7/8 ELA Workshop <ul><li>Copiague Middle School </li></ul><ul><li>Staffed by Ms. Kim Henson, Ms. Staci Melnick </li></ul><...
ELA Performance Levels <ul><li>1 - Not Meeting Learning Standards </li></ul><ul><li>2 - Partially Meeting Learning Standar...
Modified Workshop Model <ul><li>Read-Alouds </li></ul><ul><li>Mini-Lessons </li></ul><ul><li>Independent Work </li></ul><u...
...adapted to our MS time frame “42 min. /alternating days” <ul><li>Read-Aloud and/or  Mini-Lesson, once a week </li></ul>...
Manage the Elements... <ul><li>Takes two weeks to actually have class 5 times </li></ul><ul><li>If 4 groups per class, wou...
English & Reading Teachers  share rooms & ideas...
...and strive to maintain a print rich environment
Text a favorite student publication...
<ul><li>Comprehension Skill Based Mini-Lessons </li></ul>Author’s Purpose  Cause & Effect Characterization Compare & Contr...
Read-Alouds <ul><li>Promote Metacognition  </li></ul>Demonstrate Active Reading Strategies Thinking Before, During, and Af...
<ul><li>Choices </li></ul><ul><li>Values </li></ul><ul><li>Loyalty </li></ul><ul><li>Empathy </li></ul><ul><li>Free Will v...
<ul><li>English Class  - typically one novel done by whole class </li></ul><ul><li>Workshop  - differentiate instruction w...
High Interest Books! F&P 620 – 910 1300 + Lexile Gr. Level 500 – 750 O, P 3/4 620 – 910 Q, R 4 S, T 4/5 730 – 950 T 4/5 73...
Log of Books Read...
 
8th grade Guided Group
7th grade  Literature Circle
<ul><li>  Our modified   THINKMARKS </li></ul>
“Chunk the Text”
Record Keeping- having multiple classes, in groups, on alternating days demands ongoing notation of student progress, task...
Text Text Text Our Yellow Brick Road is technology based!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Smart Board Lessons
 
 
 
Our students react & respond  to their reading  using technology.
 
Two books, two versions of student response for each...
The Skin I’m In <ul><li>By: Rachel Wesley </li></ul>
5 - Events that Shaped Maleeka. <ul><li>1 st  event – kids always tease her  </li></ul><ul><li>1 st  Description – they ma...
3 – Lessons Learned <ul><li>1 st  Lessons – sometimes you just have to take charge of your own life.   </li></ul><ul><li>1...
Opinions and Reactions <ul><li>I  think this is a great book. </li></ul><ul><li>It teaches you a lot about your relationsh...
Recommendations <ul><li>“  I think most teens should read this book because it shows you that if you let your friends cont...
The Skin I’m In <ul><li>By: Aiysha A. Dunlap </li></ul>The Skin I'm In
In This Book….. <ul><li>In the beginning of this book we meet a girl named Maleeka. She is very smart but gets teased abou...
In the story we….. <ul><li>In the story we meet a girl named Charlese Jones. </li></ul><ul><li>Char brings Maleek cloths t...
In the story….. <ul><li>In the story a new teacher comes to the school, the theacher name is Miss. Saunders </li></ul><ul>...
Maleek starts to realize…. <ul><li>Maleek starts to realize she is beautiful as she is but she just can’t understand why e...
Maleek finally…. <ul><li>Maleek finally stands up for her self against Char. </li></ul><ul><li>When she told on Char she g...
Recommendation <ul><li>This is a great book to read because of all the events that go on in the book. </li></ul><ul><li>I ...
Green Angel  by Alice Hoffman  <ul><li>ELA workshop Power-point presentation by Kasandra Velasquez </li></ul>
In Green Angel there was 5 important events or chapters in Green’s life <ul><li>Heart---------is how it happened  </li></u...
Heart- [how it happened] <ul><li>In the beginning Green was a shy-no-talking-person. </li></ul><ul><li>Green thought she w...
Soul- [what she dreamed <ul><li>When she found out that her parents and sister died [she thought] she went to the city and...
Treasure-[who she loved] <ul><li>She slept under the table, stopped eating and stayed to herself. </li></ul><ul><li>She al...
