001 bai viet nguoi moi hoc can xem
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  1. 1. Writing 03 [Type text]
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  3. 3. Writing 03 [Type text] Writing an informal letter........................................................................... 00 Bài viết 1 đến 10 ........................................................................................ 02 - 11 Relax 1....................................................................................................... 12 - 13 Bài viết 11 đến 20 ...................................................................................... 14 - 23 Relax 2....................................................................................................... 24 Bài viết 21 đến 30 ...................................................................................... 25 - 34 Relax 3....................................................................................................... 35 Bài viết 31 đến 40 ...................................................................................... 36 - 45 Crossword.................................................................................................. 46 Lời kết ....................................................................................................... 47 Credits ....................................................................................................... 48
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  5. 5. Writing 03 [Type text] 1.Địa chỉ của bạn 2. Ngày tháng năm viết thư 3.Lời chào đầu thư 4. Nội dung thư 5. Lời chào cuối thư 6. Chữ ký 7. P/S 1
  6. 6. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Binh Son district, Quảng Ngãi province Binh Son district, Quảng Ngãi province November 28th, 2007 November 28th, 2007 Dear my wife Dear my wife, Firstly, I want to tell you that ( sau tell luôn có Firstly, I want to tell I love you and our ngừoi )I love miss you and our daughter so daughter so much. much. This is my one month in Quang Ngai This is my one first month (dùng số thứ tự )in province. At here, It is very hot in daytime, Quang Ngai province. At h Here, It is very hot but it is cool in night. My works are busy, I in the daytime, but it is cool in at night. My usually get up at six o’clock then wash works are is busy,( work không đếm được nên face, brush teeth and have breakfast. At không thêm s ) I usually get up at six o’clock 6.45 o’clock, I come the site by office’s then I wash my face, brush my teeth and have automobile. At the site of Dung Quat breakfast. At 6.45 o’clock, I come to the site by Refinery, almost people are busy, almost in office’s automobile ( khi nói chung chung thì dùng by ,nói cụ thể xenào thì dùng in ). At the equipments work with high power. The site of Dung Quat Refinery, almost people are site is very large, it is about 100 hectare busy, almost equipments works with high square meters in area. However, power. The site is very large, it is about 100 temporary streets are very bad, therefore, hectare square meters in area square hectare walk is very difficult. Each day, I walk . However, temporary streets are very bad, everywhere in the site to check all works therefore, walk is very difficult. Each day, I is continuing. walk everywhere in the site to check if all works is continuing. Because, it is very hot in daytime, I am very tired, and very hungry and my skin is Because(, )it is very hot in the daytime, I am very tired, and very hungry and my skin is blacker than it in the past. blacker than it used to in the past. I tell to you about my works and my life in I tell to you about my works and my life in the the site of Dung Quat Refinery, you don’t site of Dung Quat Refinery, you don’t worry for worry for me, I know a way to care for about me, I know athe way to care for myself. myself. And you, how are you? I hope you are fine and And you, how are you? I hope you are fine often remember miss me(nhớ nhung dùng and often remember me. Please, tell me miss ). Please, tell me about our daughter. I about our daughter. I remember her so remember miss her so much. Write me as soon as possible . much. Write me as soon as. Give love to you and our daughter. Give love to you and our daughter. Yours. Yours. Love, Cuối thư có chữ ký chứ ! Bài viết của phitruong 2
  7. 7. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Nha Trang December 1th, 2007 Nha Trang December 1,2007 Dear Tuyen, Dear Tuyen, I have been in Nha Trang for 3 days. Air is I have been in Nha Trang for 3 very pure. I like the beaches of in Nha days. Air is very pure. I like Trang.They are blue,very beautiful and beaches of Nha Trang.They are also deep.At night it is quiet. I am waiting blue,very beautiful and also deep.At for rising sun sunrise .I know anyone who night it is quiet. I am waiting for goes to beach always hopes to see the rising sun.I know anyone goes to sight of sunrise.So am i.do I .I wish you beach always hope to see were here with me.Thats great!.I hear that sunrise.So am i.I wish you were the weather of Saigon now begins to be here with me.Thats great!.I hear cold ( is getting colder ),isnt doesnt it? that the weather of Saigon now Remember to wear on your coat! I will be begin to be cold,isnt it? Remember back soon.I did buy a souvernia for to wear on your coat! I will be back you.Miss you much! soon.I did buy souvernia for Love., you.Miss you much! Dùng cấu trúc "cũng vậy" chú ý dùng trợ Love. động từ cho đúng . Phải nhìn câu đầu có trợ động từ gì thì câu sau phải như vậy Bài viết của Ween She can go .So can I . She is nice .So am I She went there .So did I . 3
  8. 8. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog 9 Le Quang Dinh 9 Le Quang Dinh Vung Tau Vung Tau December(, ) 2th,2007 ( phẩy đúng chổ ) December, 2, 2007 Dear Ngoc Dear Ngoc, Thanks for your letter. Im pleased to hear Thanks for your letter. Im pleased to hear you had an enjoyable Christmas that you had an enjoyable Christmas vacationWe received our first semester vacation .We received our first semester report a few days ago. I got good grades report a few days ago. I got good grades for Science, English and Histtory, but my forin Science, English and Histtory, but my math result was poor. My math teacher math result was poor. My math teacher asked me to spend more time on it. I must asked me to spend more time on it. I must study harder next semester. study harder next semester. It is almost Tet. Thats the Lunar New It is almost Tet, the Lunar New Year Year Festival in Viet Nam. I think I told you Festival in Viet Nam, is now coming about it in my last letter. Were going to nearer . Thats the Lunar New Year hue tonight to celebrate the festival with Festival in Viet Nam. I think I told you my grandmother. Ill send you a postcard about it in my last letter. Were going to from there. hHue tonight to celebrate the festival with Write soon and tell me all your news. my grandmother. Ill send you a postcard Regards, from there. Uyen Write soon and tell me all your news. Regards, Uyen Bài viết của hamthituuyen 4
