Oak Hill's Senior Project Creating a Thesis PPT#2Presentation Transcript
Creating a Thesis Statement
Developing a Thesis Statement
Cause and Effect
Remember: Your thesis must carry you for 7 to 10 pages!!!
Evaluate your thesis statement in terms of your research
Is your thesis statement too broad?
Is your thesis statement too narrow?
Can your thesis statement be proven using your research?
Good or Bad Thesis Statement?
The increased production of sales of reliable,
low-cost laptops will raise median SAT scores
over the next 15 years.
Example #1 is the BAD Thesis because it is vague and doesn’t set the parameters of the discussion to be had, while Example #2 is the GOOD example since it attempts to. Example #1 New advancements in computers will lead to smarter students.