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The fish story

by Tudor Girba on Jun 06, 2008

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Jacopo Malnati , Software Engineer at North Italy - South Switzerland It's difficult to say a lot without saying too much.
I was there when you presented the fish story in Lugano at USI, and I have to admit that the presentation you gave has been a real awakening call. Since then, it's a pleasure to notice the reaction of my audience each time I give a presentation. Finally they are listening, they are interested and active. Thanks. 3 years ago Reply
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Nancy Poh , Blissfully maidless with kids at Love nest Can apply this in life. There is a Cantonese saying, 'More said, more mistakes'. Thanks for sharing. 3 years ago Reply
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The Fish Story www.tudorgirba.com
Based on The Fish Story, a story with Indian origins from Presentation Zen, the book.
I want to open a fish store. Vijay, a young indian
we sell fresh ﬁsh here
we sell fresh ﬁsh here “we” is not really needed the Father
fresh ﬁsh sold here
fresh ﬁsh sold here “here” is superfluos the Brother
fresh ﬁsh sold
fresh ﬁsh sold it’s clear that the fish is sold. the Sister
fresh ﬁsh
fresh ﬁsh everyone can see that the fish is fresh. the Neighbor
ﬁsh
ﬁsh everyone can identify the fish by the smell. Vijay himself
I still think fresh should be stated. and Me
fresh
Omit needless words.
Tudor Gîrba www.tudorgirba.com creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0/