  9. 9. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Vung Tau City Vung Tau City 2nd,December 2nd, 2007 2nd,December, 2007 Dear Mom, My lovely mom,actually,this is the first Dear Mom, time I have been alone ,but there has been much interests .Today,the second My lovely mom,actually,this is the first day in my weekly vacation,I got up early at time I have been alone but there has been 6 oclock and went ahead ( straight ) to the much interests .Today,the second day in sea(opposite to my restroom) (không cần my weekly vacation,I got up early at 6 đóng ngoặc ) to see the rising of the sun oclock and went ahead to the sunrise ,a red sky,it .I was an sea(opposite to my restroom) to see the inpressivenessreally impressive .Then I rising of the sun,a red sky,it was an had breakfast with a loaf of bread for inpressiveness.Then I had breakfast with breakfast.Rapidly,I have been ready to a loaf of bread.Rapidly,I have been ready take a travel.I have visited many places to take a travel.I have visited many places such as:Nui Lon(Great mountain),Nui as:Nui Lon(Great mountain),Nui Nho(Small mountain),Thich Ca Phat Nho(Small mountain),Thich Ca Phat Dai,Petroleum port....Especially,I am really Dai,Petroleum port....Especially,I am really impressive with on fresh air and streets in impressive with fresh air and streets in Vung Tau.Halong street is beside and Vung Tau.Halong street is beside and around the sea,it is very romamntic for around the sea,it is very romamtic for who those who want to ride a couple-bicycle. want to ride a couple-bicycle. My mom ! I will come back home My mom,I will come back home tomorrow tomorrow, but I will remember ( never but I will remember the 1st vacation,Vung forget ) the 1st vacation(,) in Vung Tau Tau city.Return my family,I will have city.Returning to my family,I will have presents for you and all members.Thanks presents for you and all the other to mom for this vacation. members.Thanks to mom for this See you tomorrow. vacation. See you tomorrow. Love, your child Love, Bài viết của mydreamtoslb your child( nên dùng son /daughter ) 5
  10. 10. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog -------------------------------------------------------- -----------------------57K Bui Thi Xuan Street, -------------------------------------------------------- 57K Bui Thi Xuan Street, -----------------------Da Lat City Da Lat City -------------------------------------------------------- December 2nd, 2007 -----------------------December 2nd, 2007. Dear Mom, Dear Mom, Im very sad(,) because I have just failed Im very sad, I have just failed my English my English exam. I tried my best ,but I exam. I tried my best but I couldnd pass couldntd pass it. I am really sorry for it. I am really sorry for making you making you disappointed.Now,I am disappointed.Now,I am staying at a staying at a hotel.( thi rớt còn đi chơi -> hotel.Although It is very big and luxurious sướng nhỉ ! )Although It is very big( ,I feel uncomfortable. The weather is very large rộng lớn ) and luxurious ,I feel cold. Sometimes, it rains very heavily and uncomfortable. The weather is very cold. the temperature drops under 10C .The Sometimes, it rains very heavily and the food is very good but it isnt as delicious temperature drops under 10C .The food is as food you cook .Our home is still the very good ,but it isnt as delicious as the best place. I have only gone away for two food you cook .Our home is still the best days, but I miss you ,Dad and Lai a lot .I place. I have only gone away for two days, wonder if all of you are well.I will come but I miss you ,Dad and Lai a lot .I wonder home next Sunday. Mom,always take care if all of you are well.I will come home next youself. Sunday. Mom,always take care yourself. Your daughter, Your daughter, Pe den. Pe den. Muốn cho chữ nằm bên phải thì tô đen rồi lick vào biểu tựong "căn phải " phía trái kế Bài viết của penden bên chữ " cở" 6
  11. 11. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Long Xuyen city Long Xuyen city December 4th 2007 December 4th ,2007 (thiếu dấu phẩy chổ này ) Dear sister ! Dear sister ! How is your familly? You study well , How is your familly? You study well , arent you? arent dont you? ( câu hỏi đuôi phải nhìn You have happy when you arrive at câu trước để lấy trợ động từ )You have are VietNam , arent you? With me , I very happy( tính từ phải có to be ) when you happy when you and me together play " arrive at in VietNam , arent you? With for Bat Tron". Thats time, I dont forget. me , I am very happy when you and me I I wish you will arrive VietNam again. But if together play " Bat Tron". Thats the you dont arrive, I will go to Canada. If I study English well, after finish class 11 , I time(,) I dont forget. will go to Canada. I wish hope ( wish dùng cho chuyện khó I am trying best to study English now. Set xãy ra và câu sau phải chia quá khứ )you your mind at rest , I will try one best. will arrive come to VietNam again. ButHowever , if you dont arrive come , I To 20:48 p.m. The letter is so long that I will go to Canada. If I study English well, should stop now. after finishing class grade 11 , I will go to I hope a near day , I will miss you. Bye Canada. bye see you again. I am trying my best to study English now. I will meet you ,Let wait.....!!!!! Set your mind at rest take it easy , I will try onemy best. Best wish ZigZag To It is now 20:48 p.m. The letter is so long that I should stop now. I hope a near someday , I will miss meet Bài viết của Mr ZigZag you. Bye bye see you again. I will meet you ,Let wait.....!!!!! Best wish, ZigZag Chú ý cấu trúc câu với các yếu tố chủ từ ,động từ ... 7
  12. 12. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog December 5th, 2007 Dear Mum, place? Ive been living here for a week. The weather in December 5th, 2007 America is cold. Its not cold like the weather in Dear Mum, Hanoi but its still interesting because of snow.Ive Ive been living here for a week. The weather in America is sent you a postcard with this letter. Its a picture cold. Its not so cold as like the weather in Hanoi( like dùng which I took with sister Has children. The snow để nối 2 danh từ ), but its still interesting because of the person takes us a hours to make. Its beautiful, isnt snow.I ve sent will send ( chưa gởi mà? ) you a postcard it? with this letter. Its a picture which I took with sister Has The children are bigger than the last time you saw childrenmy sisters children. The snow person It takes us a them.They are well-behaved and love me so much. hours to make a snow person . Its beautiful, isnt it? Weve been playing together all day.( you know, I The children are bigger than the last time you saw like children very much ). them.They are well-behaved and love me so much. Weve Although their parents have been being far from been playing together all day.( you know, I like children home for a such long time , they dont behave like very much ). pampered children. I told them that their parents Although their parents have been being ( to be không would be in Vietnam till the end of next week. But dúng tiếp diễn )far from home for a such long time , they they said they didnt care for their parents as much dont behave like pampered children. I told them that their as their grandmother because they thought their parents would be in Vietnam till the end of next week. But parents are old enough to take care of themselves they said they didnt care for their parents as much as their and their grandmum is too old to do this.They grandmother because they thought their parents are were wonder if she could take care of herself or not. old enough to take care of themselves and their They want to send you some snow by post but I said grandmum is too old to do this.They wondered if she could take care of herself or not. They wanted to send you some the snow would melt , so its an impossible task. It snow by post ,but I said the snow would melt , so its was takes me a long time to explain to them that reason an impossible task. It takes took me a long time to explain .Anyway, theyre very cute, arent they ? to them that reason .Anyway, theyre very cute, arent Everything is O.K here . You remember to tell my they? sister that the children are fine and I can do everything on my control . Everything is O.K here . You remember to tell my sister On the frist days , I couldnt sleep well .In the that the children are fine and I can do everything on my morning, I didnt know how to cook American control . dishes because the children couldnt eat Vietnamese food . On the first days , I couldnt sleep well .In