2. Transitions
To
help one paragraph flow more
naturally into the next, use transitions.
The first reason…
Secondly…
Furthermore…
3.
4. Main Idea
Every paragraph should present one main
idea
The first reason why I think arranged marriages
should be respected is because…
Next, Support your reason.
Fact
Reason
Example
Detail
5. Fact
29% of all marriages in the United States
ends in divorce. In stark contrast, India has
a divorce rate of 1%. This is due primarily
to the prevalence of arranged marriage.
6. Reasons
Sam George, in the article “Arranged
Marriages” states that, “in arranged
marriages, man and woman comes from
a similar background, and therefore, are
more likely to share the same views of
marriage and family.” This means that…
7. Example
From my own experience, I know that my
parents filed for divorce because of
irreconcilable differences. Although they
were in a love relationship, their marriage
did not work. In the article, “Arrange
Marriages” the researcher was able to
conclude “that the process of mate
selection does not guarantee happiness
or longevity of a marriage relationship.
8. Details
You must always explain in detail what any
quote you use means.
Sam George says, “support from extended
families is a big benefit of arranged
marriages.” This means that in-laws and other
family members can provide much needed
help to the spouses such as babysitting, loans,
or even a supportive ear to listen to marital
problems.
9. Conclusion
A conclusion should go beyond just summarizing the
points you made. It should also leave the reader
thinking about your paper.
Try including a relevant question after summing up
your point.
For instance,
In conclusion, the negatives of an arranged marriage
include interference from in-laws, being in a loveless
relationship, and sometimes being treated like a slave.
Ask yourself, is this the kind of life I want someone to
live?
