Dear Jim, I cannot evaluate its presentation, but I can say that the poem that you wrote, then below, is simply wonderful and demonstrates that you are very sensible and that has a great heart....
As I walk away My world comes tumbling down That’s allright You’ll go home again without me Where will I go tomorrow It doesn’t matter, if you want me to stay Should I turn around, come back to you Or should I keep on walking away
It feels so good with you It feels so right with you But I will bring you sorrow If I stay with you
I will lay down my life for you
I kept going on, when going on Made no real sense at all But it’s no good now, it’s all clear to me Now that my back is against the wall How will you get through tomorrow It doesn’t matter, I know you will And we’ll be together forever Bound by the way we made each other feel
I will lay down my life for you
It feels so good with you yes it feels so right with you
...........Now if I HURT you, FORGIVE me Try not to lose faith in me You know I would never hurt you intentionally What will I do tomorrow Without your love I would surely lose my way And rush headlong into nowhere On a ghost highway
It feels so good with you It feels so right with you But I will bring you sorrow If I stay with you
Goodbye my love.................................................................................Jim !
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