the morning, I In the afternoon, I also didnt know what I should didnt know how to cook American dishes because the children couldnt eat Vietnamese food . do when some sister Ha s neighbour dropped in to In the afternoon, I also didnt know what I should do when ask me about the garden . I guess they want to buy some sister Ha s neighbours dropped in to ask me about it .They brought many things such as food, wine for the garden . I guessed they wanted to buy it .They brought us .I think they want to persuade me to tell sister many things such as food, wine for us .I think thought they Ha about their need . wanted to persuade me to tell sister Ha about their need . Because of them, I have to stay at home and try to Because of them, I have had to stay at home and try tried not go out in a few last afternoon . to not to go out in a few last following afternoon . In the evening, I and the children watched T.V . In the evening, I and the children watched T.V . The The children are allowed watching T,V untill 9.00 children arewere allowed watching to watch T,V untill 9.00 p.m , then I took them to their bed . I have to read p.m , then I took them to their bed . I have had to read stories for them . I like this work although its a bit stories forto them . I like this work although its a bit hard . hard . Its a good chance for the children to listen Its a good chance for the children to listen to Vietnamese .They use Englishtoo much ,so their Vietnamese isnt very to Vietnamese .They use English too much , so their good . Vietnamese isnt very good . Im getting used to living here, so dont worry about Im getting used to living here, so dont worry about me me and the children . and the children . Take care of yourself Take care of yourself Love, Love, KDPC KDPC P/s: By the way, the children want to have a picture of you . Could you send them one , mum ? P/s: By the way, the children want to have a picture of yours . Could you send them one , mum Bài viết của KDP’C chú ý cách dùng thì bạn nhé,bài viết rất thú vị 8
  13. 13. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Ho Chi Minh city December 6th, 2007 Ho Chi Minh city Dear wife, It lasted is three months when since you December 6th, 2007 were far away from me.( chú ý cấu trúc Dear wife, câu này để lần sau viết tốt hơn )Everyday I It lasted three months when you were far always think about you, I miss you so away from me.Everyday I always think much, I miss the time when we were in about you, I miss you so much, I miss the China. It was wonderful. I want to tell you time when we were in China. It was that it is was the happiest time in my life. wonderful. I want to tell you that it is the Although we are not together, I will happiest time in my life. Athough we are always love you forever. So Therefore , ( not together, I will always love you. So, so không dùng đầu câu )you must believe you must believe that love has strong power and if we love each other, we will that love has strong power and if we love be together. each other, we will be together. Miss you so much. Miss you so much. Love, Love, Tam Tam CẢM ĐỘNG CHO TÌNH CẢM CỦA BẠN QUÁ ,CHÚC BẠN SỚM SUM HỌP CÙNG HIỀN THÊCỦA MÌNH Bài viết của tahaminhtam 9
  14. 14. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Nha Trang city July, 2007 Nha Trang city July 12th, 2007 Dear husband, Dear husband, Firstly, I want to tell you that I missed you Firstly, I want to tell you that I missed you so much. You too, arent you? so much. You are,too, arent you? Now, Ill tell about my holiday in Nha Now, Ill tell about my holiday in Nha Trang sea city. Today is my fourth day in Trang sea city. Today is my fourth day in here. Every day, i used to get up at 500 here. Every day, i used to I get up at 500 oclock to walk around the beach, see oclock to walk around the beach( used to sunrise and then swim in the sea. Then I dùng chỉ hành động ở quá khứ mà bây giờ have break fast in hotel. The dish is very không còn nữa ), see sunrise and then delicious. Almost, they are traditional food swim in the sea. Then I have break fast in as PHO, BANH XEO... at a hotel. The dishes is are very delicious. After that, I go out for a sightseeing some Almost, they Most of them are traditional places with my friends. That are Thap Ba, foods such as PHO, BANH XEO... Hon Chong, Hon Tre, Hon Tam... The After that, I we go out for a sightseeing at sight is very nice and the air is clean. I some places with my friends That are such took a lot of photograph. as Thap Ba, Hon Chong, Hon Tre, Hon The evening, we have excellent diner with Tam... The sight is very nice and the air is sea food. I like eat crab, lobster... (-_-). clean. I took a lot of photograph. Then we were walking together along Tran In The evening, we had have an excellent Phu road. dinner with sea food. I like to eat crabs, Next sunday, ill come back home. Ill give lobsters... (-_-). Then we were walking you some pretty gift. walked together along Tran Phu road. Miss you much, my love ! Next sunday, ill come back home. Ill give you some pretty gifts. Love, Miss you much, my love ! Tuyen Love, Tuyen Bài viết của Anh Tuyen Cần chú ý dùng thì cho thống nhất 10
  15. 15. Writing 03 [Type text] Nha Trang city 7 Dec December 7th,2007(nhớ viết đúng theo mẫu nha ) Dear Thanh, Nha Trang city How are you? Its nice to hear you have a new job. Congratulation on your job ! . Im 7 Dec,2007 on my vacation. I really miss you ,so I Dear Thanh, write the letter for am writing to you now . How are you? Its nice to hear you have a I want to tell you about Nha Trang. Its an new job. Congratulation on your job. Im interesting place for relaxing . There are a on my vacation. I really miss you so I write lot of beautiful beaches, pure air and fresh the letter for you. I want to tell you about seafood. You know ,I enjoy the sunrising Nha Trang. Its an intersting place for in the early morning. After that,i I can relaxing . There are a lot of beatiful swim until in the evening. I visit lots of beaches, pure air and fresh seafood. You know I enjoy the sun rising in the early islands. The water there is very pure clear ( morning. After that, i can swim until in the nước trong ),soi I can see colorful fishes evening. I visit lots of islands. The water and corals. Im really like seasfood. Its there is very pure so i can see colorful both deliciuous and very cheap. when I fishes and corals. Im really like seasfood. walk on the sand near the beach. I can hear Its deliciuos and very cheap. when I walk the sound of wind and wave at night. Its on the sand near the beach. I can hear romantic. I find down out some fantastic sound of wind and wave at night. Its coffee shops. I will introduce to you when romantic. I find down some fantastic coffe you get there. The local people are friendlỵ shops. I will introduce you when you get They allway simle always simple when there. The local people are friendlỵ They they meet the tourists( không xác định allway simle when they meet the tourists.Im amazing when i see the không dùng the ).Im amazinged when i I souvenirs that are made shell.They are see the souvenirs that are made of shells ( wonderful and lovelỵ I will get it for you. I made of : làm bằng ).They are wonderful take so much the photographs. I will show and lovelỵ I will get itsome for you. I take you when i come back home. so muchmany the photographs.( Thats all for now. Ill be coming home in photographs đếm được phải dùng many the next week. I cant wait to see you. còn much dùng với danh từ khôgn đếm Much love, được )) I will show you when i I come back home. Thats all for now. Ill be coming come Bài viết của heoconvn04 back home in the next week. I cant wait to see you. Much love, both ... and : vừa ...vừa It is both delicious and cheap : nó vừa rẽ vừa ngon 11
