A2Photography Assessment:Unit 3 Coursework Portfolio
TEACHER(S):Mr Holden/Ms Carey
Patrick you have produced some very interesting work that has strong contextual content.
However there needs to be more the development of your idea to fade memories
represented by a distorted part of the image is good but where are these pictures and the
interviews. I think it would be good if you could record the interviews as the sound of
someone voice alongside the image gives the viewer a more personal connection to the
picture.I would also like to see more Artist research you simply cannot have enough of this to
back up your own visual practise. You must make sure that all artists you look at have at
least one image analysed in detail and then connected to your own visual practise.
STUDENT: Patrick Ryan
Interviews and new woven images need to be put up on weebly
Voice recordings of the people you are interviewing
Puzzle photograph experiment with different ways of presenting an image
Refine portrait image made up of different pictures
Artist analysis on all displayed artists
This is a working at grade at present you don’t not have a clearly defined final piece so this is reflected
in your mark
A particular slide catching your eye?
Clipping is a handy way to collect important slides you want to go back to later.