The writer of the academic essay aims to
persuade readers of an idea based on
evidence. The beginning of the essay is a
crucial first step in this process. In order to
engage readers and establish your authority,
the beginning of your essay has to
accomplish certain business. Your beginning
should introduce the essay, focus it, and
INTRODUCE THE ESSAY
The beginning lets your readers know what the
essay is about, the topic. The essay's topic does
not exist in a vacuum, however; part of letting
readers know what your essay is about means
establishing the essay's context, the frame within
which you will approach your topic.
Orienting readers means providing the information and
explanations necessary for your readers to understand your
argument. Orienting is important throughout your essay, but it is
crucial in the beginning. Readers who don't have the information
they need to follow your discussion will get lost and quit reading.
Supplying the necessary information to orient your readers may be
as simple as answering the basic questions of who, what, where,
when, how, and why. It may mean including a short summary of the
text you'll be analyzing.
At the minimum, the Introductory paragraph should briefly
introduce the author, the style of poem (sonnet, blank verse, free
verse), and the basic topic/theme the poem addresses. Do make
sure it leads up to the thesis; don’t begin your argument in the
The thesis of the essay will be your statement of
interpretation about what a particular poem means. There
are two related questions that you should consider in order
to come up with the thesis for your poetry essay:
1. What is this poem about? (determined through a close
2. Why did the writer choose to use the words, images,
metaphors and perhaps the particular kind of rhythm
scheme; what effect do they achieve?
Your thesis statement should contain answers to these
questions. Often thesis statements are complex enough to
require two or even three sentences. If you need multiple
sentences to express your idea, use them.
WHY A STRONG THESIS?
A paper needs a strong thesis
statement so that it can make a
strong argument. Weak thesis
statements can result in papers
with no clear direction or in papers
that rely on summary to fill their
pages. A good thesis statement
predicts limits and organizes the
content of the essay. In other
words, it notifies your reader about
the scope of the paper, telling him
or her exactly what your paper will
cover and in what order.
• Theodore Roethke’s “My Papa’s Waltz” uses robust imagery and
a profoundly ironic tone to illustrate the paradoxical nature of
the speaker’s childhood relationship with his father, suggesting
that a father’s love is not always expressed through a gentle
• Theodore Roethke’s “My Papa’s Waltz” juxtaposes imagery of
playfulness and violence to evoke an ambiguous tone of
reverence mixed with fear, illustrating the speaker’s attempt to
reconcile his paradoxical childhood relationship with his father.
• The waltzing ritual in Theodore Roethke’s “My Papa’s Waltz” is
not about dancing; it is about a man who asserts and maintains
physical control over his son even as he loses control over
The first body paragraph generally presents the large
issues; for example, it might advise the reader of
dramatic tension or describe the speaker’s paradox
The next paragraphs should develop the discussion
of the conflict by focusing on details of form, rhetoric,
syntax, and vocabulary. In these paragraphs, the
writer should analyze or explain the poem by
discussing details line by line. The writer should
include important elements of rhyme, rhythm, and
Each paragraph should consist of a point
which is credible, relevant to your thesis,
• Remember that you are attempting to convince
your reader of certain position.
• Start each paragraph with a topic sentence
that tells your reader the focus of your
argument. Make sure that your topic sentence
ties back to your thesis.
• The body of the paragraph should support
your the assertion (and by extension, your
thesis) with convincing evidence.
You must create a compelling argument through evidence,
and you must present that evidence in the context of your
• Before the quotation, describe the evidence in terms of the
context of the poem. Where is it located in the poem? Inform the
reader what he or she should be looking for in the poem.
• After the quotation, explain problematic syntax or vocabulary or
describe any particular rhetorical strategy you will include in your
• Then, when you analyze the quote, show how it supports the
claims you are making in your thesis. This is the most important
part of your paper; it is where you make your interpretation clear
to the reader and where you prove your thesis. Don't assume
that the quotation will speak for itself—you must explain it, so
the reader understands your interpretation.
TIPS TO KEEP IN MIND
1.Refer to the speaking voice in the poem as the
speaker” or “the poet.”
2.Use the present tense when writing the explication.
The poem, as a work of literature, continues to
3.To avoid unnecessary uses of the verb “to be” in
your compositions, the following list suggests some
verbs you can use when writing the explication:
The conclusion is your last chance to persuade your
readers to accept your point of view, and to impress
yourself upon them as a writer and thinker. The
impression you create in your conclusion will stay with
readers after they have finished the essay.
The end of an essay should therefore convey a sense
of completeness and closure as well as a sense of the
lingering possibilities of the topic, its larger meaning,
its implications: the final paragraph should close the
discussion without closing it off.
TO ESTABLISH A SENSE OF CLOSURE,
YOU MIGHT DO ONE OR MORE OF THE
1. Conclude by framing your essay, that is linking the last
paragraph to the first, perhaps by reiterating a word or
phrase you used at the beginning.
2. Conclude with a sentence that's compound or parallel in
structure; such sentences can establish a sense of balance
or order that may feel just right at the end of a complex
3. Conclude by setting your discussion into a different,
perhaps larger, context.
4. Conclude by considering the implications of your
argument (or analysis or discussion). What does your
argument imply, or involve, or suggest?
HOW NOT TO END YOUR ESSAY
1. Don't simply summarize your essay. A brief summary of
your argument may be useful, especially if your essay is
long, but shorter essays tend not to require a restatement
of your main ideas.
2. Avoid phrases like "in conclusion," "to conclude," "in
summary," and "to sum up." These phrases can be useful
in oral presentations. But readers can see when an essay
is about to end. You'll irritate your audience if you
belabor the obvious.
3. Don't undercut your authority by making statements like,
"this is just one approach to the subject; or, there may be
other, better approaches”; or, “this is just my opinion.”
Draft your essay
Bring a copy to class tomorrow.