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  18. 18. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog BUI THI VAN ANH BUI THI VAN ANH 123ABC Street 123ABC Street VUNG TAU City VUNG TAU City ( ngày tháng ? ) Dear aunt, Dear aunt, This is the first day i Im be here. This is the first day im be here. Everything Everything is very wonderful. I wish you is very wonderful. I wish you could be here could be here to enjoy with me. The sea is to enjoy with me. The sea is very blue and very blue and clear,you can see the fish is clear,you can see the fish is swimming. fishes swimming. The weather is also is The weather also is good, you can play all good fine , ( thời tiết tốt dùng fine chứ day but never feel boring. The food is very delicious ,special sea food,they alway không dùng good nhé )you can play all fresh. The night of VUNG TAU is quit. In day but never feel boringed. The food here here, you can go away the noisy of city is very delicious ,specially sea food,they and have an interesting time. But im also are always fresh. The night of in VUNG miss youso much and when i complete this TAU is quiet. In here, you can go away get travel ill give you a gift.Good bye you rid of ( thoát khỏi ) the noisye of the city See you later and have an interesting time. But ( but anh không dùng đầu câu )im I ( miss là động từ không dùng với to be nhé )also miss you so much and when i complete this travel I come back I ll give you a Bài viết của anhmailvn gift.Good bye you See you later anh Sau các động từ giác quan như : see ,watch , hear ,notice .... là một túc từ rồi đến động từ thêm ing hoặc nguyên mẫu chứ không được chia thì I see him runs out ( sai) vì động từ run chia thì I see him running/ run out ( đúng ) 14
  19. 19. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog SAO KHÔNG VIẾT NGÀY THÁNG ? dear my brother, Long, dear my brother, Long, youre my best brother. And that is a youre my best brother. And that is a reason i love you so mụch But you know? reason why I i love you so mụch, But you your behavior made our parents so sad. i know? ,your behavior madkes our parents think you can do it better.But why? I have so sad. i I think you can do it better.But never written any letters for you. But now, why? I have never written any letters for to i want you always the best son of my you. But now, i I want you always to be parents. You can? I think so. Now you the best son of my parents. You can? I must try your best in learning and share think so. Now you must try your best in your feelings ,your thinking to me or to my learning and share your feelings ,your sister. anyhow, youre my good brother. thinking toabout me or to my sister. And you will go home in new year, wont anyhow, youre my good brother. And you will go home in new year, wont you? you? i I love you. i love you. Your little sister Your little sister. 15
  20. 20. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog New York 22/12/2007 New York Dear mum 22/12/2007 December 22nd,2007 Dear mum, I have written this letter after a long time. Every body still file, are they? I aways I have written this letter after a long time. miss you and every body .Sometimes i Every body is still file fine , arent they? I want the time to elapse more quickly so aways miss you and every body that i can come back to Vietnam. I have .Sometimes i I want the time to elapse studied 3 years in university in US and more quickly so that i Ican come back to continue studying in a year to graduate. I Vietnam. I have studied for 3 years in at a hope that everything will finẹ university in US and continue studying in for a year to graduate. I hope that By the way ,I want to tell you about my everything will be finẹ smooth (suôn sẻ ) foster father i adopted 3 months ago. His By the way ,I want to tell you about my name is Tony Adams. He is a lecturer. I foster-father ,who adopted me as his son 3 was acquainted with him at a seminar months ago. His name is Tony Adams. He about my major. He helped me when i is a lecturer. I was acquainted with him at have problem in my life and my studỵ He is a seminar about on my major. He helpeds 45 years old but still single. I and him me when i Ihave problem in my life and often met together on Saturday or Sunday my studỵ He is 45 years old but still and we talk about every thing with funny. single. I and him he often meet together on In oder to strengthen tie with me, i ađopte Saturday or Sunday and we talk about me as a child and i agreed happily.I will every thing with funny for fun . In oder to tell you more in next letter. strengthen tie te relationship with me, [s] i[/S he ađopted me as a child his son and i Noel is approaching, i wish everybody I agreed happily.I will tell you more in wonderful and happy Merry Christmas. next letter. All my love Hoang Noel is approaching, i I wish everybody wonderful and happy Merry Christmas. chữ ký ????? Bài viết của kuunon 16
  21. 21. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Hoai An dictrict Hoai An dictrict Binh Dinh province Binh Dinh province 18th Match18th , 2007 18th Match, 2007 Dear uncle Hung, Dear uncle Hung, Im writing to ask you for permission Im writing to ask you for permission about our visit your computer factorỵ about our visit to your computer factorỵ( Recently, we have studied about computer danh từ visit phải có to + nơi chốn ) but my school doesn’t have any computer Recently, we have studied about computer for us to practice. That is the reason why science , but my school doesn’t have any my class have a plan to visit a computer computers for us to practice. That is the factory in the local area. Forrtunately, reason why my class have a plan to visit a your computer factory is near our school . computer factory in the local area. So it is convenient for us to go there by bus. If you accept, I and forty one Forrtunately, your computer factory is near classmates will visit your factory from our school (. ) ,So it is convenient for us to 8.30am till 10.30 am this sunday . Are you go there by bus. If you accept, I and forty free at that time? I hope you will allow us one my classmates will visit your factory to visit your factory and help us know how from 8.30am till 10.30 am this sunday . computer are made and how to use them. Are you free at that time? I hope you will If you are busy, can you please have allow us to visit your factory and help us someone allow us to give us some information about the computers. Besides, know how computers are made and how to we also want to talk to the workers there use them. If you are busy, can you please to know more about their work. have someone allow us to give us some That is all my suggestions. I hope you will information about the computers. Besides, help us. we also want to talk to the workers there to Im looking forward to hearing your know more about their work. respond. Please write or call me by the phone at That is all my suggestions. I hope you will 111222333 to tell me your idea as soon as help us. possible. Im looking forward to hearing your Your sincerely respond. pinkgirl Please write or call me by the phone at Mong sư phụ Wellfrog "vạch lá tìm sâu" 111222333 to tell me your idea as soon as hộ bài viết của pinkgirl.Thanks ! possible. Your sincerely, pinkgirl [color="Magenta"]Mong sư phụ Wellfrog "vạch lá tìm sâu" hộ bài viết của Bài viết của pinkgirl183 pinkgirl.Thanks ! SÂU ĐÓ CẢ BẦY ,nhớ lần sau tránh chúng nhé 17