Rain-what she lost <ul><li>A couple of chapters earlier she saw Heather Jones. Heather Jones was a girl who went to her sc...
Sister-is the story she tells . <ul><li>When she stopped being shy and changed her name back to  Green , her sister recogn...
Recommendation <ul><li>I recommend this book to anyone who is interested in mystery or sad depressing stories . </li></ul>...
Green Angel By: Alice Hoffman <ul><li>Christy Hoffman </li></ul><ul><li>ELA Workshop 1B </li></ul>
<ul><li>Parents and little sister went to the city. </li></ul><ul><li>Green stayed home to work on the garden. </li></ul><...
Soul <ul><li>Started to give herself tattoos. </li></ul><ul><li>She cut her hair. </li></ul><ul><li>Didn’t want people kno...
Treasure <ul><li>Gathers chestnuts from the woods. </li></ul><ul><li>Goes in the woods with Onion her sisters dog. </li></...
Rain <ul><li>Got along well with Diamond. </li></ul><ul><li>Baked bread everyday for dogs, birds, neighbor and her and Dia...
Sister <ul><li>Green started having dreams about her sister again. </li></ul><ul><li>She became green again. </li></ul><ul...
3 lessons <ul><li>The author wanted the reader to learn from these events in the book Green Angel that if something bad ha...
Recommendation. <ul><li>I recommend you read the book  Green Angel . It is a warm filling outrageous book. It tells about ...
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This is our LILAC [Long Island Language Arts Council] presentation. It is our model for a modified reading workshop, developed for middle school schedule and population.

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LILAC Presentation 4/17/09

  1. 1. 7/8 ELA Workshop <ul><li>Copiague Middle School </li></ul><ul><li>Staffed by Ms. Kim Henson, Ms. Staci Melnick </li></ul><ul><li>& Dr. Julie Tedeschi </li></ul><ul><li>LILAC Conference </li></ul><ul><li>April 24, 2009 </li></ul>
  2. 2. ELA Performance Levels <ul><li>1 - Not Meeting Learning Standards </li></ul><ul><li>2 - Partially Meeting Learning Standards </li></ul><ul><li>3 - Meeting Learning Standards [650+] </li></ul><ul><li>4 - Meeting Learning Standards w/Distinction </li></ul>Our ELA Workshops Service: A Days – 2’s, and borderline 3’s B Days – low 3’s to mid range 3’s & are linked to a common set of English teachers
  3. 3. Modified Workshop Model <ul><li>Read-Alouds </li></ul><ul><li>Mini-Lessons </li></ul><ul><li>Independent Work </li></ul><ul><li>Individual Conferences </li></ul><ul><li>Guided Groups </li></ul><ul><li>Literature Circles </li></ul><ul><li>Whole Class Summary </li></ul>Uses Elementary elements...
  4. 4. ...adapted to our MS time frame “42 min. /alternating days” <ul><li>Read-Aloud and/or Mini-Lesson, once a week </li></ul><ul><li>Independent Reading & Response work, each class </li></ul><ul><li>Teacher groups, each class </li></ul><ul><li>Exit Slip Assessment, at least once a week </li></ul>
  5. 5. Manage the Elements... <ul><li>Takes two weeks to actually have class 5 times </li></ul><ul><li>If 4 groups per class, would take one week to see each group for ‘guided’ instruction </li></ul><ul><li>A day with no mini-lesson or read aloud would allow meeting of 2 groups in 42 min. period </li></ul><ul><li>Some days allow for individual conferencing only </li></ul><ul><li>Mini-lesson or read-aloud can sometimes happen in the small group </li></ul>
  6. 6. English & Reading Teachers share rooms & ideas...
  7. 7. ...and strive to maintain a print rich environment
  8. 8. Text a favorite student publication...
