2. Facebook radio trailer
I uploaded my radio
advert to face book
and got some good
feedback.
If I was to do this task
again I would think
about the age range
however other
people said that the
age range was ok.
But I also found out that our radio
trailer makes people want to watch
the documentary and that it does
sound itneresting,so I think we
have done well.
4. If I were to change anything to my
documentary......
• My audience feedback has showed me that some
people would like to have seen a few more facts
in the opening five minutes for example is there
evidence of harmful ingredients in sweets etc. I
also found that it can jump from topic to topic a
bit quick but as it was only the opening five
minutes we wanted to fit everything in. if I was to
do this topic again I would probably do a journey
of someone who always youse to eat sweets to
go to not eating them at all.
5. The things I found that I did well....
• Allot of people said that the topic of sweets is
a really good and interesting topic they also
said that the interviews and music was really
good and that the would most defiantly want
to watch the rest of the documentary they
also said we used some good shots and good
camera work.
6. The questions I asked about my print advert
Please could you answer the questions below about mine and my
groups newspaper advertisement
1. Does this advert grab your attention?
2. If you saw this print advert would you know what the
documentary was about?
3. Do you think the documentary is suitable for people between
the ages of 20-40?
4. Do you think the slogan relates to the topic of the
documentary?
5. Is there anything you would change?
8. If i was to do print advert again
• If I was to do the print advert again I would
think about changing the size of the time and
make it a little bit bigger and I also think I
would maybe add some sweets into the
picture as some people thought that it was
more to do with the dentist .