  22. 22. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog December(, )12th, 2007 ( chú ý chỉ một December, 12th, 2007 dấu phẩy ở đây thôi ) Dear my husband Dear my husband, This is my second day in HCM City. This is my second day in HCM City. Althought, HCM city is very nice, but ( Althought, HCM city is very nice, but I trong câu đã dùng although thì không dùng dont want go to anywhere, because i very but nữa nhé )I dont want to go to miss you, i thinking about you all freetime. anywhere, b .Because i I very miss you I very buzy, I have to work 10 hour a day. I very much ,i I thinking about you all like the weather here but i dont like food, i freetimethe time . I am very buzsy, I have miss so much have meal in my family. I to work 10 hours a day. I like the weather hope to back home as soon as possibility. here ,buti I dont like food .i I miss so I miss you a lot . much have meal in my family( sai cấu trúc ,câu không có chủ từ ). I hope to come Give my love to the family . back home as soon as possibilityle. I miss you a lot . Give my love to the family . CHỮ KÝ ? Bài viết của muathu2008 18
  23. 23. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Sai Gon December 14th, 2007 Sai Gon Dear Aunt, December 14th, 2007 I havent written to you since international Dear Aunt, telephone service appeared in internet. This I havent written to you since international service is very cheap. The USvoizcard I buy telephone service appeared was available in the can call to USA over three hours. Formerly, iInternet.( phải có the và viết hoa chử Internet ) This service is very cheap. The USvoizcard US every time I had wanted to confide in you, I voice card I buy can be used to call to USA over called you through internet. I remember you three hours.( card bản thân nó đâu biết gọi ? ) said every time you are sad you like reading Formerly, every time I had wanted to confide in my letters again. Therefore, today instead of you, I called you through the Internet. I remember confiding in you by telephone, I confide in you you said every time you are were sad you liked by letter. reading my letters again. Therefore, today instead For frequently calling you, I am not in the of confiding in you by telephone, I confide in you habit of writing to you. Today I write this by letters. letter to get into the habit of doing that. For Because of frequently calling you, I am not in I realized I had been wrong to lie to you. This the habit of writing to you. Today I write this letter to get into the habit of doing that. must surprise you. I am sure that you will I realized I had been wrong to lie to you. This must wonder what I lied to you about. Maybe you surprise you. I am sure that you will wonder what I will be very angry about what I say following. lied to you about. Maybe you will be very angry Most of my friends have new model of about what I say following. motorbike. For imitating their lifetyle, I Most of my friends have new models of wanted have things they have but I hadnt motorbikes. For imitating their life tyle, I wanted to enough money to buy them. Therefore, I have things they have ,but I hadnt enough money thought out how I could ask for your money. I to buy them. Therefore, I thought out up ( nghỉ ra lied that I had been sevious illness. I needed a )how I could ask for your money. I lied that I had lot of money to operate. I knew you were very been sevious illness seriously ill . I needed a lot of money to operate spend . I knew you were very worry to hear about that news. You worryied to hear about that news.( to be + tính từ ) immediately sent five thousand dollars for me. You immediately sent five thousand dollars for I spent a part of them on buying a new model me.( send to : gởi đến , send for : gởi dùm ) I spent of motorbike. I wasted remainder on induging a part some of them on buying a new model of in dissipation at Dancing-floor. motorbike of new model . I wasted remainder on Thinking of what I did, I feel regret very much. indulging in dissipation at Dancing-floors. I feel that I am not worthy of your love. Thinking of what I did, I feel regret regrettable( sau Therefore, writing this letter, I only want to feel là tính từ ) very much. I feel that I am not apologise and beg you for forgiveness. I knew worthy of your love. Therefore, writing this letter, I I had betraied your trust, my parentss and only want to apologize and beg you for forgiveness. I knew I had betraied betrayed ( trước those who love me. có nguyên âm thì không đổi y -> i )your trust, my I beg you for forgiveness again. I promise I parentss and those who love me.( số nhiều có S rồi will give my mind to ỉmproving my studies to thì khi dùng sở hửu không thêm S nữa ) be useful with my life and society. I beg you for forgiveness again. I promise I will Love, give my mind to ỉmproving my studies y to be Your nephew useful with my life and to society. Love, Hoa Your nephew Bài viết của sauhoang 19
  24. 24. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Ho Chi Minh City Ho Chi Minh City Dec 14,2007 Dec 14,2007 Dear Trang, Dear Trang, I didnt write letter to you for long time. I didnt write havent written letter to you How are you? I living in HCMC. At frist for long time.( for + khoảng thời gian dùng my life is very difficult. Step by step, I can hiện tại hoàn thành ) How are you? I am fall in line with life in here. I working in living in HCMC. At frirst, my life is very small company, the job is stable. How difficult. Step by step, I can fall in line with about you? would you like to Hochiminh get used to ( quen dần ) life in here. I am City? i will pick you up to go on a working in a small company,; the job is sightseeing of Hochiminh City. please let stable. How about you? would you like to me know if you agree. go to Hochiminh City? i I will pick you up Hear you soon to go on a sightseeing of Hochiminh regards, around the City. please let me know if you Thy agree. Hear you soon regards, Thy Bài viết của nguyenthy 20
  25. 25. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Dear teacher, Dear teacher, Time pass quickly arent you? I dont think Time passes quickly arent you? isnt it I that we got accquaintance nearly 5 dont think that we ve got accquaintance months. Do you remember the first time we for nearly 5 months. Do you remember the met each other? Very susprised and first time we met each other?It was Very interesting, and I dont think that you are my teacher and will teach me with the time susrpriseding and interesting, and I for 3 days of work. You taught me many dodidnt think that you are was my teacher things for my present work. Now, I dont and willwould teach me with the time for 3 think that only 3 days changed my life. days of work. You taught me many things I dont know that you paid much attention for my present work. Now, I dont think to me, so when we end that course, I said that only 3 days changed my life. goodbye to you as normal, but when I had I dodidnt know that you paid much come back my house, I received you attention to me, so when we ended that message with lovely words. From that, our course, I said goodbye to you as normal, relationship becomes closely. You sent but when I had come came back my messages to me everyday and emails, househome , I received your message phonecalls etc. All things make me feel with lovely words. From that, Since then , very happy. our relationship has becomes closelyr. You sentd messages and emails to me I still think that our relationship will be everyday and emails, phonecalls etc. All forever, but I want to stop everything here, things make me feel very happy. because I dont want to affect to my present life as well you. Therefore, this I still think that our relationship will be afternoon, I sent my message to you and request that you should forget me, forever, but I want to stop everything here, concentrate on your work. When I say this, because I dont want to affect to my I am very sad, because I know that I cant present life as well as yours. Therefore, forget you easily. this afternoon, I sent my message to you and requêsted that you should forget me, I am being sad, I received a phonecall concentrate on your work. When I say from you, listening your smile, advices I this, I am very sad, because I know that I forgot that I should forget you. cant forget you easily. What can I should do now? Please give me I am being sad, I received a phone call your advices my teacher. from you, listening to your smile, advices .I forgot that I should forget you. What can should I should do now? Please give me your advices, my teacher ( advice Bài viết của Ho Thi Minh Anh là danh từ không đếm đựoc ,không bao giờ thêm s ) Chú ý chia thì cho đúng ngữ cảnh 21