  9. 9. <ul><li>Comprehension Skill Based Mini-Lessons </li></ul>Author’s Purpose Cause & Effect Characterization Compare & Contrast Conflict [Problem/Action/Solution]* Context Clues Critical Analysis* Drawing Conclusions Evaluating Text * Fact & Opinion Figurative Language [Literary or Poetic Devices] Flashback/Foreshadowing Genre Identification Inferences Irony* Main Ideas & Details Making Judgments * Point of View * Predictions * Sequence Setting Theme Tone/Mood Visualization * * Additions to pacing guide used in English classroom
  10. 10. Read-Alouds <ul><li>Promote Metacognition </li></ul>Demonstrate Active Reading Strategies Thinking Before, During, and After Reading
  11. 11. <ul><li>Choices </li></ul><ul><li>Values </li></ul><ul><li>Loyalty </li></ul><ul><li>Empathy </li></ul><ul><li>Free Will vs Fate </li></ul><ul><li>Identity </li></ul><ul><li>Stress </li></ul><ul><li>Good vs Evil </li></ul>Grade 7 Grade 8 Essential Question Big Ideas
  12. 12. <ul><li>English Class - typically one novel done by whole class </li></ul><ul><li>Workshop - differentiate instruction with multiple novels </li></ul>a variety of Class Novels = Independent Books
  13. 13. High Interest Books! F&P 620 – 910 1300 + Lexile Gr. Level 500 – 750 O, P 3/4 620 – 910 Q, R 4 S, T 4/5 730 – 950 T 4/5 730 – 960 U 5 730 – 960 V 5/6 800 – 1300 W 5/6 800 – 1300 X, Y 6/7, 8 Z 7, 8
  14. 14. Log of Books Read...
  15. 16. 8th grade Guided Group
  16. 17. 7th grade Literature Circle
  17. 18. <ul><li> Our modified THINKMARKS </li></ul>
  18. 19. “Chunk the Text”
  19. 20. Record Keeping- having multiple classes, in groups, on alternating days demands ongoing notation of student progress, tasks completed, group member changes, and other notations to tailor instruction, providing the best fit for those students
  20. 21. Text Text Text Our Yellow Brick Road is technology based!
  21. 30. Smart Board Lessons
  22. 34. Our students react & respond to their reading using technology.
  23. 36. Two books, two versions of student response for each...
  24. 37. The Skin I’m In <ul><li>By: Rachel Wesley </li></ul>
  25. 38. 5 - Events that Shaped Maleeka. <ul><li>1 st event – kids always tease her </li></ul><ul><li>1 st Description – they made fun of how dark she was and the clothes she wore. </li></ul><ul><li>2 nd event – teachers would talk about her </li></ul><ul><li>2 nd Description – they would say nice things about her because she does her work. </li></ul><ul><li>3 rd event – char told her she has to look like someone if she wants to be her friend. </li></ul><ul><li>3 rd Description – char gave meeleka clothes. </li></ul><ul><li>4 th event – she starts liking herself </li></ul><ul><li>4 th Description – she starts looking at herself and saying that she is pretty </li></ul><ul><li>5 th event – she cut her hair </li></ul><ul><li>5 th Description – she felt pretty when she cut her hair </li></ul>
  26. 39. 3 – Lessons Learned <ul><li>1 st Lessons – sometimes you just have to take charge of your own life. </li></ul><ul><li>1 st Explanation – you don’t have to do everything your friends do. </li></ul><ul><li>2 nd Lessons – what you wear doesn't mean everything. </li></ul><ul><li>2 nd Explanation – she dose what Char tells her so she could get clothes. </li></ul><ul><li>3 rd Lessons – you have to stick up for your self at all times. </li></ul><ul><li>3 rd Explanation – Maleeka made Char tell her what to do all the time. </li></ul>
  27. 40. Opinions and Reactions <ul><li>I think this is a great book. </li></ul><ul><li>It teaches you a lot about your relationships with friends. </li></ul><ul><li>It shows you not to let your friends control your life. </li></ul><ul><li>It also teaches you to respect yourself, otherwise people won’t respect you. </li></ul>
  28. 41. Recommendations <ul><li>“ I think most teens should read this book because it shows you that if you let your friends control your life, it turns out to be no good.” </li></ul><ul><li>I enjoyed this reading and I look forward to reading more books on this type of subject among others. </li></ul>
  29. 42. The Skin I’m In <ul><li>By: Aiysha A. Dunlap </li></ul>The Skin I'm In
