1. Editing the review
In this task I have corrected my grammar and misspellings for
my evaluation of the documentary our group created.
When editing this piece I also re-worded, paragraphed and
added to the information I wrote.

2. When going editing my review I decided to re-word minor
details at the beginning of the introduction. I replaced task
with assignment to make it sound more professional. By
using this, the review has more purpose than it just being a
task.
Right clicking and using the ‘Synonyms’ action allows me to
select the word I need to change this.

3. When reading the introduction I also noticed that the beginning
sentence would need a comma at the start to give it better
grammar and make it easier for the reader.
I did this myself and did not use any spell checks.

4. For this sentence, I decided to re-word what is said so it
makes more sense and can seem more professional. I did
this without any auto corrections because I was dissatisfied
with words used.

5. In this paragraph, I chose to take out some words so it would make more
sense and because ‘documentaries’ became quite repetitive. By doing
this it would make it easier for the reader and also wouldn’t be as boring
to read because of the same words being used.

6. Here, I have re-arranged and re-worded what has been said because
it didn’t really make sense and didn’t get to the point as much.
This would help the reader understand more and get more to the
point.
I did this on my own without using any corrections from the
computer.

7. In this paragraph, I am talking
about conventions of a
documentary and mention archival
footage, voice-overs and
interviews. All this being squashed
into one paragraph may make it
harder for the reader and also
make it boring reading a piece of
large text.
Instead of leaving this I decided to
paragraph each subject of the topic
to make it more interesting for the
reader and so it is easier.

8. For the paragraph I found
many mistakes and had to
re-word most parts to make
it more professional and
easy to read.
I have replaced some words and also
added more information. Again, I
have paragraphed the text better so
it would make more sense and be
easier for the reader.

9. Here I have used the
computer to replace the
mistakes I made with the
correct word.
I noticed a small spelling
mistake here which I
corrected myself, the word
being ‘filming’.
In conclusion, there has been a good improvement to the
review and has been made easier for the viewer to read
through. The grammar and spellings have also been
improved and has made this work a lot better than the
first draft.