  26. 26. Writing 03 [Type text] Hi miss wellfog! Hi miss wellfog!(You wrote his name wrong, I am a new member. This is the first i write this is quite unpolite to somebody ) about this topic. I want to write a letter to I am a new member. This is the first time i I my close friend. She is THUY LINH, she is have written write about this topic (Chú ý: This is the first time I have/he has done studying in Chinese. something--> Đây là 1 điểm ngữ pháp khá nhiều bạn bị sai , đây là mẫu câu ở hiện tại, Ha Noi capital còn nếu là quá khứ thì chỉ cần lùi 1 thì : That Saturday, December 22nd 2007 was the first time I had/ he had done something ) . I want to write a letter to my Dear LINH! close friend. She is THUY LINH, she is The first words, I wish you have good studying in Chinese China. health, happiness and success. Ha Noi capital Are you ok? I was indeed happy when I Saturday, December 22nd 2007 heard news about you. Last weekend, it was warm, I went to visit your parents. Dear LINH! When I came, your parents were watching The first words Firstly , I wish you have good TV, They had just seen me, immediately health, happiness and success. they said that: ‘Linh will come back Are you ok? I was indeed happy when I heard Vietnam on this tet holiday’. We didn’t news about you. Last weekend, it was warm, I meet each other a long time so I miss you went to visit your parents. When I came, your very much. I am sure you too. parents were watching TV, They had just seen How is your working? Last letter, I me, immediately they said that: ‘Linh will received your photograp. You looked come back to Vietnam on this Tet holiday’. fatter but more beautiful. It is truth. In this We didn’t meet havent met each other for a time, I have to try to pass my important long time so I miss you very much. I am sure examination. Sometime, I felt very tense you too. and worries. But now everything is ok How is your working? Last letter, I received because I know you will be satify if I pass your photograph. You looked fatter but more the exam. And we will have a lots time to beautiful. It is the truth. In this time, I have to relax when you come back VN. I will try try to pass my important examination. my best. Sometimes, I felt very tense and worries There is a special thing, it’s my secret. I worry. But now everything is ok because I have just been boy friend. He is very know you will be satify satisfied if I pass the wonderful, this is his photograp. I will tell exam. And we will have a lots time to relax more about him next letter. when you come back to VN. I will try my best. I ‘m looking forawd your reply! There is a special thing, it’s my secret. I have just been had a boy friend. He is very Loves from wonderful, this is his photograph. I will tell httb you more about him next letter. I ‘m looking forawd forward to your reply! Bài viết của httb Loves, from httb 22
  27. 27. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Kawaiami 53 Binh Long Street Dear Huong NHien, Ho Chi Minh City I write this letter to tell with you about my June 15th, 2007. embarrassing experience. Dear Huong NHien, My most embarrassing experience I write this letter to tell with you about my happenned three months ago when I embarrassing experience. travelled to Ho Chi Minh city in summer My most embrrassing experience holiday. I stayed in HCM City for about happenned three months ago when I two weeks. In that time, I went for a picnic travelled to Ho Chi Minh city in summer with my uncle and my sister on Sunday. holida. I stayed HCM City for about two That day, when I woke up in the morning, week. In that time, I went for a picnic with the sky was blue and I didnt think the my uncle and my sister on Sunda. That weather would be so bad after thạt. day, when I woke up in the morning the Therefore (Không viết cách nhau nha bạn) sky was blue and I didnt think the weather , I didnt bring my rain coat with me. would be so bad after thạt There fore, I Moreover , I knew that the weather of didnt bring my rain coat with me. More, I HCM City was always sun sunny in the knew that the weather of HCM City always morning and rain rainy in the afternoon. sun in the morning and rain in the Then But I was caught in the rain on in a afternoon. Then I was caught in the rain summer afternoọn . In that evening, I was on a summer afternoọn In that evening, I badly ịll then .It was the most frightening was badly ịll It was the most frightening ?? (embarrassing với frightening đâu có experience of my life. It made me giống nhau đâu bạn ) experience of appreciate my health more. my life. It made me appreciate my health Love, more. (Bạn kết thúc ở đây thì đột ngột quá htth ) And finally, I want to ask you a question. Whats your most embarrassing experience? Can you tell me in your reply? Im looking forward to hearing from Bài viết của httb you. Love, htth 23
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  29. 29. Writing 03 [Type text] Sai Gon Bài sửa của Wellfrog December 29th, 2007 Dear Mom, Its just over one month that the new year Sai Gon begins. Time elapses quickly, dont you think so? Three years have elapsed since I was December 29th, 2007 away from home, but I think as if I have Dear Mom, recently been away from home. Its in just over one month that the new year will I have lived in the strange land for three years, begins. Time elapses quickly, dont you think so? Three years haves elapsed ( thời gian luôn dùng số i.e it was two Tet celebration that I didnt ít )since I was away from home, but I think as if I gather around our family. The Tet before last I have had recently been away from home. ( sau as if didnt go back home because I hadnt enough dùng quá khứ giả định ) money to ride on a train. The Tet last I saved a I have lived in the strange land for three years, i.e it little money, but I didnt buy train ticket, mom. was on two Tet celebrations that I didnt gather It was too difficult to buy the ticket for going to around our family. The Tet before last I didnt go central provinces and north provinces on days back home because I hadnt enough money to ride near Tet. Many people who waited for buying on a train. The Tet last Tet I saved a little money, the ticket all day long still not get. You know, I but I didnt buy any train tickets, mom. It was too difficult to buy the a ticket for going to central dont ride on a car because of car-sick. provinces and north provinces on days near Tet. I had two Tet holiday in HCM city. Here Many people who waited for buying the tickets all atmostphere of Tet was different from one in day long still didnot get anything . You know, I dont our own native place, mom. It seemed to be ride on a travel by car because of car-sick. sadder everyday activities. Streets were not I had spent two Tet holiday in HCM city. Here clowded. Shops stopped buying. Almost atmostphere of Tet was different from one in our anyhouse closed door very tight. The range of own native place, mom. It seemed to be sadder aparment where I am living was very quiet at everyday activities seemed sadder . Streets were Tet holiday because those who live in one not clowded. Shops stopped buying were unable to find customers . Almost anymost houses closed had went back their home to have Tet celebration doors closed very tight. The range of aparments with their family. I was in my aparment alone, where I am living was very quiet at Tet holiday so I felt so lonely. I didnt know where I went