  30. 43. In This Book….. <ul><li>In the beginning of this book we meet a girl named Maleeka. She is very smart but gets teased about her skin color and the clothes she has to wear. </li></ul><ul><li>Her dad passed away when she was 10 leaving her mamma and her to make a living by themselves. </li></ul><ul><li>Maleeka’s mamma had to sew Maleeka’s clothes because they had very little money. </li></ul>
  31. 44. In the story we….. <ul><li>In the story we meet a girl named Charlese Jones. </li></ul><ul><li>Char brings Maleek cloths to wear so she wouldn’t have to wear her mother old rags to school. </li></ul><ul><li>Char is kind of like “Maleeka’s friend” but Char uses her to do her homework for her. </li></ul><ul><li>Char is not the kind of girl you would want as a friend so Maleeka says. </li></ul>
  32. 45. In the story….. <ul><li>In the story a new teacher comes to the school, the theacher name is Miss. Saunders </li></ul><ul><li>Miss. Saunders is just like Maleek, Miss. Saunders has a big white patch on her face. So she gets made fun of for that. </li></ul><ul><li>Miss. Saunders takes a liking to Maleek and trys to help her find her way. </li></ul>
  33. 46. Maleek starts to realize…. <ul><li>Maleek starts to realize she is beautiful as she is but she just can’t understand why everyone else doesn’t think so. </li></ul><ul><li>Maleek starts to realize that she shouldn’t care what everybody else thinks of her because she is beautiful the way she is. </li></ul><ul><li>One big thing Maleek realizes is that she doesn’t need Char as a friend. </li></ul>
  34. 47. Maleek finally…. <ul><li>Maleek finally stands up for her self against Char. </li></ul><ul><li>When she told on Char she gained respect from everybody in the school. </li></ul><ul><li>Also Maleek crush Caleb wrote her a poem that he gave to her. </li></ul><ul><li>She read the poem and loved it and they held hands on the way to there next class. </li></ul>
  35. 48. Recommendation <ul><li>This is a great book to read because of all the events that go on in the book. </li></ul><ul><li>I think you u also read it because if someone is teasing you about your skin color or your clothes or anything thing this book is the book to read. </li></ul><ul><li>It will make you feel better about yourself I guarantee it! </li></ul>
  36. 49. Green Angel by Alice Hoffman <ul><li>ELA workshop Power-point presentation by Kasandra Velasquez </li></ul>
  37. 50. In Green Angel there was 5 important events or chapters in Green’s life <ul><li>Heart---------is how it happened </li></ul><ul><li>Soul----------is what she dreamed </li></ul><ul><li>Treasure----is who she loved </li></ul><ul><li>Rain----------is what she lost </li></ul><ul><li>Sister--------is the story she tells </li></ul>
  38. 51. Heart- [how it happened] <ul><li>In the beginning Green was a shy-no-talking-person. </li></ul><ul><li>Green thought she was the luckiest person ever because she had the greatest family and the prettiest garden. </li></ul><ul><li>I think that Green should’ve been more outgoing and not shy. </li></ul><ul><li>Green also had a very outgoing and un-shy bright sister aurora everybody loved her but, Green wasn’t jealous </li></ul><ul><li>One day when her parents and her little sister [aurora] went to the city they died in a huge fire in the city, green stayed home that day. </li></ul>
  39. 52. Soul- [what she dreamed <ul><li>When she found out that her parents and sister died [she thought] she went to the city and you could barely see anything because of the debris. </li></ul><ul><li>Her sister started to come back in Greens dreams. </li></ul><ul><li>Her hair got burnt by the time she got home. </li></ul><ul><li>She got a pin and started to tattoo herself and she also cut her hair. </li></ul><ul><li>Then Green changed her name to Ash. </li></ul><ul><li>I think that green shouldn’t of done that she was just depressed and probably thought it was her fault. </li></ul>
  40. 53. Treasure-[who she loved] <ul><li>She slept under the table, stopped eating and stayed to herself. </li></ul><ul><li>She also stayed with Onion [he changed her, made her feel good because she talked to him and got him to talk. </li></ul>
