GOOD LETTER
Claire Le Tulle
44 rue de la Bac
Caen
Cexdex: 14000
FRANCE
tel. ++ 545-787-541
Email: cletulle@hotmail.com
Ms. Mary Woodgate
Director, Consumer Relations
ILC
502 Coverdale Walk
London SW1 76R
February 14, 2003
Dear Ms Woodgate,
Having read your company's recent advert on Jobs.com seeking trainees for you
consumer relations department, I would like to apply for one of these positions.
Besides my experience in retail sales, where I learned to balance the interests of
the customer with those of the store, I have also planned a number of retail and
campus events. I have arranged for food vendors and entertainers; I have rented
tables, chairs, and tents; and I have helped design newspaper advertising for
events similar to the neighbourhood block parties in which ILC participates each
summer.
Details of my qualifications and experience are given on my CV, which I enclose
for your perusal.

Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any additional information
pertinent to my application. I can be reached at (507) 545-787-541 or via email.
Yours sincerely,
Encl: CV
BAD LETTER
February 14, 2003
Claire Le Tulle
44 rue de la Bac
Caen
Cexdex: 14000
FRANCE
tel. ++ 545-787-541
cletulle@hotmail.com
Ms Woodgate;
Congratulations that your company is doing so well! I assume that is the case
given that your company is seeking trainees for its consumer relations

department. Hereby I apply for the job.
I have great qualifications since I have been studying business in Paris for three
years. I'm working at IKEA, too, on a p-t basis, as part of the telephone sales
support team. I am thinking about going in to journalism so this job would help
me figure out which direction I should follow.
My Working Experience
Besides my experience in retail sales (with IKEA), where I learned to balance the
interests of the customer with those of the store, I have also planned a number of
retail and campus events. I've arranged for food vendors and entertainers and
my referees will tell you that I was totally committed to the job. Moreover, I have
rented tables, chairs, and tents; and I have helped design newspaper advertising
for events similar to the neighbourhood block parties in which ILC participates
each summer.
About Myself
I'm a positive, easy-going person who, when not working, likes to write poetry,
visit museums and go sailing with friends. I am communicative, a team-player
and goal-orientated.
Your company would really suit my profile and I think I'd get a lot from working for
you.
I think I could contribute a lot to ILS and would be happy to discuss in detail my
ideas for the job. You can reach me anytime on my contact numbers.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards!

Encl: Please find my CV