because those who live in one those who lived on Tet holiday. I also didnt know to anyone there went back their home to have Tet celebration here. I wished Tet holiday elapse very quickly with their familyies . I was in my aparment alone, so to return to work. I felt so lonely. I didnt know where I went on Tet Mom, This year is nearing its end. I dont holiday. I also didnt know to anyone here. I wished know whether I will go back home to have Tet Tet holiday had elapsed very quickly for me to celebration with the family because I cant buy return to my work. Mom, This year is nearing its going to end. I dont train ticket now. I asked my boss for a day know whether I will go back home to have spend leave to buy the ticket, but still not get, mom. Tet celebration with the family because I cant buy This Tet if I dont go back home, at first I will any train tickets now. I asked my boss for a day say to the family on the occasion of Tet leave to buy the ticket, but still not get I cant buy celebration wish everyone in the family a one , mom. This Tet if I dont go back home, at first I happy new year! will say to wish the whole family on the occasion of Its very late at night. I also write quite many. I Tet celebration wish everyone in the family a happy stop here. I will write more the next letter. new year! You take care of your health Its very late at night. now ,I also write quite many have written a lot . I stop here. I will write more the Give my love to the family in next letter. love, You take care of your health Hoa Give my love to the family love, Bài viết của sauhoang Hoa 25
  30. 30. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Ha noi city Ha noi city December 31,2007 December 31st ,2007 Dear Ly! Dear Ly! This moment,you staying in your house in This momenttime last year ,you I were Gemanic. You have stayed here for 1 staying in at your house in Gemanic. You month. In that time we went to everywhere have stayed there for 1 month. In At that and eat a lot of food.Are you time we went to everywhere and eat ate a remember?we went to Ho Chi Minh lot of food.Are Do you remember?we went museum, around the Hoan Kiemlake to Ho Chi Minh museum, around the Hoan and.... Kiemlake and.... Sometime, we ate Grilled meat roll in Ta Sometimes, we ate Grilled meat roll in Ta Thuong gate,noodles roll serve with Thuong gate,noodles roll serve with beef.Oh,I remember you a lot of.Next year, beef.Oh,I remember miss you a lot of.Next you come back a gain. love year, youI will come back again. linh love, linh chú ý các lỗi thông thường ,như cách Bài viết của fall_in_love dùng to be ,cách đổi sang câu nghi vấn ,chia thì nhé 26
  31. 31. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Ha Noi October 31st, 2007 Dear Anh, Dear Anh, How are you ? How is your family ? It was How are you ? How is and your family ? It a long time since I last took you - the last was is a long time since I last took saw time we met each other . I remember you you - the last time we met each other . I were very glad with a present gift for poor people . I am studying in the Hanoi remember you were very glad with a University of Technology and have got a present when getting a gift for poor people job in the Toyota company , so I am very . I am studying in the at Hanoi University busy . of Technology and have got a job in the I send my invitation to you and I hope that Toyota company , so I am very busy . you will attend the party of mine . I want to I send my invitation to you and I hope that celebrate charitable day of us , so I am you will attend the party of mine . I want having a big barbecue and everybody can meet one another on Sunday 4th October . to celebrate charitable day of us our As a matter of course I have invited my charitable day( ngày từ thiện là ngày gì ? relatives and friends . Yet , I am going to rất khó hiểu ), so I am having a big invite a few people who are new good barbecue and everybody can meet one friends , so there will be a lot of people . another on Sunday 4th October . As a Id love to see you ! I not only miss you but matter of courseActually , I have invited also want to know how is your life . The party will be held at Kim Lien hotel , I many of my relatives and friends . Yet , I think you know it , don’t you ? Its on Kim am going to invite a few people who are Lien street , so lets hope unblock in the new good friends , so there will be a lot of traffic . people . Id love to see you ! I not only I know its quite a long distance from your miss you but also want to know how is house to the hotel, but I believe I will look your life is . ( không phải câu hỏi không radiant face of you . đảo ngữ )The party will be held at Kim Send me as soon as you get this letter . I’m Lien hotel , I think you know it , don’t you looking to seeing you at the party ! ? Its on Kim Lien street , so lets I hope unblock in the traffic will be not hold up .( October 31st 2007 , Ha Noi giao thông sẽ không bị ùn tắc ) zokzok_online_k_1 I know its quite a long distance from your house to the hotel, but I believe I will look see your radiant face of you . SendWrite me as soon as you get this letter . I’m looking forward to seeing you at the Bài viết của zokzok_online_k_1 party ! October 31st 2007 , Ha Noi( đặt ở trên ) zokzok_online_k_1 Tránh dùng sở hửu kiểu N of sở hửu người a house of your ( of you là sai ) nên dùng your house 27
  32. 32. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Jarkata Jarkata November 19th,2005 November 19th,2005 Dear Bush Dear Bush, I have stayed in Jakarta for a week. Every I have stayed in Jakarta for a week. Every things are good. The hotel service is very things are good. The hotel service is very fine. I have visited many places such as fine good . I have visited many places such Keong Mas Imax Theatre, National as Keong Mas Imax Theatre, National Monument... The food here is very Monument... The food here is very delicious but so expensive. Im very happy delicious but so expensive. Im very happy but I also miss you. I will stay here for ,but I also miss you. I will stay here for more 2 days, then I will come back to more 2 days more , then I will come back Vietnam. to Vietnam. Write me soon. Write me soon. Love Love, Huy Huy Bài viết của thunderbirdl9 Bài viết của thunderbirdl9 28
  33. 33. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Da Nang January,7 th 2008 Dear Hoa, Da Nang Are you fine? Did you finish the semester? I hope all are good. January(,)7 th, 2008 (phẩy sau ngày chứ My family was visited HCM city in last week.This is the first i visit HCM không phải tháng ) with my family.We was visit many place Dear Hoa, such as Dam Sen park,Ben Thanh Are you fine? Did Have you finished the market...Special, in this visit i realy semester? I hope all are good.( nên dùng : unexpected when to miss Phong.I dont every thing is ok ) think me can miss him and i very My family was visited HCM city in last happy.Phong invited me to come his house week.This is the first time I i have visited and we was take a photo together.I think HCM city me will miss him very much.Can you visit with my family.( visit không dùng bị động me in this summer? I will very happy if you ,mệnh đề đi sau the first time dùng hiện tại come. hoàn thành ) Your friend, We was visited many places such as Dam sakura Sen park,Ben Thanh market...especially, in this visit i realy unexpected when to Bài viết của sakura_92_ miss Phong During this time ,I came across Phong ( come across : tình cờ gặp Bài viết của sakura_92_ ).I dont think me can miss hadnt thought I could meet him and i ,so I was very happy.Phong invited me to come his house and we was take took a photo together.I think me I will miss him very much.Can you visit me in this summer? I will be very happy if you come. ( happy là tính từ phải có be ở trước ) Your friend, sakura Bài viết của bạn phạm những lỗi sai rất cơ bản ,cần rút kinh nghiệm và học tập chăm chỉ hơn nhé 29