  41. 54. Rain-what she lost <ul><li>A couple of chapters earlier she saw Heather Jones. Heather Jones was a girl who went to her school, her parent worked in the city so they died too. </li></ul><ul><li>Heather Jones disappeared. And green was looking for her because they were friends now green gave her a dress that was her mothers’. </li></ul>
  42. 55. Sister-is the story she tells . <ul><li>When she stopped being shy and changed her name back to Green , her sister recognized her and started coming back to her dreams. </li></ul><ul><li>On her birthday she left the woods and went to celebrate it with her neighbor. </li></ul>
  43. 56. Recommendation <ul><li>I recommend this book to anyone who is interested in mystery or sad depressing stories . </li></ul><ul><li>I think this story was a really touching story yes it was sad but Green was the one that got hurt the most but at the end she survives she gets through that tough moment but Heather Jones doesn't. </li></ul>
  44. 57. Green Angel By: Alice Hoffman <ul><li>Christy Hoffman </li></ul><ul><li>ELA Workshop 1B </li></ul>
  45. 58. <ul><li>Parents and little sister went to the city. </li></ul><ul><li>Green stayed home to work on the garden. </li></ul><ul><li>Parents and little sister died in fire. </li></ul><ul><li>Ashes and dust from the fire destroyed there places. </li></ul><ul><li>Green got ashes in her eyes. </li></ul><ul><li>Started calling herself Ash. </li></ul>Heart
  46. 59. Soul <ul><li>Started to give herself tattoos. </li></ul><ul><li>She cut her hair. </li></ul><ul><li>Didn’t want people knowing she was alive. </li></ul><ul><li>Stayed inside the house most of the day. </li></ul><ul><li>Tattooed roses and ravens each night before going to bed. </li></ul><ul><li>Clothes had thorns on them. </li></ul><ul><li>Had boots with nails hammered in. </li></ul><ul><li>Decided to go into town. </li></ul>
  47. 60. Treasure <ul><li>Gathers chestnuts from the woods. </li></ul><ul><li>Goes in the woods with Onion her sisters dog. </li></ul><ul><li>Traded in chestnuts. </li></ul><ul><li>Greyhound had followed her home. </li></ul><ul><li>Green took care of the greyhound. </li></ul><ul><li>Named the greyhound dog Ghost. </li></ul><ul><li>Ghost hurt its paw. </li></ul><ul><li>Cleaned her neighbors house. </li></ul><ul><li>Made a loaf of bead for her neighbor. </li></ul><ul><li>Helped two baby birds. </li></ul><ul><li>Someone came to her house. </li></ul><ul><li>Didn’t see his face but called him Diamond. </li></ul>
  48. 61. Rain <ul><li>Got along well with Diamond. </li></ul><ul><li>Baked bread everyday for dogs, birds, neighbor and her and Diamond. </li></ul><ul><li>Diamond believed the Garden would grow. </li></ul><ul><li>Still was looking for Heather Jones. </li></ul><ul><li>Heather had been drinking. </li></ul><ul><li>Heather has been eating mud just too fill her stomach. </li></ul>
  49. 62. Sister <ul><li>Green started having dreams about her sister again. </li></ul><ul><li>She became green again. </li></ul><ul><li>She took of that jacket with the thorns coming out of it </li></ul><ul><li>She took of the boots that had the nails in the. </li></ul><ul><li>Heather Jones died from dancing around a fire drunk and fell in it. </li></ul>
  50. 63. 3 lessons <ul><li>The author wanted the reader to learn from these events in the book Green Angel that if something bad happens it might hurt at first but don’t take it out on you. </li></ul><ul><li>I also learned from this book that its not good to stay depressed. </li></ul><ul><li>Its not good to change your whole self around when something bad goes on. </li></ul><ul><li>I can connect to this book because something tragic happened in my life. </li></ul><ul><li>When something tragic happened in my life I started to be depressed. </li></ul><ul><li>But then I started to become myself again like Green. </li></ul>
  51. 64. Recommendation. <ul><li>I recommend you read the book Green Angel . It is a warm filling outrageous book. It tells about something bad that happens in Green’s life. It tells how Green started to change her whole self around. It shows how she started to gather more food, and how she made some new friends. At the end of the book some things go on with Green and also Heather Jones. The ending is so tragic but then Green changes again -changes into something good. </li></ul>
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