  34. 34. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Phan Thiet,January 7th,2002 Phan Thiet,January 7th,2002 Dear Tony, I have gone to Phan Thiet for two Phan Thiet days.However I couldnt reply on you soon January 7th,2002 because I had to found Has house Dear Tony, first.Now I am staying at her house.We I have gone to Phan Thiet for two went to the beach.It is not far from the days.However ,I couldnt reply on you city.It took us fifteen minute to go there.It soon because I had to found find( sau TO is a wonderful beach with blue sky on the là nguyên mẫu )Has house first.Now I am morning.We ate many seafoods which is staying at her house.We went to the specialities in Phan Thiet ,such as sea- beach.It is not far from the city.It took us sleeve,cockles,etc.I am going to be stay fifteen minutés to go there.It is a wonderful here more two days before I return my beach with blue sky on in the morning.We hometown. I will buy you a special gift.Please wait! ate many a lot of seafoods which is See you in home.Please say "hello" to your specialitiesy in Phan Thiet ,such as sea- family sleeve,cockles,etc.I am going to be stay Love, here for more two days before I return to Joni my hometown. I will buy you a special gift.Please wait! See you in at home.Please say "hello" Remember me to your family( cho gởi lời thăm gia đình bạn ) Bài viết của jointran_ Love, Joni 30
  35. 35. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog 04 02nd Street 04 02nd Street 07th January 2008 07th January January 07th , 2008 Dear Yo, Dear Yo, I receive your card last week. Thanks for I received your card last week. Thanks for your warm care, Im fine now. Ive just your warm care, Im fine now. Ive just finish my first semester examination, the finished my first semester examination, the result is not bad but Im unsatisfied. Oh, I result is not bad ,but Im unsatisfied. Oh, I wont mention about it anymore, lets wont mention about( mention không dùng relax! How is your vacation? Is it cold? Where are you staying? I heard Seiko said giới từ ) it anymore, lets relax! How is that you had met Orlando, did you take your vacation? Is it cold? Where are you any photos with him? It must be such an staying? I heard Seiko said that you had interesting experience, Im sure. I wish I met Orlando, did you take any photos with had been with you. Will you stay there him? It must be such an interesting longer? Let me know when you will get experience, Im sure. I wish I had been home, okay? Dont forget to take care of yourself. Hope with you. Will you stay there longer? Let that youll enjoy it! me know when you will get home, okay? Write to me soon. Dont forget to take care of yourself. Hope Love, that youll enjoy it! Dorothy Write to me soon. Love, Dorothy Bài viết của Dorothy 31
  36. 36. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Dear Mary! ( sao không có nơi chốn ,ngày tháng ? ) For a long time, I dont meet you. How are Dear Mary! you? Do you still work at your farthers For a long time, I dont meet havent met company?.Ah,how are your parents?. I you. ( dùng thì hiện tại hoàn thành ) How have just graduated for 2 months. Now,I are you? Do you still work at for your m working at my cousins company. That farthers company?.Ah,how are your is constructinal companny.I intend to learn parents?. I have just graduated for 2 course of English at next month.But I dont months. Now,I m working at for my know which the school is good. Can you cousins company. That is a constructional help me? What do you intend for next companny.I intend to learn take a course time? I think you should take part in a of English at next month.But However, ( course which you like. but không đứng đầu câu )I dont know Oh!12PM, I have to stop writting here. Give for me to your parents. which the school is good. Can you help I wait for your letter. me? What do you intend forto do next time? I think you should take part in a Love course which you like. Yesterday_all2912 Oh!12PM, I have to stop writting here. Give for Remember me to your parents. I wait for your letter. Bài viết của Yesterday_all2912 Love, Yesterday_all2912 32
  37. 37. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog hai phong city Hai Phong city january 11th, 2008 dear lovely sister! January 11th, 2008 i know youre going to be have a baby on dear lovely sister! next month and im so happy to i know youre going to be have a baby on congratulate to you. Im expecting to see next month ( trứoc next không dùng giời my niece. How about her? im sure she is từ )and im so happy to congratulate to beautiful and very lovely. How is her you. Im expecting to see my niece( chưa name? i think you and your husband spent sanh sao biết niece ). How about her? a lot of time to find her name, hi hi. im sure she is beautiful and very lovely. people say that a young mother would HowWhat is her name? i think you and rather take her own health to care her your husband must have spent a lot of baby, therefore youd rather remember it. time to find her name,( dùng cấu trúc must ill visit you soon. have + p.p để diễn tã sự dự đoán chắc love, hẵn đã xãy ra trong quá khứ ) hi hi. thuy people say that a young mother would rather take her own health to care her baby, therefore, youd rather better Bài viết của thuyphuong291 remember it.( had better : nên ,would rather : thích hơn )ill visit you soon. love, thuy Tất cả các chữ I đều phải viết hoa nhé ! 33
  38. 38. Writing 03 [Type text] Bài sửa của Wellfrog Ho Chi Minh City Ho Chi Minh City Jan , 12th , 2008 Jan ,January 12th , 2008 Dear Mom , Dear Mom , Its 2 days since i went to Ho Chi Minh Its 2 days since i went to Ho Chi Minh City. I feel very pleasured with this trip. City. I feel very pleasured ( pleasure là Everything is so wonderful ! danh từ )with this trip. Everything is so Although its an exciting city, the air is wonderful ! fresh in the early morning .I like this. Although its an exciting city, the air is People are friendly here. Do you know fresh in the early morning .I like this. what i like most? Its their voicẹ. Its very People are friendly here. Do you know nice although i have to try me best to hear what i like most? Its their voicẹ. Its very what they are saying. Ya, hearing North nice although i have to try me best to hear voice is very hard. what they are saying. Ya, hearing North We have visited 2 famous places. At the voice is very hard. first day , we went to Ben Thanh market. We have visited 2 famous places. At On Yeah , it was very crowed. There were the first day , we went to Ben Thanh many things to buy but do you know the market. Yeah , it was very crowed. There price was very high. Then , we went to Dam Sen Park. Its was very interesting. were many things to buy, but do you know We took part in many games here. We ,the price was very high. Then , we went laughed and felt happy all the day. Ah, we to Dam Sen Park. Its was very interesting. also took many photos when we were We took part in many games here. We playing games.There are some photos so laughed and felt happy all the day. Ah, we funny. The nigh is also beautiful here. Its also took many photos when we were very ideal to walk with friends at night. playing games.There are some photos Today , we are going to visit Ben Nha which are so funny. The nigh is Nights are Rong Pork. I think it will be very intesting , also beautiful here.( nói chung chung too. không dùng the ) Its very ideal to walk Take care and ill write you soon ! with friends at night. Love , Today , we are going to visit Ben Nha Your little girl , Rong Pork Port . I think it will be very Lam Anh interesting , too. Take care and ill write you soon ! Bài viết của Đỗ Lâm Anh Love , Your little girl , Lam Anh 34
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